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On the one hand, the people who are in the first group must look for alternatives that do not affect the owners because they pay taxes on their properties and it is not fair for them. On the other hand, the second group should have the opportunity to get their own properties given by the government.

2022-03-07 18:09:14 UTC

2022-03-07 18:15:59 UTC

On the one hand, the people who are included in the first group should look for alternatives that do not affect the owners because they are paying taxes on their properties and it is not fair for them. On the other hand, the second group should have the opportunity to get their own properties given by the government policies.

In conclusion, it’s necessary that government policies protect the individual owners (not the banks) and guarantee their rights. In the case of the second group, our politicians should increase the budget for the refugees/social housing.

In conclusion, it is necessary that the government protect the owners (not the banks) and guarantee their rights. Whereas, for the second group, our politicians should increase the budget for social housing.

2022-03-07 18:17:35 UTC

Squatters

amsabdo05 — 2022-03-07 18:19:53 UTC

First, people who are included in this type should look for alternatives.

On one hand, the owners pay taxes on their properties.

On the other hand, the second type should have the opportunity to get their properties given by the government.
In conclusion, it is necessary that government policies protect the small owners (not the banks) and guarantee their rights. In addition, our politics should increase the budget for housing.

Squatters

2022-03-07 18:20:49 UTC

There are 2 types of squatters. People who do not want to pay for living in apartments and people who can not pay for it. In our opinion we can not guarantee that these 2 types of squatters are positive for our community.

Firstly the people who are included in the first type should look for alternatives which are not affected to the owners because they pay taxes on their properties and it is not fair for them. Secondly the second group should have the opportunity to get their own properties given by the government policies.

In conclusion it is necessary that government policies protect the small owners (not the banks) and guarantee their rights, whereas, for the second group, to find a new place to live in, new rules should be introduced. For instance our politicians could find other budgets to protect them.

our politicians should increase the budget for the public's housing.

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