Sultan Athletic Branding Department by https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don Information Ad Comments en-us 2016-11-08 14:59:46 UTC 2025-09-26 09:03:31 UTC hello@padlet.com font is horrib https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111740 2016-11-08 15:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111740 The style sucks https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111798 it should be like a 1 page flyer because thats all that is needed for useful information]]> 2016-11-08 15:05:14 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111798 the question mark should be in the middle https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111809 2016-11-08 15:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111809 Better colour scheme, colours are too dark and neutral https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111850 2016-11-08 15:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111850 Colour scheme  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111927 Colour scheme doesn't stand out]]> 2016-11-08 15:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136111927 get rid of brand, image and identity https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112112 2016-11-08 15:05:55 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112112 less text, more pics https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112245 2016-11-08 15:06:09 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112245 Remove everything on the right and the left https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112254 2016-11-08 15:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112254 make it kinda look like their website https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112374 2016-11-08 15:06:24 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112374 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112456 To much text and could use better font]]> 2016-11-08 15:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112456 the entire right side needs to go  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112531 2016-11-08 15:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112531 stop putting things in  capital letters https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112558 2016-11-08 15:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112558 It is consistent with the website but many of the things are redundant (brand image identity) https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112560 2016-11-08 15:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112560 looks like a trifold, should be more of a poster or different style, something more attractive with less wording https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112604 2016-11-08 15:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112604 <<<<< https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112670 Colours cannot be changed due to the Sultan brand image, although lighter shades can be used]]> 2016-11-08 15:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112670 include phone number tho https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112691 2016-11-08 15:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112691 Website https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112837 If there is a website then it should be on there, nobody has time to call some long number]]> 2016-11-08 15:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112837 change the main brand logo style to a smaller and more simplistic symbol logo instead of words everywhere https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112854 2016-11-08 15:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112854 too many words https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112883 2016-11-08 15:07:33 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112883 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112898 Use only 1-2 fonts throughout the entire ad]]> 2016-11-08 15:07:35 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112898 include "THE LAB" https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112933 2016-11-08 15:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112933 Change layout  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112952 2016-11-08 15:07:43 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136112952 I like the writing at the bottom of the middle page  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113058 For example "Official School and Apparel Design" 

This states a position of the company and I think we should keep that  

]]> 2016-11-08 15:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113058 keep the what is your identity part https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113062 2016-11-08 15:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113062 Keep the contact information https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113164 2016-11-08 15:08:16 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113164 Does not build consumer confidence https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113272 No reviews, past experience, etc.]]> 2016-11-08 15:08:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113272 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113364 Remove the paragraph in the middle: no one will read it, more people will be turned off]]> 2016-11-08 15:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113364 keep the background one colour and the question mark one colour (so it stands out) https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113388 2016-11-08 15:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113388 put the small words on the back if its a brochure https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113510 2016-11-08 15:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113510 There needs to be a flow...idk what to read first  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113536 2016-11-08 15:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113536 take out the question mark  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113598 2016-11-08 15:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113598 i like the motto https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113654 "look like a champion, play like a champion"]]> 2016-11-08 15:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113654 Logo needs to stand out more, and it doesn't need to be there twice https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113658 2016-11-08 15:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113658 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113819 Put website instead of phone number, because it is easier to remember]]> 2016-11-08 15:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113819 What type of template is this even https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113989 2016-11-08 15:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136113989 Lets make it a double sided pamphlet instead of this ugly thing that no one wants to read - three sides look horrible https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114015 2016-11-08 15:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114015 Font should be same size for most of the ad https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114122 2016-11-08 15:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114122 the logo should not be on there twice on the same panel  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114140 2016-11-08 15:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114140 make it poster style https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114142 2016-11-08 15:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114142 get a new logo first then talk about the ad https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114267 2016-11-08 15:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114267 Advertise what they're actually trying to sell https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114327 2016-11-08 15:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114327 Get rid of excess or unnecessary info https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114489 2016-11-08 15:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114489 start from scratch https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114502 2016-11-08 15:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136114502 put the site on the thing https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115186 2016-11-08 15:12:40 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115186 contact info should be smaller and should go under the paragraph in the middle panel  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115252 2016-11-08 15:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115252 Website over # every time. https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115254 2016-11-08 15:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115254 "want to learn more, contact us today at!" sounds more like a cheesy commercial https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115280 2016-11-08 15:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115280 Sultan athletics should also stand out https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115626 2016-11-08 15:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115626 keep it short and sweet  to keep consumer's attention https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115913 2016-11-08 15:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136115913 <<<<true https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116132 2016-11-08 15:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116132 include the 20 years in business thing, seems professional https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116426 2016-11-08 15:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116426 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116548 2016-11-08 15:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116548 the lab https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116585 -delete the right side
too much info that is not needed
-organization of sub title

]]> 2016-11-08 15:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116585 ykmf https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116751 2016-11-08 15:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136116751 make it similar to the format of an email advertisement https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117377 2016-11-08 15:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117377 https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117461  ]]> 2016-11-08 15:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117461 Catchphrase or motto  https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117609 2016-11-08 15:18:28 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136117609 Should show examples of work already done and feedback provided from the customers. https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136118874 2016-11-08 15:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136118874 My Version of the Layout mihranmashhud https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136739695 Here is a quick layout I made. The grey rectangles are placeholders for different school mascots]]> 2016-11-10 14:44:24 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136739695 The Sultan Athletic Logo mihranmashhud https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136741357 Here is a vector version of the Sultan Athletic Logo]]> 2016-11-10 14:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/leon_a_barrett/libny1ls4don/wish/136741357