1-1 말하기 수행평가 by

1-1 말하기 수행평가 by https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a 1-3 말하기 수행 과정 평가용 en-us 2021-05-31 04:28:49 UTC 2025-10-31 20:30:59 UTC hello@padlet.com 1. 초안 발표 및 자기평가 eeirnie https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1572696343 자신의 speech draft를 적고 핸드폰으로 speech 초안(연습) 영상을 찍어 하단의 카메라 모양을 눌러 업로드 합니다. 업로드 후, 자신의 영상을 보고 자기평가 checklist에 따라 평가하여 댓글로 작성합니다.
e.g.,
글 제목: 1901 홍길동 speech draft
내용: speech draft 작성 + 영상 업로드
댓글: 1. 5 2. 4 3. 4]]> 2021-05-31 04:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1572696343 2. peer feedback eeirnie https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1572696344 친구들이 올린 speech 초안(연습) 영상을 보고 checklist의 항목에 따라 feedback을 작성합니다.
e.g.,
글 제목: 1901 홍길동
내용:
feedback for 1902
1. O
2. O
3. X
4. speech outline 내용 중 introduction 부분이 시선을 끌기에 부족하다
5. 마지막 문장을 힘주어 읽는다면 더욱 전달력이 높은 speech가 될 것 같다.]]> 2021-05-31 04:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1572696344 1115 오소영 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578343679 Hello, I'm So-young. Today, I will introduce a way to improve my health.
I think I have insufficient physical strength. So I determined to exercise hard to solve this problem. Also, I think exercise’s life is very, very important because it makes my body healthy.
So, first platform is use ‘Run Day’ app. To introduce this app, it is help running. It is improved me running ability. In addition, this app make me to enjoy running. How to this app make me enjoy running? Answer is interesting function. This function is music+map while running. So I use this app, I run every day, 30minutes. Thanks to the Function, Not boring in particular.
Second solution is walking and don’t ride a car.
Walking makes healthy legs. At least, walking around park in 30 minutes is help to grow physical strength. And don’t ride car is good from every aspect.(including, environment and economy.) Don’t ride a car is to help your physical strength.
In conclusion,
For later, exercise is very, very important. So I will try to exercise hard.
So I explain my plan to exercise : every day, 30minutes, I will run to use ‘Run Day’ app. And always, I'm walking a near street. And, At most, I don’t ride a car]]> 2021-06-02 03:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578343679 1113안세현 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578343914 Hi I'm sehyun an
today, I'm going to make a speech about cultural process of china.

look at this pictures.
how do you feel when you see this pictures?

These days, Our cultures are stolen by China. They say our cultures such as kimchi, hanbok, samgyetang and so on are their cultures. So I recall two solution to solve this problem.

First solution is we accept cultural process of china keenly. It is important to realize cultural process of china wrong by oneself.

And second solution is we imprint socially kimchi, hanbok, samgyetang our cultures by opening the site associated with our cultures. we can send our opinion easily and then utilize visual media like to pictures or video. Also, if we do like that, Information of our cultures remains deeply in one's memory.

Like the preceding, we have to pay attention about cultural process of china and try to solve this problem by practicing solutions mentioned above.
thank you for listening my presentation.]]> 2021-06-02 03:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578343914 1119최서연 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578344928 Hi, I'm seoyeon.
And I'm going to give a speech :"To Achieve Diligent School Life"

In this speech, I'll introduce my problem and show some solutions. My problem was doing my homework inefficiently. I often did homework the day before submission. And always in a hurry. So, I thought two solutions ; Writing study planner and Using tasking application.
First, I wrote study planner everyday. So I could check my homeworks in brief. Doing this, I can feel the sense of achievement. This solution is suitable for me.
Second, I chose to use tasking application. Using this app, I can notice my remained tasks. I can also realize when to start my assignments. This app is availabe on appstore! This app makes me do things regularly.
I love these two methods. They help me so much in various aspects. One informs me tasks, and the other tells me the time when to start works. Due to these two things, I can plan my schedules and save much time. I recommend you to use these means. I'm sure you can be diligent, too!]]> 2021-06-02 03:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578344928 1101강솔비 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578345647 Hello, I'm solbi. Do you sleep well these days? If you don't , listen to me for a second.
'Insomnia' is the inability to sleep at night. I've been troubled by insomnia lately. If I feel nervous or think something before sleeping, I can't sleep well. So I thought two solutions to this problem and I'd like to introduce them to you.
The first way to introduce, it is to warm up your body. Specifically, drinking warm milk or taking a foot bath is a good idea .This kind of behavior will calm you down. So you feel much better than before you did and you can be one step closer to sleeping.
Second way is listening to sleep inducing music . You can use some mobile apps to listen to music such as YouTube, Melon, Genie etc... If you search for the calm music there, you can see many videos and music in an instant. You just need to choose one of them. How easy !
I have talked about two ways, but above all, it is most important to let go of your worries and get a good night's sleep for a better tomorrow. I hope my speaking helped you who are suffering from insomnia.
Thank you for you attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578345647 1107 김은수 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578345810 Solution plan about discomfort

Hello, I'm Kimeunsu. Today I will explain my problem and three solutions about problem.
I have a problem to study Korean.
Because when i study Korean, there are many Chinese character in Korean text. So i found three solution plans.
First, i participate Korean afterschool class. Then i will save time, because i can study Korean, without taking my own's time.
Second, through "Study Chinese character" understand and study Chinese character. So they checked that i searched Chinese character get in my cell phone vocabularly, then i can look again and take a self test.
Finally, i get Chinese character private lesson at night, then i can study Chinese character more correctly.
When i have a problem to study Korean, i will participate Korean afterschool class, use "Study Chinese character" and get Chinese character private lesson. If you have problems in your life, i suggest you find your solution plans to improve your life.]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578345810 1112 신지민 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346292 Hello, I'm jimin
'The solutions to reduce plastics.'
This is that today I want to tell you
We use too much plastic. This can lead to global warming. We can resolve this problems with two solutions.
First, we pay price as we use plastic trash. We can expect to reduce a disposable product. Because the more we use it, the more we have to pay. This is applied at food waste. And then this is effective to reduce waste.
Second, we can confer a benefit on store that don't use a disposable product in the delivery. For example, we make so many delivery that we emit a lot of plastics. So, we use food delivery app such as Yogiyo, People of Delivery, we can guide to disuse disposable products.
We have two solution that we can utilize. Pay as much as you spend and give benefits to not using disposable products. We must reduce the plastics for earth and the next generation.
Thank you for your attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346292 1118조은비 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346315 Hi , I,m eunbi
Today I am going to present my problem and my own solution

Recently, I think that my English grade is low. So I decide to make solution.
First solution is finding difficult English grammars. The solution has two steps. One is finding difficult English grammars that is difficult to me, the other is making plan about study of difficult English grammar. This solution is systematic and definite.
Second solution is memorizing English words. This solution can use Mobile Apps whose name is Class Card. Do you know Class Card? It is good for memorizing English words. Also it is simple and convenient.
Today I present two solutions . One is finding difficult English grammar, the other is memorizing Engilsh words
So I will use these solutions, Then I will make effect to get good English grade
Thank you for your attention]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346315 1114 오나연 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346618 Do you enjoy drinking coffee or caffeine drinks? I also like to drink them when I need to study till dawn. But, did you know that only a cup of coffee does excess our recommended daily intake of caffeine? Ministry of Food and Drug Safety shows that adolescents should take caffeine below 125mg but, they drink more than twice.
Then, this would cause to serious diseases like insomnia, cardiac disorder and more.
So, I would like to suggest two solutions to get out of caffeine problems

First, do not depend on caffeine but do exercise. Of course caffeine could wake you up. However, this is temporary.
Exercising will improve your health and wake you up because of your raised health.
More efficiently, we could use 'Youtube' for your home training.
Now we don't have to go gym hardly.

Second, fix your eating habits and eat healthy. Eat fresh vegetables and fruits. These will help not only raise your health but also make your brain promoted. Also, instead of drinking caffeine, do not eat too much. After eating too much foods until you get full enough, you will feel cozy and warm.
This is one of the reason that you feel sleepy.

Before finishing my speech, I really want to tell you that students are exposed in danger by taking too much caffeine. We should make them a perception about the caffeine's dangerousness and decrease their caffeine dosage.
In conclusion, let's do exercise and fix our eating habits to get out of the serious caffeine problem.

Thank you for listening.]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578346618 1122 전주원 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578347287
Hi I'm juwon my problem is mathtest score low

The solution to the problem

first, The solution is to buy a workbook of a math unit that I don't know well and solve the problems in the workbook periodically

then there will be no forget

Second, using the mobil app Qandn

The process of solving math problems that I don't know explains in detail and It finds problems similar to math problems that I didn't know and if keep solving those math problems, I will memorize the math formula

I will improve my math score using two methods and other applications that I explained

]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:55 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578347287 1117조예승 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578347388 hello. I'm ye seung. How is the condition of your closet? In your view, in our closet, some clothes that we wear it barely is in there. so we felt dissatisfied, we spent money for the clothes. therefore, today I'm going to speech about how to decrease internet shopping mistake.

first, I'd like to introduce this app. This app has functions that we rent clothes what we want to experience wearing for check dress's color, size, quality of dress. In this app, we pick clothes and pay money, and then the clothes that we choose will be delivered at our home for a week. After we experience the clothes, delivery man will be pick up it. Through this app, we can decrease internet shopping mistake.

If we can't use this app, another method is searching review about the clothes that we plan to buy. If you look at the reviewer's physical condition, you can decrease internet shopping mistake.

I introduced two ways that decrease internet shopping mistake. How about practice these methods to decrease internet shopping mistake from today? ]]> 2021-06-02 03:15:58 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578347388 1121최희정 speech draft https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578348380 Hello I'm heejeong
Today, I'll introduce my problem that I find, and solutions. I usually don't drink water because I forget that I drink it, and don't like it. So solving this problem is very important. The solutions are putting a water bottle by me and using '하루한잔' application.

First solution is putting a water bottle by me. Then I drink the more water, because water is by me. Unfortunately Now I don't use water machine in my school, because of corona19. If I bring the water bottle in my school, I can often drink water.
Second solution is using a '하루한잔' application. This application is so useful, because This application can set the amount of water goal and record the amount of water. The recommended intake of water is 2L, so I will set the goal that is 2L. The application is so simple, so If you want to use this application, you can use very easy.

In short, Today I introduce two solutions. One is putting a water bottle by me, the other is using the 하루한잔 application. From now on I'll use these solutions to solve my problem.
How was my speech today? Before I speech, I was so nervous but now I'm relief
Thank you for listening to my speech.]]> 2021-06-02 03:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578348380 1104 김서진 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578348478 Hello, my name is seogin. These days I have a problem. It is that waking up on time is difficult for me. When I go to school, I almost miss the bus often. Everyone might have been late for because of not waking up on time. So I will explain you of several methods to solve the problem. First, use the platform "alarmy". We can download it through playstore. It is app that rings alarm at time set up. If you look at this, there will be no difference from just an alarm, but there is something special about this app. It is that alarm music don't turn off until I conduct particular mission that is solving simple math problem or writing some famous saying on the phone or taking some picture etc. Advantage of alamy is that we can get up on time anyhow regardless of some situation.
And second method is to make effort to sleep early. Did you know that the LED light on your smartphone interferes with your sleep? Only by not seeing smart phone before bed, we can sleep as much as we use phone before bed , we can get up easily than usual. Don't lose your sleeping time to your phone.
Starting the day early makes us live healthy. And it helps to spend time efficiently. I introduced two methods to wake up on time. I want everyone not to be late by using these methods. Thank you for your attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578348478 1110 소기쁨 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578349046
Hello, I'm So gi ppeum.
Since I became a high school student, I faced two problems. After becoming a high school student, I have to do many things with my own ability. I think I have two big problems these days. They are getting up lately and studying only specific subjects that I like. So I made solutions that use planner and alarm.
First, to get up early in the morning, I will use 'Alarmi'. It is an application that is based on alarm application. If I set the time when I have to wake up, it rings loudly and I have to do some missions to get it off. There are many missions including taking a picture of specific barcode, shaking my phone many times, solving the puzzles and so on. If I use this application, I think I can get up easily in the morning.
Second, to study all subjects equally, I will make a week planner. When I set a day planner or don't set a planner, I used to study only favorite subjects like science and math. But if I make a week planner, I can set my planner with regular amount of all subjects. I will study with this method for final examination. When I prepared a mid term examination, I studied only what I want to study, so I got very big gap between some subjects. With this experience, I thought I should study every subjects equally.
With these two solutions, I hope to have nice living pattern and good grades. I will go into action these solutions regularly and perfectly.

]]> 2021-06-02 03:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578349046 1102곽다빈 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578349235 Hi, I'm dabin
Nowadays, there are many plastic bottle's label problem in the environment. It takes too long time to decay. So from this year, The Transparent Pet Bottle Discharge system will be execute. We have to detach the labels of bottles. But the labels are hard to detach. So we have to try to make a chemical that can help detach easily, and post on the Instagram about the inconvenience.

First, to take off labels easily, we have to make a chemical. The chemical that can help detach is easy to use. A lot of people will very comfortable because it is easy to detach.
Second, The company that make such a plastic bottles should know our inconvenience. So post on the instagram about the inconvenience. This solution is fast to send the feedback to the company. Then the company will realize our problems, and will make the label that is easy to detach. If they make a labels to detach easy , consumers feel comfortable!

Problems about plastic bottle's label can cause the environmental pollution. So we have to make chemicals, and post inconvenience on the Instagram.

Thank you for your attention]]> 2021-06-02 03:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578349235 1120최혜인 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578350204 Hello, I'm Hye-in
Today I'm going to give a speech on how to solve the problem of floor noise
Day and night don't care continuosly occur floor noise feel inconueniesce.
So solution of a problem floor noise. solution plan the first is floor spread a mat or wear sleeper.
and Second early moning and night vaccum. drill with a big loud action control onself.
Thrid online platform floor noise gauge app install onself measurement standard go ouer
care should be used to solution.
Solution plan floor spread a mat or wear sleeper. advantages is anyone easy do well for. and floor
noise gauge app advantages is onself cautious.
Introduced avobe solution plan practice and onself floor noise to prevent practice caution.]]> 2021-06-02 03:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578350204 1109 서혜인 The ways to protect our dog https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578353274 Hello , I'm hyein . Today , I introduce the ways to protect our dog . Does anyone who have a dog ? .. okay ,these people, please listen to my presentation more carefully today.
Dogs eat anything well . But it is dangerous for dogs to eat human foods . Severely, your dogs can even die. So we need to follow these steps .

First, must be firm . That means that we shouldn't fall for our dog's constant urging . If the food is dangerous for dogs, you can kill your dog . So we also need to be careful. And we can search Internet before giving foods.

Second, use an app named 'dog's life exemplar(멍생보감)'. We need to distinguish what's edible and inedible for dogs. But it would be confusing. But in this app , if we search foods, it tells us whether it's okay. Also we can communicate with other owners of a dog . So it's easy to get many informations about dogs.

By using these methods, we can prolong the lives of our dogs. There should not be situations when dogs are sick because of our carelessness. So we always need to make effort for our dogs.
I hope everyone attention these methods . Thank you for listening my presentation.🤍

]]> 2021-06-02 03:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578353274 1106 김은서 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578355628 Hi, I'm eunseo. And I'm going to talk about the ways to enhancing my school test score.
On May, I got a first test in high school, and I got shocked about myself. The score was markedly low than I thought, so I decided to increase my school grade. I plan some several ways to achieve it.
First, I will augment pure studying time. A lot of people advise not to rely on someone, and study myself. Therefore, I will use the application named '열품타'. '열품타' is abbreviation of '열정을 품은 타이머', meaning of timer with passion. It is application that measure how much time do I study. When using this app, you can't use your phone in purpose of playing, so you can focus on your study.
Second, I will concentrate on the school class. Not getting attention at class and do another thing can be fatal on my score. Therefore, when I feel sleepy, I will drink coffee or go to standing desk not to fall asleep during class.
Finally, I will preview and review the contents of class. If I preview the class, I can feel interest in class because I know all about it. Thus if I review the class, I already study it twice times, so I will understand it perfectly.
Through fulfilling augment my pure studying time, concentrating on the class, previewing and reviewing the contents of class, I am expecting to get better score than the first test that I got.
Thank you for your attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578355628 1105김소윤 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578356985 Hello, I'm soyoon
Are there any of you who can't wake up easily?
I remember not waking up until a few days ago, drooling.
So I would like to introduce two ways to solve my late-waking problems today!
The problem in my life is waking up late.
Let me introduce two ways to solve the problem.
First is stretching
Second is using a mobile app.
The good thing about stretching is that.
Stretching for 5 to 10 minutes as soon as you open your eyes can wake your body and head up. So you can have a fresher morning.
I will explain the mobile app, the name of the mobile app is Shakeit Alarm.
There are five types of mission, shaking, screaming, touching, one-touching and random.
It has peculiarity that is setting one of the mission you want and turning of the alarm.
I think of advantage of this app is to keep the alarm on until the mission is completed.
So I'd like to recommend these two methods to people wake a late.
Especially I recommend using a app Shakeit alarm.
Then you could be early riser.
Until the day when the lives of people with the same problems as me become diligent! Let's all cheer up.

]]> 2021-06-02 03:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578356985 1111송예슬 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578363434 Motivation to Exercise

Hello everyone. I'm yesuel.
I'll begin a presentation from now on.

How many hours do you exercise a day?
Recently, we can't meet because Covid 19.
We stay many time in our home and can't exercise togather.
So our intention will decline.
If the intention declines, our health will decline.
There are two resolutions to solve the problems.
First, draw up an exercise diary and follow the diary.
For example, study is efficient and comfortable when you draw up a study diary, too.
So if you follow this method, you can exercise regularly and know how many exercise today.
As a result, you can redeem your shortcomings.
Second is to make an app likes ' 열품타 '.
It means Timer with Passion.
This app takes the study time and comfront with other friends.
It gives passion to many students to study hard.
If we make exercise app like this, we can confront exercise with other friends and get some passion to exercise.
In conclusion, we need motivation to exercise.
And we have two solution to have passion to exercise.
First is draw up the exercise diary.
Second is make a app likes ' 열품타 '.
If you follow these methods, you can have passion to exercise and a healthier body.
Be sure to try these methodes!

That concludes the presentation.
Thank you for your attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:23:45 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578363434 1103 곽서희 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578366224 Hello everyone. I'm Seohee. COVID-19 has caused a number of social problems recently. Among the various problems, I will deal with the learning gap caused by COVID-19. Online classes have limitations. It's hard to tell if every student is following the class well, so the gap between students' learning is wide. What do you think we should do? There are ways to study with EBS and set up learning plans and goals by identifying my learning capabilities.
First, find a part that you didn't understand during online class. And, use EBS! You can understand it by watching EBS's lecture. EBS has a lot of free lectures and quality of instruction is great. So, it helps you to study by yourself.
Second, identify your learning capability and set up learning plans and goals. The most important thing is to practice these! Because importance of self-directed learning is emphasized these days, it is important to form a habit that you study by yourself.
We talked about ways that can reduce the learning gap. If you try these ways well, you can reduce the learning gap caused by COVID-19. That's all for my speech. Thank you for your attention.]]> 2021-06-02 03:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578366224 1108 서하늘 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578373226 Hello l’m Ha nul today choosing a job.

I have to decide on a job. I don’t know what kind of job. I’m going to do. you have to choose your job. First solution plan. I don’t know to do in the future. So I can’t decide a job. Pick a job and choose it. Second solution plan. I’m not interested in job and I need to search various jobs. It’s good that there’s less choices for sure. Third solution plan. Find a job using the careerNet. I want to know a job I didn’t know. It’s a simple choice. If it’s hard to choose a job, use the careerNet. If you use the careerNet, you can choose your job quickly.

]]> 2021-06-02 03:28:34 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578373226 1116이다솔 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578425619 Hi. i'm dasol. I'm going to talk about the Untact Classes. Because of covid-19 crysis, we have an untact class. but the untact class has a problem. It's that you can't concentrate well. how should I solve this problem?
First of all, students have to try by themselves. students should set an alarm to prepare for sleep. also, students need to prepare and review. we should try not to be lazy. and enjoy the advantages of untact classes. more question chance and so on.

However, there is a limit to individual efforts. so teachers use the platform. zoom, form, class card, etc. If you use them, teachers can check the concentration of students. also, students can study interestingly. thanks to improvements in technology, we can have better untact classes. Thank you for listening to my speech.

]]> 2021-06-02 03:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1578425619 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1579125856 2021-06-02 10:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1579125856 1118조은비 https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1579337547 2021-06-02 12:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/eeirnie/ljfuiel5htn7n72a/wish/1579337547