My exquisite stream by Sena Özdemir https://padlet.com/sena_ozdemir1/lgv5439uqimd Made with a lightning strike of genius en-us 2018-10-21 18:23:31 UTC 2026-01-19 18:57:31 UTC hello@padlet.com People generally influece each other. When we aren’t sure what to do, we observe other people’s actions. For example, we upload an app then we search thinghs about it. This searching can include other people’s votes and comments. We can say that the Snapchat is the good example of this.Famous people and our friends use this app, so we see it from them then start using. This is the begining of trend. In fact, trends have always been the case and always been the care of the way with interact with each other. sena_ozdemir1 https://padlet.com/sena_ozdemir1/lgv5439uqimd/wish/295212161 2018-10-21 18:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sena_ozdemir1/lgv5439uqimd/wish/295212161 senaevren https://padlet.com/sena_ozdemir1/lgv5439uqimd/wish/295392933 To begin with, thanks for the lovely topic.
Topic sentence: you can give less background info and put topic sentence as second sentence in the paragraph. You need to introduce snapchat as a popular application.
Supporting sentences: You should ask why it is popular and explain it rather than defining the terms. You need to give more examples.
Concluding sentence: There is no concluding sentence. Please try to summarize the paragraph, you can rewrite the topic sentence by focusing on its 'popular' notion.

Some mistakes:
influence
beginning
???trends have always gotten people's attentions??? 


All in all, this is your first trial and it looks nice. Only try to adhere the rules for how to write a descriptive paragraph and it will be better. This paragraph looks like a definition paragraph rather than descriptive. You must start with a topic sentence and end with a concluding sentence by focusing on 'Snapchat' and its 'popular' notion. Go on writing! :)]]> 2018-10-22 12:00:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sena_ozdemir1/lgv5439uqimd/wish/295392933