Group B's Feedback to Group A by https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm en-us 2018-05-03 08:20:41 UTC 2018-05-03 08:31:59 UTC hello@padlet.com Daniels 4 points. https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554623 You need to use Harvard refrencing in: the rational, treatment and proposal. To give a Harvard citation, you give the source of the information then the author and date the information was released, contained within brackets.]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554623 4 Points Jan https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554627 consideration given to all of the appropriate content relating to the commission 
Research helps you to justify your points and why you put things into the game. 
Harvard referencing is important as it organises your research and shows that its real. 
Avoid plagiarism as it can cause you to be disqualified.

]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554627 My four points (By Callum): https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554636 - Plagirism is very bad, as it is essentially stealing work
- Harvard referencing helps to avoid plagirism, citations are shorthand references
- The grading criteria can act as a guide to help build revision notes from
- Both primary and secondary research is vital to help back up your points and make them stick out more]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554636 Four necessary points to include in the UNIT 8 exam (By Billy) https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554647 - Harvard referencing is a must if I want to make sure that my work will not be plagiarism accused. 
- Justification sheets need to include the primary and secondary research that I have done
- Include creativity into the treatment and make sure that it relates to the target audience
- When writing the pitch, include persuasive language. One way you can do this is by using rhetorical questions.



]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554647 Group B - Feedback - 4 Points - Conor https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554658 - Harvard Refernce anything you use in your work. This is to avoid Plagiarism.
- Always relate your work to the Brief to show you are going to meet it.
- Be persuasive to sell your Idea to the company.
- RESEARCH! RESEARCH!! RESEARCH!!!]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554658 4 points- Charlotte https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554669 -Use Harvard referencing to avoid plagiarism
- Justification sheets need to link back to your primary and secondary research
-Cite during paragraphs as it's shorter then writing out the Harvard reference
- You use Harvard referencing in the Rational, Treatment and proposal. ]]> 2018-05-03 08:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554669 Ben A https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554675
  • Knowing how many marks each section of the exam is worth allows you to judge how long you should spend on each section.
  • Creating a bibliography allows you to group all your secondary research into one place and reference easily.
  • AVOID PLAGIARISM AT ALL COSTS reference used source material!
  • Primary and secondary research helps you justify your actions and creative choices.
    • ]]>     2018-05-03 08:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554675     The Amazing 4! Points~ By Emmanuelle https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554686 x You have to cite and/or you Harvard reference EVERY single piece of information or image you have not created yourself

    x Continue to do extensive research into your primary research; contributors etc. using a structure of PEER - Point Evidence Explain and Re-evaluate (link it back to the brief and how it can aid your ideas etc.

    x It is vital to understand media production processes from start to finish especially during the proposal stage (e.g. content overview etc.)

    x Always link your work back to the brief


    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554686     Moses https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554731 Harvard reference your sources of secondary data
    Use rhetorical questions, metaphors and similes for persuasion 
    Use the secondary and primary research to justify your points
    Don't forget to link it back to the brief]]>     2018-05-03 08:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554731     Laz https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554772  
    -          Justification sheets must link to background information (primary + secondary research). 

    -          Harvard Reference all online sources to avoid plagiarism. 

    -          Always relate the pitch back to the brief. 

    -          Use quantitative data wherever possible (more factual). 

    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554772     Joe https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554778 Harvard Referencing is used to avoid plagiarism.
    Proposal, Pitch and Rationale all require Harvard Referencing.
    Make Treatment realistic and believable.
     Make sure to relate back to target audience in Proposal. 



    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554778     Four Points - Maybe Joshua Smith https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554780 Consider all aspects of the Rational including-
    -Target audience
    -What the commissioner wants
    -What your research needs to cover
    -The fact that it needs to be a game]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554780     Four Points - Tristan https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554845 - Harvard Referencing simplified:
    Where it's from/ Date of release/ Author of source/ date source was referenced
    It's used to reference a source you use without actually plagiarising the source.

    - Usage of Primary and secondary evidence within unit 8:
    Rationale should contain primary and secondary research, Proposal should contain primary and secondary research, Treatment should contain only primary

    - A bibliography is a table of you can link cites back to, it contains a detailed list of sources and is formatted in a way that can be quickly linked back.

    - A cite is used to link back to your bibliography, without having to reference the whole source immediately. ]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554845     4 points - Nicole https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554851 Harvard reference rational 

    primary/ secondary research

    your proposal - contributors - primary/ secondary

    Treatment - justification sheets.

    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554851     Seb https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554906  
    Use Harvard referencing in your rationale, proposal and treatment.
    * Avoid plagiarism, you might be disqualified
    * Harvard reference everything that you want to use, found on the internet tv etc.
    * Quantitate research is numerical information than can be put to graphs and charts to make it easier to read
    * Qualitive research is more based on the opinion and it's less factual than Quantitate research
    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554906     Gavin https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554920  -Treatment must show understanding of media production processes; storyboards are to make it easy for production team to make what you want, make it clear and labeled
    -Your treatment needs to target the audience, explain how it does this in the justification (music choice during cutscene relatable to target audience?)
    -If you don't make/find a good amount of secondary research, you might struggle as pretty much all the sections require linking back to research
    -treatment is worth 25 marks, make the most of it]]>     2018-05-03 08:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257554920     Megs https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555026
    *Harvard reference all sources
    *use rhetorical questions in the pitch
    *don't copy a source word for word
    *include a bibliography
    ]]>     2018-05-03 08:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555026     Ya Boi Roberto https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555168 4 points - 
    - Create a bibliography to harvard reference information
    - Clearly communicate your style to your audience
    - Use a variety of persuasive techniques in the pitch such as metaphors and rhetorical questions
    - Make sure to heavily reword any information you take from sources]]>     2018-05-03 08:24:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555168     Jem https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555182 4 points to consider for the Unit 8 exam:
    - Ensure you are analysing your ideas further through the Rationale and Pitch and apply persuasive techniques to engage the reader as often as possible.
    - Reflect your creative abilities and technical knowledge throughout the Proposal and Treatment subsequently in order to maintain an informative and developed approach to your digital game ideas.
    - Continuously apply Harvard referencing techniques whenever you can and make sure no plagiarism is accidently qualified, otherwise your work may not become applicable for marking down secondary research.
    -The avoidance of Plagiarism arrives through not replicating work from online sources word for word and alternatively you could request a work check from your teacher, or via applying source material and source images in a right reserved format]]>     2018-05-03 08:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ashley_watson1/lmnpcoor5acm/wish/257555182