TPO40 writing practice by Stella

Independent Writing

2017-09-30 08:24:54 UTC

Decades ago, parents usually rewarded their children with candy or ice-cream for high grades they got at school. However, everything is changing now. An increasing number of parents choose to offer their children cash for their high mark, and I think it's really a good idea.
First, the cash can become a kind of motivation for students to work harder. Take myself as an example. I was fascinated with a British TV show that was called during my junior year. Nevertheless, the whole series was really expensive. My mom told me that if I got a high score in the final exam, she would give me 300 yuan for everything I liked. After I heard that, I concentrated in every class and did the review every night. Consequently, I did a good job at this test. Also I bought the blu-ray DVD successfully.

Independent Writing

2017-09-30 08:34:56 UTC

In the past, when children got high marks, parents just rewarded them with some chocolates or ice-cream. Recently, more and more parents reward their children money for get high mark at school. I cannot agree more with the idea because of the following reasons.
First of all, cash reward can work as an efficient incentive to study.
Take my friend John as an example. He usually got low score and he felt study was very boring. His whole interest in video games, his mom tried all methods to change. One day, his mom told him that he can get cash if he gets high mark at school. He can use money to buy the online weapons; gaming equipment and get high ranking. So he start to work hard and try to get money from his mom. Finally, John raise the ranking in games and he felt motivate to study in order to get money.

Independent Writing

2017-09-30 08:42:30 UTC

Nowadays, the phenomenon that parents reward children money for getting each high score in school has caused public concern. Some people think it will warp children attitude of study. However, in my opinion, l think it is a good idea to encourage children to learn with higher efficiency.

First, children are usually getting great pressures from school as well as their parents. If children receive money from therir parents for their performance at school, It should provide them with motivation to persvere in hard working. For example, when l was in primary school, my parents always gave me one hundred yuan, if l got a good mark. When l reveced the money, l felt l was motivated to input a lot of time to study with higher efficiency. Also, it might be eaier for me to keep on better school performance for a long time.

Independent Writing

2017-09-30 08:43:36 UTC

Nowadays, there are many kinds of ways to encourage students study harder. Some parents use some delicious food. Some parents buy something that their children like. Some parents maybe more directly than other people. They use money to encourage their children. Many people are against this behavior, but I think it is really a good way to encourage children work harder.

First, money could make children more motived in study. Most children always get interested in money, so if we use money to encourage students, they could also turn their attention to their own study. For example, my friend John had no interested in the study. His parents used many ways to encourage him, even try to take him on a trip to Brazil, but all in vain. John was still not interested in studying. Then his grandma gave him some pocket money after he had a good mark. His parents found that John got really interested in money. After that John’s parents give him money after he got a high mark. Then he work harder and harder on study. Now John becomes a top student in our school. All of these cannot leave without the encourage.

stella_sun — 2017-09-30 08:45:36 UTC

Recently ,the phenomenon that more and more parents offer money to their school-age children for each high grade they get in the school exams. In my opinion that is a good way to enough students be hardworking and keep a good grade.

First ,you can taught your child that money is not easy to get, if you want to get money you must work studious and industrious .One of my

2017-09-30 09:25:53 UTC

Nowadays, there are many kinds of ways to encourage students that learn more hard. Some parents use some delicious food. Some parents buy something that their children like. Some parents may more directly than other people. They use money to encourage their children. Many people against with their active. But I think it is really a good way to encourage children work more hard.

First, money could make children more motived on study. Most children always get interested on money. So if we use money to encourage students, they could also turn their attention on their own study. For example, my friend John had no interested in the study. So their parents used many ways to encourage him. Even try to take him travel to Brazil. But all of these were useless. John still not interested in studying. Then his grandma gave him some packet money after he had a good mark. His parents found that John had really interested in money. After that John’s parents give him money after he got a high mark. Then he work harder and harder on study. Now John becomes a top student in our school. All of these cannot leave without the encourage.

2017-09-30 09:25:59 UTC