COLLABORATIVE WRITING (OTEA) by Vishnu Kumar Rai

How do I make a post?

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2023-04-20 13:49:37 UTC

Dear students,

To create a post,
1. Click on the + button at the TOP of each column.
2. Type your GROUP LEADER'S name under "Subject". (No other names allowed)
3. Type your answers in the description box and publish them. AT LEAST ONE PARAGRAPH.
4. Do NOT create posts that are irrelevant to the topic.

Use PAST TENSE and remember NO DIALOGUE.

ABSOLUTELY DO NOT post in this column.

GROUP 1 TASK (Sarah)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-07 17:12:24 UTC

The boy is being chased by a dog. He has stolen the dog's bone as he is mischievous. Now he is in trouble. The dog leaps into the air and sinks its teeth into his shoulder.

Describe:

(A) How he stole the dog's bone

(B) How he reacted when the dog bit him. Also, think about what happened next.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-07 17:13:09 UTC

GROUP 2 TASK (Jia Er)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:15:45 UTC

The boy and his angry dog are chasing a man who has stolen the boy's backpack. They catch up with the robber.

Describe:

(A) How the boy stops the robber. (Clue: his bicycle)

(B) How the dog confronts the robber.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

(WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:20:06 UTC

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vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:26:32 UTC

GROUP 3 TASK (David)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:26:56 UTC

A student finds money on his classroom table. His classmates are shocked. He is accused of stealing the money from a classmate.

Describe:

(A) How he found the money (include his reaction and other important details)

(B) How he reacted, what he did as well as how he felt when his classmates accused him of theft.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:29:33 UTC

GROUP 4 TASK (Yee Kee)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:33:52 UTC

A student made a lot of money selling pokemon cards in school. He was caught red-handed when he counted the money in class.

Describe:

(A) How the classmates reacted to seeing his money and his actions. (They reacted in different ways)

(B) How the boy reacted when the teacher tried to confiscate the money and his pokemon cards.

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:34:00 UTC

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 09:34:23 UTC

GROUP 5 TASK (Matthias)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:31:42 UTC

A student finds money on his classroom table. His classmates are shocked. He is accused of stealing the money from a classmate.

Describe:

(A) How he found the money (include his reaction and other important details)

(B) How he reacted, what he did as well as how he felt when his classmates accused him of theft.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:47:45 UTC

Group 8 Task (Calynn)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:51:54 UTC

A boy has bought his favourite bowl of hot noodles from the school canteen. He is so happy that he has forgotten that it is hot. He sees his friend and runs to meet him. Along the way, he trips and loses his balance.

Describe:

(A) How the boy trips and what happens next.

(B) How the friend helps the boy.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:52:06 UTC

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:52:15 UTC

Group 7 Task (Danissa)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:52:41 UTC

A boy has bought his favourite bowl of noodles from the school canteen. He is very happy. A school bully sees him from a distance and decides to take the bowl of noodles from him.

Describe:

(A) How the boy reacts to the bully.

(B) How the bully reacts to the boy.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

Group 6 Task (Asher)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:53:03 UTC

A boy has bought his favourite bowl of hot noodles from the school canteen. He is so happy that he has forgotten that it is hot. He sees his friend and runs to meet him. Along the way, he trips.

Describe:

(A) How the boy trips and what happens next.

(B) How the friend helps the boy.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

Group 9 Task (Dannah)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:55:48 UTC

Two policemen spot a vegetable thief in the market. They chase the lady who has stolen the vegetables.

Describe

(A) How they arrest the vegetable thief.

(B) How the vegetable thief tried to escape from them (but failed)

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 21:59:46 UTC

Group 10 Task (Matthew)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 22:05:00 UTC

Two policemen spot two men arguing over some vegetables. They come to blows.

Describe

(A) How the policemen stop the men from fighting.

(B) How one of the market vendors helps the policemen.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

WRITE YOUR DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH (S) IN THE NEXT POST IN THIS COLUMN. USE MORE THAN ONE STICKY NOTE TO SHOW MORE THAN ONE PARAGRAPH.

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-15 22:07:53 UTC

GROUP 11 TASK (Ava)

vishnu_kumar_rai — 2024-07-16 00:31:20 UTC

The boy is being chased by a dog. He has stolen the dog's bone as he is mischievous. Now he is in trouble. The dog leaps into the air and sinks its teeth into his shoulder.

Describe:

(A) How he stole the dog's bone

(B) How he reacted when the dog bit him. Also, think about what happened next.

(REMEMBER PAST TENSE + NO DIALOGUE)

Bear in mind the thoughts and emotions of the character you are describing.

A brown haired boy 's mouth was wide agap when he found a stack of $100 bills. All of his classmates gave him a nasty look as they thought he stole their pocket money they were turning red as a tomato.

2024-07-16 05:08:35 UTC

When their teacher showed them the CCTV footage and the students immediately apologise to the boy.

2024-07-16 05:09:23 UTC

A boy has bought his favorite bowl of noodle from the school

canteen. He was over the moon that he has forgotten that it is boiling hot. He saw his friend waving estaticly to him, and runs to meet him . Along the way he trips and fell on the ground, soup and noodles splattered on the floor.

Group 9 ( Dannah )

2024-07-16 05:10:29 UTC

When the policemen spot the vegetable thief, the thief was running eagerly away from them. Soon, the policemen called more peoples to come and they energetically caught up with the thief. They surrounded her and caught her. They brought her to the stall owner that the lady had stollen the vegetable and ask the owner what she want for replacement. After paying the bills, the lady was forgiven by the stall owner and she was nervous and embarrassed for her action. Lastly, the policemen told the lady not to do it again as if it happen again, there would be consequences. From this lesson, the lady ( the thief ) learned not to steal things from other people.

Leong jia er, kacey, clyde

2024-07-16 05:11:31 UTC

A boy was riding his bike after school when a buff man approached him and stole his bag pack in his basket in front of his bike. The buff man ran away like a cheetah. He frantically paddled his bicycle towards the man. There was a stray dog saw the boy's bike in a fast speed and ran towards the boy , when the dog saw the boy it realised that it was his friend after seeing this the dog ran and chased the robber, the robber was afraid of dogs so he fell to the ground and got bitten by the dog with it sharp teeth. The boy got his bag back and the robber was in severe pain in the leg the ambulance came and the robber was treated.

Sarah Lai Ying Xuan

2024-07-16 05:11:32 UTC

A boy called tim was very mischeivious boy , one day , while he was cycling , he saw a fierce looking dog chewing its bone vigorously , tim thought , if i can take that's dog's bone , i can make it chase me to my house and shut the door and look at the dog bark loudly so he quickly took the dog's bone and instantly starting riding his bicycle energeticly but the dog too fast and fiercly and hastily jumped on him as its teeth sank into his flesh . He screamed at the top of his lungs and tried to get the dog away frantically.

2024-07-16 05:11:35 UTC

A cheerful boy named Brock was excitedly skipping to the school canteen to buy his favourite bowl of noodles. As he patiently waited for his bowl of noodles, he felt famished. A bully who was tall and huge named big rock stared daggers at Brock. Abruptly, big rock stanched Brock's noodle and deliberately pushed him. Brock felt Furious, he yelled at big rock as loud as a lion. Just before big rock go wlid, a teacher came just in time to stoo them from fighting.

2024-07-16 05:11:55 UTC

Lots of people gasped and his friend rushed over to help him.

2024-07-16 05:12:12 UTC

One sunny bright day, two broad police officers clad in blue, was patrolling the wet, booming market. Out of the blue, they saw a slim woman wearing a dark blue tunic and jeans carrying a red purse was looking suspiciously at the brightly green vegetables. The police officers squinted under the bright sun to study the woman carefully. Suddenly, the woman grabbed a bunch of vegetables and bolted at break neck speed towards the famous, luxury train station near the market. The police shouted at the woman loudly to demand her to give back the vegetables. However, the woman just turned back at them and sneered. The police man gave chase. Then, the woman did not see where she was going and tripped over her jeans. The policeman caught her and arrested her.

2024-07-16 05:12:28 UTC

Johnny boy was acting suspicious so mrs tan went to check she found a lot of money . As johnny boy saw mrs tan coming to his desk ,he frantically stuffed the money in his bag. He anxiously looked at Mrs Tan . He denied everything ,so Mrs tan started rammaging through his school bag she found a lot of money. As she saw the money and the pokemon cards and told him to meet her outside after class. Their jaw dropped upon seeing the money.

2024-07-16 05:12:40 UTC

All the students excitedly ran out of the classroom soon as the recess bell rang. Drake vigorously took out the money that he made from selling pokemon cards and placed it on the table to count how much he made. Suddenly, a student came into the classroom as he forgot to take his wallet.His jaw dropped, as he saw how much money Drake had caught him red-handed.

Group 8

2024-07-16 05:12:41 UTC

During recess Edger was walking down the canteen hall way when he saw his friends Tom and Jerry sitting at one table together .As he was walking to their table one guy ,Frank, got out of his seat to return his empty plate . Edger was not focused on what was happening until soon they bumped each other .The hot soup flew in to the air and lended all over Frank and Edgers face and shirt ,when Tom and Jerry saw what had happened they sprinted to the scene to help out Frank and Edger. They invited Frank to seat with them .

Theodore wrote this

2024-07-16 05:13:05 UTC

Once recess ended, Edgar ran as fast as he could with a few stacks of money .He had been selling pokemon cards for a few months already. The moment he stepped into the classroom he noticed that the teacher still had not came in. This was a opptunity to count how much money he had made these few months,he placed the stacks of money on his table while he counted the money he looked outside to see whether the teacher was here . "Ahhh!" He screamed the teacher had walked in from the back door and saw the few stacks of money on his table . He tried to deny that he sold pokemon cards but it was useless since his bag was filled with pokemoon cards