https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons Look at your essays draft 2 and 3, and add your run-on sentences to this padelt. Make sure to add the sentence before and the sentences that follows so we can understand what you were trying to say. Do not fix it today. We will work on these in class. Make sure to put your name (submitted by__________) at the bottom of your post. en-us 2017-10-17 18:37:57 UTC 2017-11-06 21:39:46 UTC hello@padlet.com 743340058 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/198917038 2 draft:
1. It's like you go travel by taking a train, the rails from beginning to the destination are always the same, changeless or even never change, or even views between these places can be changed because of the season or other factors, but the final destinations are always the same.

2.But if you use your imagination, then you can get many differences, many different processes and results, you'll be the only one who get into the " road" , find this " secret place", you are the " discover".

3.I think that maybe I am a creative thinker, I found that I  have more creative thinking than others.

4. These let me open mind, its seems like I'm think out of the box, I breaking old rules.

5.After I grown up, when I'm writing, I will use some interesting words to replace some similar words to make the essay funnier and may become more attracting and also will add some crazy thinking on my essay.

3 draft:
1.I found that be creative is really good for me =, it help me to improve myself, to broad my horizon.

2.Being a creative thinker can take me to anywhere I want, and I can take anything I want, it like I'm swimming in the "sea".    
(submit by Edith)

]]> 2017-10-20 01:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/198917038 caiyuyang1997 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199311187 Final Draft
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Creativity must bring some change to us. Therefore, life is not constant, and life needs creativity because society needs developing all the time, otherwise, this world will always same and people even can't get enough food.
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Actually, I have decided to be a photographer. Being a creative photographer can impel me to think deeply and jump out of the box, this will help me to create unparalleled photos.
(submitted by Henry)]]> 2017-10-22 01:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199311187 weitingy https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199421680 Second Draft
1. As the power of creativity far outweighs that of the basic knowledge with regard t o successful inventions that dramatically change the world.

(submitted by Kristen)]]> 2017-10-23 01:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199421680 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199433253 second and third Draft
1.We can find out that creativity help us do everything in our life and do not think that you are not a creative person because you have not found your creativity yet.

(submitted by Zihao)]]> 2017-10-23 03:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199433253 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199435566 draft 2 and 3
1.Actually, logic is important in both science and living life, it can help us to obey the laws and avoid from mistakes.

submitted by Neil]]> 2017-10-23 03:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/199435566 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/runons/wish/200636614 1.Last year I designed my own T-shirt and established a clothing brand called Raffle Demons, I remember that day I have plenty of ideas about clothing patterns and pictures through my brain.

2. We did not care about the cost of T-shirt, we just wanted to fashionable and suitable clothes in order to attract more customers buy our T-shirt.

3.From that day,we determined to creative our brand, we managed to find the industry that had a superior material for clothing.

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