Animal Farm Outer Circle Padlet 7th Period by Beth Paul

Comment Levi

137867_10 — 2025-05-09 19:32:47 UTC

I thought he did a good job answering his own question and he used good descriptive words and clearly stated evidence from the text to back up his statement.

174253_5 — 2025-05-09 19:33:01 UTC

I liked how she explained the quote with detail and she also seemed confident and did not stutter.

147765_1 — 2025-05-09 19:33:32 UTC

Used relevant and strong evidence, which helped support the argument a lot!

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18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:33:47 UTC

I loved how Deannah included detail and clearly cited her information and showed how it was relevant to her point.

137838_4 — 2025-05-09 19:34:20 UTC

Deannah did a very nice job organizing her information and explaining her perspective. She kept a notes sheet that she could quickly reference and she used a quote from the book to strengthen her argument.

Comment-Levi Elseroad

137867_10 — 2025-05-09 19:36:15 UTC

He spoke clearly and confidently to state his claim and used solid, sound evidence to support his claim.

Comment on Troy

137890_5 — 2025-05-09 19:36:46 UTC

I liked the way Troy used evidence in his argument to help strengthen it and used good vocabulary choices to demonstrate his point.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:36:46 UTC

The commandment you talked about sounded fair on the surface, but then got twisted at the end to completely change the meaning. This was a good addition to the discussion along with the strong evidence used to support it.

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18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:37:18 UTC

I liked how she answered Troy's question with detail and provided accurate examples. She also explained why her examples were important to the point she was making.

157147_6 — 2025-05-09 19:38:08 UTC

I liked her thorough explanation of how propaganda was used and how it caused the rebellion. She also uses an event in the book to further support her claim.

142253_7 — 2025-05-09 19:38:09 UTC

I like how he explained the different kinds of propaganda used in the novel and clearly answered Charan's question while referring the book.

137838_4 — 2025-05-09 19:38:31 UTC

Roman used a clear quote to support his idea, as well as adds a new perpective to the conversation.

174253_5 — 2025-05-09 19:38:35 UTC

I liked how he clearly stated the citation and the explained his quote in detail.

147765_1 — 2025-05-09 19:38:48 UTC

I love how she used relevant evidence to effectively articulate her thoughts.

18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:39:00 UTC

I love how she used evidence and spoke confidently about her point.

137838_4 — 2025-05-09 19:39:19 UTC

Margot asked a new question to freshen up the conversation, and gives her answer following a quote to deepen the discussion.

147765_1 — 2025-05-09 19:39:57 UTC

I liked how she explained her point and her thought process regarding the question.

157147_6 — 2025-05-09 19:40:02 UTC

I love how she uses a quote from the book to further support her opinion. She also clearly conveyed her thoughts in a straight forward way.

142253_7 — 2025-05-09 19:40:39 UTC

I liked how after she told her question, she provided her own insight on the question and said what she thought the answer was.

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18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:40:49 UTC

Loved how she introduced a new idea and shared her opinion on the topic. She spoke confidently and used examples from the text to strengthen her argument.

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18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:41:49 UTC

I liked how she used descriptive language and examples from the text to show her opinion on the topic.

174253_5 — 2025-05-09 19:41:53 UTC

I like how she used clear examples and parts from the book that showed why the pigs wanted to be comrades with the humans.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:42:20 UTC

The act of sending pigeons to other farms is a good example of how the animals try to spread the idea of rebellion. This shows how propaganda was used not only to maintain authority, but also for expansion. This showed your understanding for how propaganda is being used in the book and added to the discussion.

157147_6 — 2025-05-09 19:43:09 UTC

I love how she explains how manipulation tactics were used to cause the animals to follow their rule.

Comment-Levi Elseroad

137867_10 — 2025-05-09 19:43:20 UTC

She used thoughtful evidence and referenced the research she had collected to clearly answer the question she had asked.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:44:36 UTC

I liked her use of vocabulary. She also did a good job of explaining the selfishness of the pigs. This example really helped to explain the character of the pigs and how they thought.

137890_5 — 2025-05-09 19:46:15 UTC

He did a very good job at speaking clearly with very little filler words, as well as asking a well thought-out question.

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18050415 — 2025-05-09 19:48:23 UTC

I loved how she introduced a new idea and explained it well. She also posed two different answers she thought were correct.

137890_5 — 2025-05-09 19:48:28 UTC

She used textual evidence and cited where she found it, showing that she is very prepared and a very competent speaker.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:48:44 UTC

His add on to Roman talked about how snowball would begin testing others fairly, in order to gain more power, however end up overusing that power. This was a good add on which demonstrated his agreement to a previous statement.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:50:22 UTC

Her question of "what do you think the farm would be like if snowball remained on the farm?" was one to think about which sparked conversation in the seminar. She also had clear answer which was expressed well.

174253_5 — 2025-05-09 19:50:24 UTC

I liked how she used textual evidence to backup the answer to her question.

157147_6 — 2025-05-09 19:50:30 UTC

I like how Vincent had a new question, but only asked it after answering Tanishi's question first, making sure her's was not left unanswered.

142253_7 — 2025-05-09 19:51:33 UTC

I liked how he clearly explained the differences and similarities of the two animals' leadership.

147765_1 — 2025-05-09 19:55:08 UTC

I like how Vincent spoke confidently and had her thoughts organized in a streamlined manner.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 19:56:30 UTC

"Why is it important to the animals to change the name of the farm?" This was a well expressed question which requires an understanding of the animals and their emotions on a much deeper level.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 20:02:02 UTC

I liked her comment about how the animals didn't know the difference between being treated right or wrong. This was clearly stated and supported with a direct quote.

137838_4 — 2025-05-09 20:06:03 UTC

Brody asked a question that sparked a lot of conversation that included both perspectives.

Comment-Levi Elseroad

137867_10 — 2025-05-09 20:06:58 UTC

I like how he confidently stated his answer to a question and gave evidence to back up his reasoning.

1401442 — 2025-05-09 20:08:46 UTC

The confident words plus strong evidence made for a well spoken statement.

157147_6 — 2025-05-09 20:09:17 UTC

I like how he clearly stated his points and ideas.