https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf What strengths and weaknesses did you identify in your peers’ writing? After looking at your peer reviews, what are your personal strengths and weaknesses? en-us 2019-01-08 15:25:16 UTC 2026-01-30 08:45:06 UTC hello@padlet.com courtneygalloway https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/318427628 Some strengths and weaknesses that I identified are; my person ]]> 2019-01-08 17:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/318427628 haydenjasperuy https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320439782 My partner is weak on having all the requirements for MLA and needs some work on the conclusions of paragraphs. Some strengths are having many quotes, grammar was good, and didn't use any personal pronouns in the essay.]]> 2019-01-14 18:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320439782 kristianabatton https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320863615 My Partner is a very good writer but sometimes what she would write wouldn't make sense. Also, her paper wasn't in MLA 8 format. I am not very good with grammar, but I am very good with MLA 8 formatting.]]> 2019-01-15 16:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320863615 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320865360 Some weaknesses in my partners writing was grammar and spelling errors. She was very good at checking that her work was in the MLA 8 format. ]]> 2019-01-15 16:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320865360 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320870350 My partner (going by their rough draft), is weak at following the proper MLA 8 format (such as the date, proper appealing title [not just NHD Research Paper], and the words "NHD Research Paper" at the top lined up with name, teach,etc.. Also, their name and teacher's name & period are not in the top left hand corner but are centered at the top.) There was only one and a half paragraphs in the rough draft sent to me resulting in there not being much information for me to go by to observe further weaknesses and strengths. One strength that I could tell from the 1 and 1/2 paragraphs is that there is good grammar and punctuation.]]> 2019-01-15 17:00:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320870350 imanibellamy1 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320872857 Some strengths i found in my partners' writing was information about their subject and that they could relate facts to triumph and tragedy. Some weaknesses I found in my partners' writing were that there was a significant lack of quotes and some grammatical issues such as run-on sentences. My paper had some run-on sentences, too. I did well on grammar and transitioning, though.]]> 2019-01-15 17:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/320872857 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/321338946 Weaknesses- my partner did not use MLA format. Also, the points in the paragraph were not stated in the introduction paragraph. There weren't any quotes nor sources, but there wasn't in mine either. Plus, there were a couple capitalization errors, but mostly everything was great. Strengths- my partner did a good job with information. They told me the tragedy and the triumph with giving me some background information as well. They did a good job with spelling and grammars. Plus, they had a good amount of paragraphs.]]> 2019-01-16 17:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/321338946 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323545900 Weaknesses - my partner did not cite using MLA formatting. Also, they did not have enough quotes in each paragraph. 
Strengths - My partner was able to create a good title, and was able to tell me how all of their sources connected with one another.]]> 2019-01-23 16:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323545900 courtneygalloway https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323546600 Weaknesses- My partner does not have a paper. NO MLA format, No paragraphs. No strengths]]> 2019-01-23 16:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323546600 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547434 Weakness- My partner did not have a complete paper. He also did not use MLA format when he was writing his paper. He could have finished writing his paper and put it in MLA format. My partner also did not use quotations. 
Strengths- My partner does not have many strengths other then he did provide a triumph and tragedy but did not include a lot of information to go with it.]]> 2019-01-23 16:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547434 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547629 Some of the strengths my partner was that he had good spelling and punctuation and did not use personal pronouns. Some weaknesses are overusing some words and the lack of quotations.

]]> 2019-01-23 16:44:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547629 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547678 2019-01-23 16:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547678 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547776 The main weaknesses in my partner's writing was lack of sources and citations and also a lack of transition works. besides that, their paper was in MLA format and their thesis statement and main point was clearly stated in their paper. There was a lot of information, just no sources cited.]]> 2019-01-23 16:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323547776 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323548853 The strengths that I saw were that he had good organization and grammar.He also had good start sentences in paragraphs.However he lacked on some his own ideas and conclusion.He also didn't give that much evidence and finally he didn't really have a good thesis statement.]]> 2019-01-23 16:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323548853 katherinedoria https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323551573 The strengths I saw were good punctuation, good grammar, great use of citations, lots of information,and had the right amount of paragraphs. They did not have anything in MLA formating besides the text being black and the sources.]]> 2019-01-23 16:51:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323551573 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323554251 2019-01-23 16:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323554251 loving_zaina23 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323582593 Strengths that my partner had was good grammar, the right amount of paragraphs needed, and some things were in the right format.
Some weaknesses that my partner had was her paper wasn't in MLA format, there were a couple of capitalization errors, and her points weren't very clear.]]> 2019-01-23 17:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323582593 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323583186 weaknesses- My partner didnt have a conclusion paragraph, they also didnt have a works cited page or quotes in each paragraph 

strengths- my partner did a good job in putting her paper in MlA form. she also did a good job formating her paragraphs]]> 2019-01-23 17:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323583186 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323586368 I found that my partner has STRENGTHS in my partner's writing was their grammar and punctuation.  
Their WEAKNESSES were spelling and structuring, they'd have some inconsistencies in their transitions or none at all, the last thing was that their paper wasn't in MLA format.]]> 2019-01-23 17:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323586368 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323597429 Weakness- Orgiazation throughout paper. It also was not in MLA format

Strength- She explained the tragedy in detail. And had good in text citations]]> 2019-01-23 18:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323597429 rainagerald https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323606342 Weaknesses: My partner needs some more detail and more length to her essay

Strength: She had good MLA citations and format

]]> 2019-01-23 18:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323606342 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323612222 weakness~ MlA format, relating the subtopics back to the theis]]> 2019-01-23 18:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323612222 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323983698
weakness- the paper wasn't in mla format]]> 2019-01-24 15:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323983698 cameronfaircloth https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323983999 Weakness-Wasn't in MLA format and needed more detail.

Strengths-They had good grammar and punctiation]]> 2019-01-24 16:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323983999 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323987606 My partner had many strengths but they also had a few weaknesses which is okay because now they can try and fix it!

Weaknesses-
Grammar and spelling was off a little bit as well as punctuation.


Strengths-
Amazing writing was in MLA format and did really good over all. They also Had many paragraphs and got their point across to me about what they were writing about.

]]> 2019-01-24 16:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323987606 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323994796 Weaknesses: My partner wasn't very clear about her argument, her paper was very short.

Strengths: I saw very good grammar and punctuation in my partner's paper.]]> 2019-01-24 16:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323994796 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323995230
weakness: not in mla format, somewhat got off topic.

strength(s): got the point across, used correct punctuation,spelling and capitalization]]> 2019-01-24 16:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/323995230 liabennett https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324045709 Weakness- not in mla format. 

Strength(s)- very good grammar, overall good explaining each part. ]]> 2019-01-24 17:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324045709 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046525 strengths= MLA format, good grammar

weakness= not enough quotes]]> 2019-01-24 17:41:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046525 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046608 Strength- the strengths my partner had  was that his was in MLA format, and had a work cited page.

Weakness- thesis statement wasn't in sequential order, and lacked some information]]> 2019-01-24 17:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046608 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046744 weaknesses: it was not in mla format
strengths: there were perfectly cited sources and there were very good points made ]]> 2019-01-24 17:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324046744 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324047741 strengths- overall good explanations of topic, and was able to understand. There was good grammar and usage of quotes.

weaknesses- the paper wasn't in complete MLA format.]]> 2019-01-24 17:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324047741 rileymclain https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324047989 Strengths:
- Very clearly stated the tragedy and triumph of the topic.
- Included a good amount of quotes
- Began with a well written thesis.

Weaknesses:
- Quotes were not correctly cited as in-text citations.
-  Not written in MLA format
- Grammar/Pronouns/Prepositions

]]> 2019-01-24 17:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324047989 emelyvargasaguirre https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324050695 Weakness:
-No works cited page
-Not enough sentences
-No quotes
-Did not follow MLA format

Stregnth:
-Good body paragraphs
-Alot of information


]]> 2019-01-24 17:49:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324050695 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324054125 weaknesses~ it was not in MLA format 

Strength~ She explained her topic very well and all sources supported and proved her thesis ]]> 2019-01-24 17:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324054125 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324058486 Weakness- My partner essay wasn't very explaining and their article needed more information and citings. 

Strength- The essay was in MLA format]]> 2019-01-24 18:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324058486 https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324072778 Weaknesses - I didn't review a paper
Strengths - I didn't do a paper]]> 2019-01-24 18:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ssmith009/lfcump7ixxyf/wish/324072778