My writings in English by LIVIA MAYARA MENDES MELO ROCHA https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y Digital portfolio created by Lívia Mayara for the subject LTI03021 - Redação em Língua Inglesa I. en-us 2021-04-21 23:21:31 UTC 2021-04-26 17:01:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/1151555770/5e4789a5cd373788d73ff35b3d3e05cc/_________________________Yandere___Titan_Eren_Yeager_x_Reader.jpg Introduction liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444890853 This padlet aims to show the written activities carried out in the English Language Writing discipline I. We will explore textual productions during the course, presenting the before and after of the corrections made and the learnings.

 

]]> 2021-04-21 23:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444890853 Writing Activity 1 liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444918951 Write a small descriptive text answering these questions.

1- When and how did you learn to write?
2- Have you got any memorable experiences with the process of writing?

Before the corrections 

1. When and how did you learn to write?   
My process of learning Portuguese was very slow but the teachers at the time were patient and even made learning fun. As for learning the English language, it is being complicated, since the knowledge I have about the English language is all based on the dialogues present in the series and films, so writing becomes very challenging.
 
2. Have you got any memorable experiences with the processo of writing? No, I don't have any memorable writing stories and when I started writing in English it was for the reason that no one would understand what was written.
 
After the corrections

1. When and how did you learn to write?
My process of learning Portuguese was very slow but the teachers at the time
were patient and even made learning fun. Learning the English language is being complicated, since the knowledge I have about the
English language is all based on the dialogues present in the series and films, so
writing becomes very challenging.
2. Have you got any memorable experiences with the processo of writing?
No, I don't have any memorable writing stories and when I started writing in
English it was for the reason that no one would understand what was written.
]]> 2021-04-21 23:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444918951 Activity 1: Have you ever written for any of those reasons? Tell us about it. liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444945655   
Read the text '33 Inspiring Reasons Why You Should Write More' and answer the question 'Have you ever written for any of those reasons? Which one? (say the number of the reason and explain your choice).

14. Write because you only just decided yesterday that it might be neat to try stringing a few pretty words together.

I don't like to write what I think or something like that. I enjoy writing quotes from books, movies, series, etc. These quotes can seem like many random beautiful words together, but to me, they have a special meaning.]]> 2021-04-22 00:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444945655 Writing 2: Academic and Professional email liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444949937 You have the opportunity to do part of your masters abroad, but you need to:1. Get in touch with a professor2. Present yourself academically (use your Biodata or part of it)3. Ask if he is available to advise you4. Find out academic and language proficiency requirements.
Write an email to that professor.
(Please refer to the attached file (academic and professional e-mail as a reference).

Before the corrections

Good night, Mr. Smith!

Sorry to bother you. My name is Lívia Mayara Mendes Melo Rocha, I completed the English Literature course in 2021 at the State University of Paraíba - UEPB, Campus III. I would like to know if you would have the availability to be my advisor in my master's research that I am developing a study on the book “The Picture of Dorian Gray”. I would like to know what the requirements are for having the pleasure of your guidance.
Sincerely.

After the corrections 

Dear Professor, Dr. Smith!

Sorry to bother you. My name is Lívia Mayara Mendes Melo Rocha, I am certified teacher of English Literature from the State University of Paraíba - UEPB, Campus III. I would like to ask your availability to be my advisor in my master’s research. I am developing a study on the book “The Picture of Dorian Gray”. Please let me know the requirements for this program. 

Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Lívia Mayara

]]> 2021-04-22 00:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444949937 Top Ten Writing Rules From Famous WritersWatch the video 'Top Ten Writing Rules From Famous Writers' and choose one rule to comment on.Example: Rule #10. Write a draft. Then let it rest (by Stephen King): I think it is a nice idea to give a draft to a friend who can review it for you and advise you because feedback leads to improvement. liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444991262
Rule #9. Read a lot. (by Stephen King): I think that reading a lot helps to develop a vocabulary and not only that it is also very pleasant to read.]]> 2021-04-22 00:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444991262 What have I learned this bimester? liviarocha3 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444998664 I have been learning many rules that great writers use to write a good text, and one of the rules that caught my attention was the rule that I wrote about, and I learned to write a formal email. These activities were important to me because I could practice my writing and create insights that I did not have before corrections.]]> 2021-04-22 00:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1444998664 joaocandido5 https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1455216924 2021-04-24 21:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/liviarocha3/lfodyfa39pi2dv7y/wish/1455216924