https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude en-us 2022-09-26 15:38:00 UTC 2022-12-12 04:08:27 UTC hello@padlet.com maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408137599 2022-12-04 17:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408137599 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408149637 Monse's Feedback:
Yellow highlighted is for eliminate. 
Blue highlighted is for add.


1. You have to eliminate words (principally "the"). 
2. Add verbs whit "s".
3. Add commas between sentences.
4. Use correct APA (et al in a format).
5. Wrong spaces.
6. Change sentence long for more simple. ]]> 2022-12-04 17:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408149637 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408150718 2022-12-04 17:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2408150718 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2413529491 2022-12-07 21:55:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2413529491 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416543726 2022-12-10 22:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416543726 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416546031 Estaban's Feedback was:
1. Search more synonyms of words.
2. The structure of sentences could do better.
3. Be more specific, it is to understand better.
4.  He help me change words.
5. Take care with APA format. 
6. Improve in your punctuation. ]]> 2022-12-10 22:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416546031 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416628685 2022-12-11 04:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2416628685 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417244848 Monse's Feedback:
1. Search other words
2. Commas incorrect
3. Nouns singular change to plural
4. Eliminate words
5. Wrong spaces
6. Take care about APA with the numbers of the pages]]> 2022-12-12 03:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417244848 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417266914 2022-12-12 04:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417266914 maikelc141 https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417271303 My first essay wasn't easy because I had to search for a lot of information, think of a relevant topic and try to solve a problem. However, I love this type of essay because you can learn something new in your life when you are searching for information.  
 In my second essay, I had a lot of problems thinking about a topic because I had to agree or disagree and try to convince the readers, so it was very challenging. But I loved when I had to improve my knowledge with references and things that I didn't know. Finally, the last essay was very interesting because you could write with your own words and I loved when I had to write what I really think, but the difficulties were choosing a movie, thinking about good movies, films, ext, and trying to make the reader understand your points.]]> 2022-12-12 04:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maikelc141/lapv3jg9zl39fude/wish/2417271303