Writing Talk by Monica Wilkerson https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7 1st Period en-us 2021-08-12 12:24:36 UTC 2021-08-26 12:23:35 UTC hello@padlet.com Thesis- give your argument that you will prove in body paragraphs brfedock https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862386 2021-08-25 11:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862386 Hook - capture the reader's attention wtsharp https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862482 2021-08-25 11:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862482 times new roman https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862546 2021-08-25 11:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862546 double spaced https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862604 2021-08-25 11:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862604 12 pt font https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862695 2021-08-25 11:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862695 aebeasley1 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862784 Evidence

]]> 2021-08-25 11:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862784 Header with last name and page number https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862898 2021-08-25 11:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862898 explain evidence https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862910 2021-08-25 11:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862910 Transitions https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862924 2021-08-25 11:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862924 jdstewart3 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862942 page numbers]]> 2021-08-25 11:47:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695862942 restate thesis https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863009 2021-08-25 11:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863009 Timed Writing https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863085 Needs to restate thesis]]> 2021-08-25 11:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863085 restate thesis https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863087 2021-08-25 11:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863087 Don't introduce new points https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863103 2021-08-25 11:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863103 quotes https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863104 2021-08-25 11:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863104 Claims aebeasley1 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863106 2021-08-25 11:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863106 call to action https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863146 2021-08-25 11:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863146 Intro sentence, evidence, commentary smodwyer https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863149 2021-08-25 11:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863149 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863214 narrow to broad]]> 2021-08-25 11:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863214 The hook: grabs attention, thesis: tells reader what the paper is about, should only a few sentences. https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863360 2021-08-25 11:48:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863360 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863550 should not be a restatement of the thesis/introduction with different words, accumulation of all ideas said within body paragraphs PLUS intro]]> 2021-08-25 11:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863550 grammarly lol https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863896 2021-08-25 11:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863896 Mr Phillips told me not to summarize, but to philosophize https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863968 2021-08-25 11:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695863968 Powerful diction aebeasley1 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864039 2021-08-25 11:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864039 use sentence variety https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864128 2021-08-25 11:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864128 Connect the end of one paragraph to the beginning of the next odfulk https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864199 2021-08-25 11:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864199 MLA citations https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864226 2021-08-25 11:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864226 Strong Diction, Varying sentence length, expand the point of your essay outside of the box (bigger picture) smodwyer https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864262 2021-08-25 11:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864262 avoid "vague" words such as "like, some, etc. " https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864283 2021-08-25 11:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864283 Connect evidence to commentary https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864285 2021-08-25 11:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864285 connect the hook to the writing https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864370 2021-08-25 11:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864370 Don't Just restate the thesis as your conclusion jktimin https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864408 Use your evidence and reflect upon it instead of copy pasting or paraphrasing your conclusion. It's not always a yes or no answer when trying to solve your thesis. It is merely a reflection of the evidence you put down. Try to expand upon the ideas expressed throughout the paper.]]> 2021-08-25 11:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864408 add detail and textual evidence https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864480 2021-08-25 11:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864480 avoid "that" smodwyer https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864525 2021-08-25 11:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864525 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864538 no weak verbs/to be verbs]]> 2021-08-25 11:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864538 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864807 Typically three of them! They usually open with the subject; they have around two pieces of evidence each and have explanations for how each evidence relates ]]> 2021-08-25 11:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695864807 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865094 If you struggle with writing an introduction that encases everything you want to say, just get something down and go back at the end to edit it.]]> 2021-08-25 11:49:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865094 Introduce and discuss rhetorical situation (should be done throughout) wtsharp https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865182 2021-08-25 11:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865182 Situate in a broader context https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865192 Discuss ideas other than the main few points of the essay]]> 2021-08-25 11:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865192 don't be bland https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865369 2021-08-25 11:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695865369 Header on First Page mwilkerson1 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695868445 Student Name
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Date (Write out month.)]]> 2021-08-25 11:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695868445 Connect evidence/commentary to thesis statement mwilkerson1 https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695873782 2021-08-25 11:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkerson1/l8b0jt20u2et4nl7/wish/1695873782