https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo Welcome to my seventh grade writing feed back. Don’t forget to leave positive feedback. en-us 2020-12-23 14:12:03 UTC 2021-04-11 01:38:41 UTC hello@padlet.com iFJG https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1057059351 Star:There was a lot of characterization which gave off their emotions.
Star:The story has a lot of parts with interesting parts.
Wish: Put in more sentences than questions ]]> 2021-01-05 19:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1057059351 26ltittanegro https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1347649883 Wish: i would watch having repeating sentences in the first paragraph. 
Star:  you showed a lot of description and characterization toward the characters which help us understand there emotions.
Star: I also really like that if there was a question asked you didn’t just seem to be asking a question it seemed as if you were trying to investigate.]]> 2021-03-24 12:52:13 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1347649883 26jsouza https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403362516 I agree with your argument. You are right basketball is a very popular and physically demanding sport which is why our school should have it as an option for recess. Basketball does promote exercise to a lot of kids.]]> 2021-04-11 01:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403362516 26jsouza https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403363576 You have some really strong and attention grabbing points in your essay. They really help get the reader to understand your idea. They also help the reader pay more attention to what your are trying to say.]]> 2021-04-11 01:37:25 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403363576 26jsouza https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403364397 I think the quotes in your essay would be better if they had more data and more information in them. It felt like the quotes were a little too short. I think they would make the essay better if the quotes were longer and had more data in them]]> 2021-04-11 01:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/26eorellano/lhtroxt7jop8c5fo/wish/1403364397