Using Show-Not-Tell in writing by W Su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs How can we SHOW our readers what the character is feeling instead of telling them? Write a simple paragraph showing their feelings. en-us 2025-04-14 02:05:29 UTC 2025-07-02 15:57:50 UTC hello@padlet.com Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413239829 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


At that moment, Mrs Tay showed the class the library book which had scribbles all over the pages.

]]> 2025-04-17 02:17:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413239829 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413250155 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


After everyone had left the classroom, I approached Mrs Tay.

]]> 2025-04-17 02:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413250155 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413374723 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


Upon finishing my dinner, I experienced a sharp, piercing pain in my abdomen.

]]> 2025-04-17 03:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413374723 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413380207 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


My parents brought me to my favourite restaurant for my birthday.

]]> 2025-04-17 03:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413380207 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413385726 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


Crash! The porcelain vase shattered into hundreds of pieces.

]]> 2025-04-17 03:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3413385726 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416823819 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


I walked into my bedroom and noticed that my toy car was damaged.

]]> 2025-04-21 01:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416823819 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416887671 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


After my parents told me that our trip to the zoo would be cancelled, I went straight to my room.

]]> 2025-04-21 01:37:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416887671 Ms Su ms_su https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416922531 Write your name in the subtitles and please write at least 3 more sentences after the following sentence starter:


In the classroom, papers were strewn everywhere. I could even see biscuit crumbs and wrappers on the floor.

]]> 2025-04-21 02:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3416922531 group 2 kenn https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424296276 I ate finish my food.suddenly,i let out a loud scream and groaned in pain.i rolled on the floor,trying to ease my bulging stomach.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424296276 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424297777 winced in disgust

]]> 2025-04-25 02:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424297777 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424299989 the girl with long hair in the restaurant was clapping her hands in joy.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:39:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424299989 Melvin https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424300637 The girl is frownjng

the girl is sitting at the table alone

she use her hand to carry her head

]]> 2025-04-25 02:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424300637 Josh https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301393 My parents brought me to my favourite restaurant for my birthday.When I arrived at the restaurant,I was greeted with a birthday cake with a candle on top.I laughed so happily that when my parents took the photo,I was closing my eyes and clapping in joy! It was a memorable night for me.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301393 Jayden goh https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301746 A girl feeling ashamed, her face turning red while someone also noticed it. They were extremely nervous and scared, sweat dripped down their faces as they think they would get in trouble for breaking the vase.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301746 πŸ˜„ https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301749 My face turned bright red as I was ashamed of what I did. Beads of cold sweat trickled down my forehead.I hoped that the floor would collapse and swallow me. My hands turned clammy and my legs wobbled like jelly.





]]> 2025-04-25 02:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424301749 Kanghui https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424303465 His hands were cold and clammy as beads of cold sweat trickled down his forehead.Mrs Tay put her hands on her hips as she displayed the library book which was full of scribbles."who did this?This is outrageous!"She yelled.Everybody winced.His face turned red like a tomato fresh from the farm.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424303465 Kyle https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424303735 My eyes were in glee as it was my birthday and it was celebrated at my favourite restaurant. I had a birthday cake and some sparkling water. I never knew that this wish would come true.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424303735 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424304412 after finishing his food,John felt a sharp pain in his stomach.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424304412 Kallea Lee https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424304605 I stormed into my room flaming with anger and I was filled with rage. I clenched my fists and stomped on the floor. I shouted " Why do you have to be like this!"

]]> 2025-04-25 02:41:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424304605 emmanuel https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306275 ahhhhhhhhh ! my abdomen its so pain! " Jake screamed. groan! Jake moand in pain on the toilet. I laid on my bed groaning in agony

]]> 2025-04-25 02:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306275 RUoqINg https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306395 Today i was supposed hang out with my friends. However, none of them show up.I paniced until tears rolled down of my rosy cheeks, sending me disappointed.i waited till flowers died, but still no sign of my friends...

]]> 2025-04-25 02:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306395 Dong Huaiyu https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306559 My face turned as red as a tomato as I am ashamed. I was in my classroom alone because I did not do my homework. Beads of cold sweat trickled down my forehead. I hoped to dig a hole and hide myself in it when I saw Mrs Tay. My hands became sweaty. My smile was uglier than crying. I wanted to talked, but nothing came out.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:42:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424306559 Shanne goh group (3) https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424307367 Sarah's brother was furious and clenched his fist. He stomped his feet and I was filled with rage.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:42:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424307367 It is HONG RUI :]πŸ₯:MAstErPIEce https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424308345 πŸ₯Big Jim wolfed down his food like he did not eat for years,after eating his stomach rounded up like a balloon, he held his stomach in pain as he overate -Hong Rui

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]]> 2025-04-25 02:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424308345 Isaac Er(6) https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424308745 My parents brought me to my favourite restaurant for my birthday. I jumped with joy as I came out of home. When I arrived at the restaurant, I sat down on the cushioned chair while I smiled. I held my fist in happiness as I closed my eyes to make a wish. There was a fizzy lemonade on the table as well.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424308745 🌹🌺 Meredith 🌺🌹 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309099 At that moment,Mrs Tay showed the class the library book which had scribbles all over the pages. A drop of cold sweat formed on Tom's forehead.He muttered prayer under his breath "Please don't let her know it's me."His body shook uncontrollably and his legs wobbled like jelly. He would flinch at every word Mrs Tay said.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:43:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309099 There is a sick boy https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309112 2025-04-25 02:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309112 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309829 the boy behind the broken toy car is filled with anger.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424309829 XUECHENGWXYZ wxc12345 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311310 1)It was my Birthday,my parent bring me to a buffet restaurant, smile on my face,I won't forget this memory ever!

2) "Today is my favourite day ever!", Sally said.It was my birthday, my family bring me to restaurant to celebrate.

3) Today is my birthday, smile up my chin.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311310 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311313 "Crash"the pieces of pocelan shattered on the ground and our eyes widened in shock.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311313 kayven https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311796 I saw my broken Nintendo switch and was as mad as a dinosaur. i clenched my fists and stormed out of the room. i barged into my sisters room and kicked her chair.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424311796 Aevan https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424312621 After my parents told me that our trip to the zoo was cancelled,I went straight to the room.Tears trickled down my cheek in saddness as I sat on my table.I rested my head on my hand,thinking:Why was the trip cancelled?Is there other places to go?I finaly decided to take a nap and I groaned before falling into a very,very,very,deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424312621 Phoebe(24) 25 April 2025 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424312753 Crash! The beautiful vase dropped on to the floor,I stared at the vase I made with all my effort was broken.My heart pounded as tears welled down my cheeks.I was desperate.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424312753 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424314313 the girl with long hair is very sad.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424314313 poh Kang https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424314958 I screamed in delight as I blew the candles of my birthday cake in a famous restraunt.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424314958 Lydia https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424315499 today was my birthday, athough i sent out intavtions to the whole class nobody came. As time passed i became more and more worried that there was nobody coming.My parents saw me gloomy and decided to call

our neighbors to come."Ding,Dong" the doobell rang i excitedly opened the door to see my neighbors i welcome them in and gave them i slice of cake.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424315499 Jay :)(: lim_zi_yi_elyssa https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424315593 I was as angry as a dinosaur when I saw my favourite toy broke in my room. :)(: (do not ask why I am happy. :)(: ) pls like :)

]]> 2025-04-25 02:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424315593 Giselle https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424317800 In my classroom ,there were piece of paper on the floor .I also saw wrappers and it smell bad in the classroom. I held my breath , pinched my nose in disgust and walked out of the classroom.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424317800 Hongle https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424318794 dingus smells the smelly rubbish from trash just like a raccon

]]> 2025-04-25 02:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424318794 Ayden wong https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424319428 James was sneezing papers started flowing around .He started rubbing his nose.His face turned pale.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424319428 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424320415 the boy standing in the middle of the classroom is very disgusted.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424320415 thea: broke a vase https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424321471 Oh no! Jacob and Alicia broke the school glass vase! Their face turned bright red with embarrassment. Alicia's face was as red as a tomato Jacob glanced at Alicia basically asking what they should do. Alicia looked back at Jacob and looked at him while squatting down.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424321471 chih-ling https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424321774 In the end I welled up tears and told her that I was sick and cannot go for the learning journey.Ms Su just smiled and told me that everything will be fine.She called my mum to pick me up.When my mother came her face was red with anger and her voice was like rocks resting on my shoulders.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424321774 Jovie https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322359 When Mrs Tan walked in the classroom Johnathan started biting his nails, shivering and squeezing both of his hands together right above his table.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322359 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322430 the boy sitting on the chair is shaking nervously.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322430 Alyssa https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322658 With a trembling voice, I said ''S......S......sorry Ms Tay, I...... I ........f......forgot to do my homework." my hands turned cold and clammy. Beads of cold sweat trickled down my forehead. I burst into tears.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424322658 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424324090 the boy is very sad.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:51:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424324090 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424325008 When John saw the book in her hands,he started shaking his legs and a cold sweat formed on john's face.When the teacher showed the class the book with scribbles all over the book's page.Everytime the teacher spoke,John would shiver,worried that she would find out it was him.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424325008 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328272 the boy beside the girl is shaking with fear.


]]> 2025-04-25 02:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328272 ariel https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328938 beads of preparation tickled down my forehead. just then we heard and creck sound , oh no mother had came home!

]]> 2025-04-25 02:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328938 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328981 f VS e

]]> 2025-04-25 02:53:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424328981 ong poh kang @@@ https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424329015 after eating a humongous dinner, Tom groaned in pain as he rushed to the toilet.

"Ahhhh!", he screamed.

]]> 2025-04-25 02:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424329015 Yong zhi https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424331513 I pinched my nose and ran out of the classroom after I saw the dirty classroom

]]> 2025-04-25 02:54:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424331513 πŸ§‹t.o.p(lebelle)πŸ§‹πŸ΄ https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424334949 The classroom was filled with small pieces of paper with trash on the floor .I was pinching my nose and held my breath as I walked out of the class room

]]> 2025-04-25 02:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424334949 https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424353032 I stormed out of the room in rage as I clench my fist in anger.I was furious as I had already warned my brother like a million times not to to touch my toy car.

]]> 2025-04-25 03:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ms_su/lafqaxz9geu9levs/wish/3424353032