work by Ashton Pike https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n en-us 2024-05-16 18:56:16 UTC 2024-05-16 20:52:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d5.png pikeash04 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996420232 What are your opinions on this piece.


Does the text appear clear?


Can you see what shape they're meant to be?


Add anything you believe is relevant


]]> 2024-05-16 18:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996420232 pikeash04 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996421019 What are your opinions on this piece.


Does the text appear clearer?


Does the shading of the shape make it clearer as to what it is?


Add anything you believe is relevant.

]]> 2024-05-16 18:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996421019 pikeash04 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996421729 What are your opinions on this piece.


Does the shape appear clearer?


Does this impact how clear the text is?


Add anything you believe to be relevant.



]]> 2024-05-16 18:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996421729 1. looks cool the most clear 2. yes 3.yes 4. no answer https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996434998 John

]]> 2024-05-16 19:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996434998 1. Harder to see 2. no 3. harder to see 4. Make it more noticeable for people with bad eyesight's like mine https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996436469 John

]]> 2024-05-16 19:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996436469 1. The hardest to see 2. Not very clear 3. Can hardly read it 4. More noticeable for bad eyesight's people https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996437874 John

]]> 2024-05-16 19:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996437874 [1] Text is clear but handwriting itself not that easy to read [2] Shape is clear but appeared like a scarf for a while instead of a hand [3] The way the fire effect is covering the eyes doesnt seem very smooth. https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996439757 Adrian

]]> 2024-05-16 19:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996439757 Text not really clear but shape is clear. The toning helps the shape but makes the text harder to read. Fire effect better that in pic 1 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996441020 Adrian

]]> 2024-05-16 19:22:05 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996441020 Text seems to small, the outline of the hand makes it look like a scarf to me https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996441548 Adrian

]]> 2024-05-16 19:22:51 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996441548 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996448849 1) i am unsure as to what the piece is about but its aesthetically pleasing 👍


2) i struggle to read the text as it is small and harder over the black top. Would be a better big print if all of the meaning is in the writing :)


3) i am not sure what shape they are meant to be but the writing looks like a neck scarf


4) i like how you put in the detail of avoiding putting the writing over the necklace and it shows how much care was put into it :)!

]]> 2024-05-16 19:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996448849 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996450707 1) i prefer the stronger fire on the eyes :)

2) its alot harder to read, with the previous photo i could make out some words, but with this one i cant make out any


3) i see the hand now



]]> 2024-05-16 19:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996450707 Bogos Binted l https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996453372

  • I like the imagery going on, the caps text really gives the hand form and works well to define the shape of the fire in the model's eyes.

    1. The text is clear, I would say the clearest out of the three because of its larger font size and big letters.

    2. definitely.

    3. The photo has a lot of lights and dark colours that allow the text to pop out more.

    ]]>     2024-05-16 19:38:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996453372     https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996455372 1) the hand lines look strange as the fingers are abit crooked and the outline seems to straight if that makes sense?


    2) was easier to read in the first :)


    3) the hand looks abit strangely shaped


    4) the smaller flame makes the light reflection in the glasses more visable, though it is impressive how you got a very small light reflection in the studio :)

    ]]>     2024-05-16 19:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996455372     Bogos Binted ll https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996459905

  • A bit weaker of a design, the flames don't have as much gusto as before, not giving off as much of a British punk vibe as before.

  • The more script-like font and smaller size make it harder to read.

  • quite clear its a hand but doesn't hit as hard with its rounder outline

  • It has a mellower feel than the first one

    • ]]>     2024-05-16 19:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996459905     Bogos Binted lll https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996464335

  • The outline of the hand is a bit janky compared to the second one. also, the flame of this and the second one are on less of the foreground which I'm not sure I'm a fan of

  • it's got a clear shape though the shape of the fingers aren't looking too good.

  • The lack of shading does make the text slightly clearer though the font isn't doing its legibility any justice.

  • would be my second favourite if the outline was better.

    • ]]>     2024-05-16 19:53:41 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996464335     Love the flames and typography, clearest out of them all to read can slightly see the what shape the words are gunna be. I wld merge words from this with 3 to show the outline better 327159_2 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996503130 2024-05-16 20:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996503130 Don't like the small text too hard to read and not too keep on the way you made it clearer to see the hand 327159_2 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996503746 2024-05-16 20:51:34 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996503746 Better than 2 but just use same size text as 1 but use the outline u have in this one for hand on 1 and it'll be much better 327159_2 https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996504220 2024-05-16 20:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pikeash04/la5ttzx9isu09m4n/wish/2996504220