STORY & VIS ASSIGNMENT 2 by Fizly

STORY & VIS ASSIGNMENT 2 by Fizly https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st Made with magic en-us 2020-07-23 17:10:47 UTC 2025-11-03 06:46:17 UTC hello@padlet.com fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606122 My phone alarm rings, i immediately woke up, poured my morning coffee into my mug and proceeded to work on my project. I have 2 more days til the project is due. I continued to work on it for hours on end until the day ends.

Finally the last day til the submission is due. 24 hours left. phone alarm rings, woke up and poured my coffee into the cup, sat down and continued to work on the project again. Time is ticking fast, 12 hours left. tensions begin to rise and my pace of working gets quicker and quicker every second.

Last 30 minutes. The work is finally completed. I take a sip from mug but as i placed it down, the mug unfortunately happens to fall down, spilling every piece of paper that was on my desk, ruining the whole of my work.]]> 2020-07-26 07:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606122 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606255 🕑 Precious Time 🕑]]> 2020-07-26 07:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606255 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606370 What if you accidentally destroyed your school assignment that you worked so hard on]]> 2020-07-26 07:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606370 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606415 Who: Me

What: Never be too carefree

When: Present

Where: House

Why: Always be careful around school work]]> 2020-07-26 07:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606415 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606420 Inciting incident: Woke up early to work on project that is due soon

1PP: began to start on the project

Midpoint: Losing time quickly, submission is due soon

2PP: Tension arises protagonist working faster than usual

Climax: Papers that protagonist was suppose to submit gets ruined after accidentally spilling the mug full of coffee]]> 2020-07-26 07:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662606420 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662615285 What would it be like to have your school work destroyed after spending so much time on it right after you finished it]]> 2020-07-26 08:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662615285 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662618233 Protagonist finishes with the work but accidentally spilled his drink onto the work that has to be submitted soon]]> 2020-07-26 08:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/662618233 Shots & Camera angles fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/667398415 1. CU - Phone alarm ringing

2. CU - making of coffee

3. Medium Shot - sitting down and starts working on project

4. OTS - typing of keyboard

5. CU – opening of book and writing on paper

6. POV – of monitor screen

7. Medium CU – Drinking of coffee

8. Screen – text says day ends.

9 – 16. Repeat of 1 – 7 edit is much quicker.

17. Medium Shot – Sip of coffee

18. Medium close up – Puts down coffee, cup spills ruining work on the table

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]]> 2020-08-02 14:08:12 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/667398415 Rough Cut 1 fizly234 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/671982725 No audio yet (WIP)]]> 2020-08-07 01:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/671982725 feedback harmsnatalie46 https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/672007051 i really like the variation in shot types and the initial pacing of the video. i also liked that you sped up the cuts which allowed the video to gain tension, but i think the ending was a little abrupt and anti-climactic, and i think you could have built the suspense a little more. i know the audio hasnt been added but that could probably aid in propelling the story and tension. otherwise, i think the story is clear, short and sweet :)]]> 2020-08-07 01:49:41 UTC https://padlet.com/fizly234/lmixuss4bz7493st/wish/672007051