This group explained their ideas very carefully and memorized most of their script, showing they knew what they were talking about. They also provided a visual demonstration on how their robot functioned and showed the parts of the robot.

However, near the end this group wrote out paragraphs about some of their successes and possible improvements. Instead of holding the recording device on the paragraphs, they could've read them out loud.

Both students provided good information and advice. They sounded very confident about their robot and what to do. They could have showed their robot and pointed out what parts did what and what they could have worked on but overall they had a very good presentation.

Charlene didn't stutter or use any fillers. Provided plenty of information. Jessalyn was clear on her explanation. The music sort of covers their voices. Otherwise, the video was great.

In the end, they showed a video of their robot retrieving the rock successfully and returning to the base. I think it was a pretty good idea because the video showed how the robot functioned and how it did on the mission.

Jadalyn had explained the design of their robot with detail and showed the parts of the robot that were added such as the shovel which was had an impressive layout. She also explained their trials specifically such as the errors and why it happened. Though she hadn´t clarified their exact plan, she was very informative and specific. Steven could have answered

Their video was very well made and both students looked like they knew what they were talking about. However, they could have used louder voices so that the audience can hear them better

Lily & Aalyiah

The speakers had very good volume and had expressions on their faces. They also have hand motions. However, they looked at the script too often.

They did well on answering the questions, but one thing they need to improve is to answer all the questions. They answered it well, but not all of them.

They did really well explaining what happened during the mission that I almost felt like I was there. I understood how the robot function and what their original plan was. However, I would like to hear Jowi speak more because I saw him making faces. I would like to talk so he at least understands what the robot was doing.

They did pretty well on answering the questions and explain how the robot wors but there is only one person explains the

Good: They recorded everything they did (building and mission day)

Bad: they did not answer all of the questions.

They explained what went wrong during the mission and gave good information. The camera was stable and they had good transitions.

Didn't stutter at all

transitions were akward and weak

Well: They explained everything pretty well, and gave good examples to their answers

Need to work on: They didn't seem too focused, and got distracted at times.

Good: I think they knew what they were talking about and they had good answers to the questions; however, the poor presentation heavily reduced the effectiveness of the video.

Bad: The presentation was poor. I could not understand every word that they said, and they could have been more engaging. Through their lack of coordination I could easily tell that they did not practice much.

Well: They explained it quickly

Need to work on: They had little to no facial expressions.

Bad: They were acting too silly and they kept on moving the camera too much.

Good:Their answers were good and quick.

They answered the questions very well. They show how to make their robot stop in the video.

Good: They answered all the questions effectively.

Needs to Improve: They should not have filmed other people in their video, and didn't talk loud enough for the viewer to hear.

I think that they were very natural throughout the whole video and they answered the questions very well, but it would have been better if the camera wasn't moving so much.

Their video was great, they also provided good information and they never studddered. They also follow the directions. They did very GREAT!!

Their video was very straight forward and gave a lot of information about the robot and mission day. They also had a nice background song playing. They don't need anything to improve on, they did GREAT!!!

Great Editing and Explainning

Also great Music

they did a great job on the model and were successful on there Mars Mission day because they actually got to pick up the rock. They were very helpful when it came to giving advice.

I think overall there project went well, except for the design of the claw. I think it would have been better if they possibly raised the claw so it wouldn't drag across the surface.Over all i think they did great and they gave great advice.

The camera was out of perspective. It just showed their robot, not really their face. They kinda mumbled. But overall, they answered the questions pretty well.

They did very well in their video, but they need to make sure that the music didn't cut out their voices, sometimes it was hard to hear them. Overall they did very well.

They did a good job on explaining all of their designs and ideas clearly. I understood all of their answers and got great advice. Demonstrations with their robot gave a visual idea, making it easier to their concepts also.

They had a demonstration on their building and their 3 attempts on mission day but they didn't really answer all of the questions.