https://padlet.com/27alourenco/lf3jvjpjfausczab Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 21:45:35 UTC 2021-06-18 13:58:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27jestevez https://padlet.com/27alourenco/lf3jvjpjfausczab/wish/1074894473 2 stars and a wish: one great strength you had with your story is how you really made us see through the eyes of a younger you. another great thing in your piece was how really gave powerful message of family and to never take them for granted. I just wished you could have elaborated about now taking family for granted a little more in the actual situation. Overall, It was a great writing piece!]]> 2021-01-11 16:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/27alourenco/lf3jvjpjfausczab/wish/1074894473 27liannotta https://padlet.com/27alourenco/lf3jvjpjfausczab/wish/1614360737 Hi Andrew! One thing that I really liked and enjoyed about your writing piece is the history of the ghosts and how they became them. I think it’s cool how you mentioned the Dylan monitors the first floor and the other two monitor the second. Another thing that I noticed you did well when writing your creative writing piece is that you made sure you described everything. You described exactly how Dylan looked and what he did to become a hallway ghost. One thing that I think you could’ve done better is that you didn’t say anywhere in the story what the ghosts do to you if they catch you. That’s just something that I wish I knew, but your piece was very creative.]]> 2021-06-18 13:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27alourenco/lf3jvjpjfausczab/wish/1614360737