REASON 1:

A -> B-> C

REASON 2:

A -> B-> C

SOLUTION 1

A -> B

SOLUTION 2:

A -> B

TÔ ĐẬM MAIN IDEA

Reason 2: Increasing exposure to idealized lifestyles and constant comparison with others through social media → lower self -esteem

Solution 1: raise awareness of mental health among young people → introduce mental health programs in schools and workplaces → instill in people sense of gratefulness towards their overall - being → give more inspiration and motivation

Solution 2: Implement guidelines to reduce the negative impact of social media → ...........create more trends that encourage and convey meaningful messages of lives via social media and install time-limited apps to reduce digital detox

There are several reasons for TV channels to broadcast men's sports shows more than women's one. Firstly, audiences tend to watch men's sports shows more than women's. This might be because the history of sports doesn't have women there in the first place, so people have taken the habit of watching men playing sports. Another reason for this tendency is also gender discrimination, which makes viewers believe that men's sports are more interesting and worth watching than women's. Therefore, the channels would attract more audiences by having more sports shows with male players.

In order to address this issue, the governments should take a few steps. One might be to promote women's sports shows more than men's through social media. By doing this, audiences will have more exposure to women's sports shows every time they surf the Internet, and gradually they will be likely to notice these shows more.

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

REASON 1:

the habit of scrolling through social media where other people share their fancy moments of life -> compare themselves with their peers on social media -> set unrealistic goals -> dissatisfy with their life when they cannot achieve those goals -> the rise in mental health problems

REASON 2:

the urge to earn as much money as they can to be safe in a fast-changing world -> extend work time -> break work-life balance -> have little time to unwind

SOLUTION 1

schools should put mental health education in their curriculum -> early exposure to ways to protect mental health when surfing social media for young people.

SOLUTION 2

Companies should train their employees productive ways to enhance their knowledge and skills to be safe in a fast-changing world without extending working hours ->

SPECIFY SOLUTIONS

REASON 2: Influencers and celebrities often present an idealized version of life, sometimes through sponsored content that promotes products or lifestyles as essential for happiness or success. -> the influence of social media and digital platforms has created unrealistic expectations ⇨ leading to feelings of inadequacy and unhappiness.

SOLUTION 1: Promote a shift in societal values and place greater emphasis on experiences and relationships .

For example, Educational institutions and families should prioritize teaching young people about the importance of gratitude and empathy to -> cultivate a more positive outlook on life

SOLUTION 2: governments and relevant authorities should regulate the advertising industry to minimize the influence of materialistic messages on young minds. -> help mitigate the negative impact of consumerism on happiness.

Labour market’s rapid change -Having a well-paid position - need to overwork, spending time at workplace than other activities and building relationships beside working environment –feeling of alienation and isolation  

Reason 2 : lack of meaning and purpose

Due to financial burden or peer pressure that lead many young people choose the job that is well-paied but not actually love – stress from realization of disconnection with their own self - struggle to finding goals, meaningful work and personal goals  

Solution 1:  communities help and meaningful relaitonships from the office

companies can help to foster the working environments where young people can form deep, meaningful relationships, create communitiy-building activities, social clubs, and support groups - help address feelings of isolation.

Solution 2 early education about skills and knowledge for real-life situation

When shools take action and bring programmes about jobs or basic skills and knowledge that could help students, who later become young workforce, nagaviate these unavoidable obstacles and the feeling of ambiguity about themselves may be addressed

• lead to the isolation and reduction of face-to-face interactions --> young individuals might lose the depth and meaningful relationships in reality

• social media --> the widespread of materialism and consumerism --> pressure on the young to keep up with others

--> the sense of inadequacy and dissatisfaction with their life.

Reason 2: The work-life unbalance

• .................-> stress + long-hours working time --> cannot have time to unwind and relax --> detrimental for mental-wellbeing

Solu 1: promoting the shift on perspective about life values

-->.............WHO??? ... more positive share on social platforms --> guide the youth focus on the meaningful experience and relationship over the material possession

Solu 2: companies alter the working schedule - SPECIFY

--> promoting more physical activities + introduce mental assissment for employees

Viết Reason 1 và main idea 1 của body 2 (bao gồm cả topic sentence)

In order to address this issues, TV channels should balance programming by using public awareness campaigns. In fact, when highlighting the achievments and stories of females atheles can help to shift the public’s attention and generate interest to watch more women’s sports. Thus, this could make the viewership become more balance and less dispairity. -----OFF-TOPIC

Body 2: I believe that television coverage should not be biased toward men's sports, and that female athletes should be given equal opportunity. If men's sports programs continue to receive considerably more coverage than their female counterparts, gender inequality, which is already a major issue in many parts of the world, may worsen.----> DECLINING NUMBER OF FEMALE ATHLETES

However, I think that these TV networks should have a gender equitable approach in sports coverage. Due to making contributions to gender equality in sports, these channels should provide women’s sports shows as frequently as men to encourage fair representation and opportunities for female athletes. ---> MOTIVATION FOR FEMALE ATHLETES

To begin with, there are many reasons for the dominance of men over women’s sports programs on TV. FIRSTLY, Due to a large proportion of male sports viewers, TV channels tend to produce sports programs for men to maximize their ratings and profits. Take football as an example. When entering a coffee shop, it is easy to catch groups of men having discussions about a recent men’s football match, while women show greater preference for shopping or lifestyle channels.

Body 2: On the other hand, I am of the opinion that it is necessary for TV channels to provide equal coverage for both genders. First, it creates gender equality in society and increases the rate of women’s sports participation. In fact, every time women go out on the field, they give it their all knowing that their best will likely go unnoticed.

PHÁT TRIỂN gender equality + INCREASE THE RATE Therefore, just like men, female athletes should receive full recognition for their effort.

Although men's sports have that advantage, but i do support giving equal time for women's sports and men's sports. Firstly, we live in a world of equality, and we should respect every woman's effort, despite their disadvantage in sports. That brings more values and may increase the motivation of women's athletes to show fully their abilities