Suspense Writing by Mrs Rees https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense Our shared ideas en-us 2017-11-19 21:05:33 UTC 2026-01-07 19:35:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Pictureland.png Group 1 - Coch MrsRees22 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529004 What are the features of suspense writing?

similes  metaphors ellipsis 

D - scary broken haunted mansion.
massive scary house.   the ghoast said   
A - 
S - 
H - 
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D -  
A - 
S - "Help anyone Help please"screaming at the top of his lugs as he panting out of breath and rocks start crumbling down "hello hello anyone there"
H - 
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D - the water boils like a kettle ,The dazzling sun stremed threw the sea
A - The ship smashing against the powerful waves , the water was smashing against the dark petrifying ship 
S -The man screamed at the top of his lungs, "man over board!!!"save your self" "every man for himself"screaming for his life ,
H - 
? / ... - ]]> 2017-11-19 21:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529052 Group 4 - Glas 2 MrsRees22 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529053 What are the features of suspense writing? short snappy sentences ellipsis rhetorical questions 

D -  cold,damp,wet,lonley, unhygenic,
A - walks to get the trains attention he/she slips and could gets hit by the train....
S - 
H - 
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D - An old abandoned space shuttle.
A - a man got stranded on an Island
S -  O my golly gosh that' s a long way up
H - my character is feeling ill
? / ... -  I'm about to fall What should I do ? ... ]]> 2017-11-19 21:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529058 Group 6 - Porffor 1 MrsRees22 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529065 What are the features of suspense writing?short and snappy sentences, rhetorical Questions, similes and metaphors, . yooooo

D - description= freezing, gigantic, the air is ice, 
A - action= a man is walking and he slips on the ice and a snow storm is coming in
S - speech=It's cold . I'm going to slip. 
H - how your character is feeling
? / ... - cliff hanger/ rhetorical questions ]]> 2017-11-19 21:08:53 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/208529065 Group 2 - Melyn 1 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392285 What are the features of suspense writing?
Descriptive word's like adverbs, objectives , openers, conn

D - glinising sun , wavey water , the midnight blue cloud looks like a dragon , 
A -a black figure and he looks like he is stuck on a rockey rumble pontey rock 
S -the black figure ons his mouth giving a primal scream yelling at the top of his lung "Anyone there hello"...


H -
? / ... - will he survive?]]> 2017-11-22 10:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392285 Group 3 - Oren 1 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392592 What are the features of suspense writing?
Ellipis,drop hints,senses, powerful words ,similies, short snappy sentences rhetorical question ,verbs 
D-Water crashed wildly against the ship
destroyed 
  1. cloudy 
gloomy
the sea was  wild as wind
the water boiled in the sea 
stormy dark night 
the wrecked ship 
the tared apart ship from the crashing sea 
  A -the man was fast asleep unaware of the wild waves like tigers 
the deadly ship swung side to side   
S - he yelled help is anyone else  on here with me 
he screamed loudly"man over board"
he quickley ran to grap on a rope
"lets get out of here"  
i feel sea sick 
i feel like i am going to faint  hi

H - 
? / ... - 
]]> 2017-11-22 10:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392592 Group 3 - Oren 2 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392634 What are the features of suspense writing?
ellipsis/ rhetorical questions
drop hints
similies and meterphoers 
use senses
short  snappy  sentences 
powuful verbs 


D -A worlpool of warter  smashed aginst the ship.   
A broken brown barall
A -The warter  leaked into the barall
The ship was rocking furiously from side to side
S -The man yelled loudly at the top of his lungs "who is in the barall?" 

H -He punched the barall twice and kiked it
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D -
A - 
S - 
H - 
? / ... - ]]> 2017-11-22 10:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209392942 Group 4 - Glas 1 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393045 What are the features of suspense writing? senses  rhetorical question similes and metaphors short snappy sentences powerful verbs ellipsis.

D -wet,cold,damp.
A -Waiting for a train.
S - "Hello anybody thier."
H -
? / ... - ]]> 2017-11-22 10:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393045 Group 4 - Glas 3 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393280 What are the features of suspense writing?ellipsis senses

D -its cold and damp doomed
A -the lady might walk into the middle of the train track .
S -she might say i miss home i want to go home .
H -she might be feeling like she might want to go to the other side.
? / ... -]]> 2017-11-22 10:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393280 Group 5 - Gwyrdd 1 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393335 What are the features of suspense writing? short sentences, ellipsis, similes and metaphors, rhetorical questions, senses.

D - abandoned, lonly and  spooky 
A - somebody go's to space
S - oh my gosh!
H -
? / ... - 
]]> 2017-11-22 10:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393335 Group 5 - Gwyrdd 2 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393446 What are the features of suspense writing? senses  ,  ellipsis , short sentences  ,  powerful verbs , 
similes and metaphors  , retorical questions.                       
D - its like an abandoned spaceship . The man on the horse looks like he has traveled to the  future.  
A -Unexpectedly the spaceship launches.
S -"wow!" 
H - my charictar is feeling excited
? / ... -how do i get back to my time? ]]> 2017-11-22 10:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393446 Group 6 - Porffor 3 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393586 What are the features of suspense writing?
key features yoo
1-short sentences
2-similes & metaphors
3-ellipsis
4-rhetorical questions
5-senses
6-powerful verbs
D -frosty,slippery road 
A - a creature of darkness  with red glowing eyes waiting for Santa to come
S - once Santa came to the unknown creature leaped out of nowhere Santa  screamed "HEEEEELP"
H - Santa was paralized  in fear as tears dribbled down his face
? / ... -Who knows what will happen]]> 2017-11-22 10:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393586 Group 6 - Porffor 2 https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393777 What are the features of suspense writing? short and snappy sentences, rhetorical Questions, similes and metaphors, .
D -Description, A cold frosty winter day
A - Action, A man is driving down a Icy road and his car flips over 
S - Speech, ahhh I have fliped over
H - How your character feeling, billy is feeling scared because he just fliped over.
? / ... - cliff hanger, Im wondering if he will survive? ]]> 2017-11-22 10:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsRees22/suspense/wish/209393777