https://padlet.com/26edesteur/l934d0jbb2qr Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 18:36:46 UTC 2025-11-14 14:18:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 26rbuehler https://padlet.com/26edesteur/l934d0jbb2qr/wish/421775788 I really liked how you described everything in detail in your piece.  It gave the reader a picture in their mind about what was happening at that time.  I also like how you slowed down your piece so the reader knew what was happening.  One thing I think you can improve on is showing the reader what’s happening not tell them.]]> 2019-12-09 18:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/26edesteur/l934d0jbb2qr/wish/421775788