Why do you dislike them?

·       The Kardashians are driven by materialism and have many times accused of cultural appropriation.

What made them successful?

·       Many factors have contributed to the Kardashians success such as Reality TV shows, strategic marketing and branding, social media presence, and publicity.

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

·       The Kardashians can be more culturally sensitive, they can also promote positive body image, and balance between their privacy and publicity.

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The Kardashians, a well-known family that is linked to luxury and self-promotion, are the perfect example of a superficial and materialistic lifestyle. Their fabricated drama and controversy-fueled rising to popularity represent the worst parts of celebrity society. Their business activities frequently focus on wealth above substance due to the desire for self-indulgence and apparently endless demand for attention.

The Kardashians are a source of irritation for me due to their flashy lifestyles, which they showcase on social media with expensive trips and luxury purchases. Their multi-million dollar homes, stylish clothes, and expensive cars are clear indications of their concentration on material belongings as well as public approval. Furthermore, the companies they represent, and reality show glorify materialism and luxury as markers of success. They've also been under fire for cultural appropriation, particularly for taking parts of Asian and Middle Eastern and Black cultures, including Black hairstyles, without giving credit, which caused outrage and negative reactions.

Many factors have contributed to the Kardashians' success, including reality TV shows, strategic marketing and branding, their significant social media presence, and relentless publicity efforts. They have used these platforms to create a powerful empire, making the most of their popularity and carefully sculpting their image to keep it relevant and profitable as well.

I genuinely hope the Kardashians find a balance between their privacy and public life, become more culturally aware, and embrace positive body image. This change might encourage a more sincere and accountable impact, which could change my opinion of them.

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PLAN:

What do you dislike about them ?

• rude and mean

• Problematic

What made them successful?

• Starting up dramas with other famous influencers and celebrities

• Giving honest reviews on other makeup brands

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

• stop being problematic

• Start being nice and kind to others

Jeffree star

Jeffree Star is a famous American YouTuber, makeup artist, and former singer, he is the owner and the founder of Jeffree Star Cosmetics. He is a gay man and talks about his sexuality freely on the internet. The reason I dislike him is because he has no skills to manage a business; Jeffree Star Cosmetics, many people criticize the quality and pricing of his makeup products and most importantly there are many complaints about the customer service in this company, I think the most important thing to do in order to have a successful business is having a good customer service to help retain your customers. He also faced criticism for his past behaviors.

What made Jeffree Star successful? Well, Jeffree is a makeup artist and a YouTuber, he posts many trending famous makeup tutorials on YouTube and gives his honest reviews about other makeup brands whether it’s worth the money or not, which I admit I find very helpful, however, he also got famous because of the dramas he gets involved in and sometimes starts a drama which is very childish for a 39 year old man to do, I find it very annoying how people will do anything for fame and start a drama out of nowhere for the views and money when all you’re going to get is hate. The biggest example is the famous Jeffree Star and James Charles drama that got 100+ million views on YouTube which was also one of the reasons Jeffree got famous.

He could make some changes to make me like him more, like stop being so problematic, we all know he's one of the biggest troublemakers in the cosmetics industry, quit stirring up drama online with other celebrities, and start treating people kindly instead of harshly and cruelly offending them.

Donald Trump is an entrepreneur, online personality, and he is most famously known as the 45^th president of the United States of America (USA). He owns several successful businesses, such as the Trump organization, Trump model management, 40 Wall Street, and most famously, Trump Tower. He was able to start his venture into business through his father’s real estate company, along with his father’s financial and political backing. He almost went bankrupt in the 1990s. He was able to escape bankruptcy through his public persona and, later on, the reality TV show The Apprentice. However, today I’ll be going over the reasons why I detest him.

Prior to the Epstein case, Trump’s existence was nothing more than a void in my mind. I knew he was the president, but it didn’t interest me whatsoever, since politics don’t particularly interest me. But the widespread nature of this case led me through a rabbit hole, and there I learned of Trump’s relationship to Epstein and to the case. Still, that wasn’t what sparked my disdain for him; it was his comments and views towards women. Particularly his several sexual assault cases.

The case of E. Jean Carol on grounds of sexual assault last year showed and proved Trump guilty in a New York civil court. Though E. Jean Carol wasn’t the only victim of Trump, as stated by multiple women, those would only be classified as accusations as of now. These facts on their own are already enough for me to dislike him, but what enraged me was his candid comment, which was caught on tape: "I just kissing them; it’s like a magnet. Just kiss; I don’t even wait. And when you’re a star, they let you do it. You can do anything." That in itself implies that a woman’s consent means nothing to him and that their mere existence is nothing more than an object made to satisfy.

He's lived and enjoyed the rule: the rich run the world. And though that is still true, it is not entirely true nowadays. Since the world is changing and you can now get caught, just like his friend Epstein, and though the law isn’t as fair, it is still fair to some extent, at least in the sense that it would cost him money to shush someone up or to try and win a case. I mean, that’s evident by how he’s already facing tens of felony charges. And the only advice I have for him is that karma follows, whether that be on earth or in the afterlife. And his New York Empire slowly collapsing shows his karma on earth. However, I still think that some people are capable of repentance and change, which I hope he is able to. So, getting a reality check, going to therapy, serving his sentence, and fixing his view on women would help make him a better person and help me tolerate and lessen my loathe towards him.

Plan:

-          Introduction about him.

-          What made him successful.

-          What exactly I don’t like (disdain).

-          What he could change (Advice) to make me tolerate him.

-             Why do you dislike them?

She is a hypocrite and a fraud because her actions do not match her words at all.

-             What made them successful?

Her popular talk show “The Oprah Winfrey Show”.

-             What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Never abuse children and actually help them.

Be real and true instead of faking her life to people.

Donating her money for good deeds

Oprah Winfrey

Oprah Winfrey is one of the most well-known and influential media figures in the world. She is an Emmy-winning talk show host, media executive, Academy Award nominee, and philanthropist. Much of her success can be attributed to her renowned talk show.

Oprah is one of the largest givers, having built multiple organizations, including a girls' academy in South Africa, and donated billions of dollars, so what is my reason for disliking her? She was arrested for a variety of offenses, including assault and luring girls under the age of consent to commit indecent assault at the Oprah Winfrey Leadership Academy for Girls. On one of her appearances, she tried to excuse child predators and sexual harassment by saying, "It feels good, and if the abuser was really good, you won't even know it's happening," demonstrating her inhumanity. She is also suspected of being on Epstein's Island, a place where young women and children were trafficked and sexually abused. Oprah has interviewed and encouraged some well-known personalities who have later become involved in scandals and exposed for unethical or illegal actions, which I find odd. Furthermore, I despise her because she fails to live up to the public values she claims to represent. Oprah presents herself one way on her talk shows, yet she behaves differently in her personal and business lives.

After all of the disturbing things she did, I don’t think I’ll like her. However, she must grow and become a better person by putting an end to all assaults and abuse of women and children. She should have a more positive attitude rather than faking her personality. Moreover, instead of assaulting humanity, she could use the money she received to do actual good deeds, donate to charities, and help people in need emotionally and physically.

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Although Elon musk is very successful, he still faces criticism for his weird behavior and his controversial communication way. The criticism he gets from his impulsive and abrasive comments on social media, which has led to legal challenges.

Musk's success due to his impressive companies such as Tesla, spaceX and Neuralink. Musk’s ability to push technology in the different level like producing smart electric cars, space exploration, and brain interfaces. His abilities to make his bold ideas to reality is the key to his success.

Musk public communications skills is why people don’t like him. More calm responses and better communication skills and answering peoples concern in a respective way it will improve his image. More for creating a workplace that cares about employee well-being, and good management will help with the criticism that he is facing.

Finally resolving these issues and having a better image of Elon musk will help to produce the criticism that he is facing nowadays. Linking his success with a more compassionate unresponsible leadership style.

Despite my dislike for her, I can't deny that she's actually quite successful. I guess her passion for veganism and her dedication to spreading her message has gained her a lot of followers. She's managed to build a massive online presence, with thousands of people subscribing to her YouTube channel and following her on social media. And hey, she even managed to publish a cookbook and get on TV talk shows. So I guess her success lies in her ability to captivate an audience and get them on board with her vegan lifestyle.

If the vegan teacher wants to gain more followers, there are definitely some changes she needs to make. First of all, she needs to tone down the preaching. It's great that she's passionate about her cause, but there's a fine line between educating and nagging. She should try to be more open-minded and understanding of other people's choices. Instead of shaming non-vegans, maybe she could focus on promoting the benefits of a plant-based diet without attacking others. That would definitely make her more likable in my book.

Addison Ray is a popular entrepreneur and TikTok star who, despite her massive success, is disliked by many, including myself. There are several reasons why I feel this way about her.

Firstly, Addison Ray often appears to prioritize fame and attention over providing meaningful content. Her videos seem shallow and lacking substance. It feels like she is only interested in popularity rather than genuinely connecting with her audience.

Secondly, TikTok played a big role in her success. She's good at dancing and lip-syncing, but those skills aren't really that impressive. It seems like she mostly became famous because of those easy talents.

To make me like her, Addison Ray could implement a few changes. Firstly, she should strive to create more meaningful and relatable content that resonates with her followers. Instead of solely focusing on dance routines and lip-syncing, she could use her platform to discuss important social issues or promote positive change.

Additionally, I would appreciate it if she used her influence to support various charities or community initiatives.

Dedicate her efforts towards raising awareness and funds for causes that truly matter. This would demonstrate genuine care for the world beyond herself and her desire for fame.

In conclusion, although Addison Ray has achieved remarkablesuccess as an entrepreneur and TikTok star, I dislike her due to her superficial content and apparent lack of depth. By creating more meaningful content and using her platform to promote positive change, she could win my admiration.

Write about an entrepreneur you dislike.(amber heard)

Why do you dislike them?

Her divorce from Johnny Depp and blaming for abusing her physically by hitting, slapping and others also faking evidence.

What made them successful?

She is a very successful actor one of her movies is aquaman and other moves she’s known for her moves.

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Fixing what she did to Johnny Depp and being a good mother for her daughter.

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Amber heard.

Amber heard is an American actress, she is known for her role in “Aquaman”. She’s Johnny Depp ex-wife in 2022 their divorce went viral in social media and that what made most people hate amber heard. Of what she did to Depp and how she blamed hem on thing he maybe would never do.

Why do you dislike them?

Amber heard she’s a successful actor who played many roles in so many TV shows and films. What made me dislike her is the divorce case in 2022, she alleged that Johnny Depp abused her physically by hitting and abusing her verbally. From what it went viral amber said that he punched her, slapped, and having objects thrown at her. She also referred herself as a victim of domestic violence. She also had fake evidence that she has made against Johnny Depp, which was found after, and Johnny Depp wan the case against her. After the divorce Amber received 7 million dollars settlement.  

What made them successful?

Beginning of her journey amber heard started acting, her firs show was Friday night lights in (2004) after that she continued her acting carer. Her famous role was in “aquaman.” She played Mera which was a successful move. She put a very significant effort into her acting career and become a very successful actor. She played in many successful moves also like justice league, And also more she’s very famous for her moves. Now she has movies coming up to continue her acting career.

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Being a wonderful mother to her child is one of the things she could do to win my approval. I loved her bound with her daughter and the way she treated her, even though she blamed Johnny and accused him of Bening

Plane:

Who is Kylie Jenner

Why I dislike her

What is Kylie’s business

Today's topic is about an entrepreneur whom I dislike, I chose Kylie Jenner but this does not mean that I hate her, I dislike her business and at the same time, she supports Israel.

Kylie Jenner is one of the American entrepreneurs who has one of the most famous makeup brands in the world most people like her makeup but not that much because it affects my skin a bit so I stopped using her products. 

Firstly let’s a bit about her, Kylie Kristen Jenner (26 years old ) is an American socialite, media personality, and businesswoman. She starred in the E! reality television series Keeping Up with the Kardashians from 2007 to 2021 and then the Hulu reality television series The Kardashians from 2022. She is the founder and owner of the cosmetic company Kylie Cosmetics. She is the fifth-most-followed person on Instagram.  

What I know about Kylie is that she's a person who depends on intermediaries and most of her business is managed on her behalf, meaning she does not depend only on herself but on others, and I disagree with this thing that other people manage some of my business instead ofme so this is the most point that makes my dislike with her.

The reasons I dislike Kim Jong Un are many. First of all, even in cases where he makes a silly error, he treats people's lives as if they are his own. Second, even when it's just one family member who messes up, make the rest of the family share the guilt. Lastly, his nuclear crush always represents a threat to the entire planet. 

Because of his strange laws and the strength of his power over his people, Kim Jong Un is well-known. In addition to his many international relationships, he despises America and frequently threatens them with a nuclear weapon capable of destroying the entire planet.

He must give his people some space to breathe; they lack internet access and power at night and are not aware of the outside world.  Change his personality due to his weird mindset of controlling and make his words stand out.

Everybody is good at something. He can improve the world if he adopts another point of view and behavior. He still has a decent side, as seen by the kindness he shows his daughter.

Plan:

Why do you dislike them?

Take people life.

threatens the world with his nuclear boom.

What made them successful?

his weird rules

many relations with other countries

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Change his personality.

to let his people breathe for a bit.

what do you dislike about them?

· Really rude in person.

· She plays with people’s pain and traumas.

What made them successful?

· Her show.

· Having the sense of humor.

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

· Being really kind in person not just (in the show).

· Respecting peoples fear.

· To not make fun of someone to let someone else laugh.

Being an entrepreneur is something that depends on your ability in maintaining your own life and your business at the same time. On the other hand, being an entrepreneur has a lot of risks like stress, risk of failing, uncertain income, Responsibility. Speaking about entrepreneur there are some entrepreneurs that you especially dislike, what do you dislike about them? What made them successful? What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Ellen DeGeneres is an entrepreneur who I personally dislike. Ellan is someone who everyone knew as the kindest person ever, her show used to make everyone laugh and everyone did enjoy her show. Being someone who most people see as a role model especially children must be someone who really deserve to be role model not someone who make fun of someone else pain or fear. Ellan used to make fun of people traumas which is in fact rude of her to invite someone to her show then use this person trauma to attract people to her show, making her sound funny. In the other hand, people tend to like kind people, people who respect their pain, people who are kind everywhere even in person, which in fact Ellan lack this kind of behavior.

Ellan is famous, everyone used to know her and will always do. Her show made her famous, being kind. Ellan wouldn’t be if it not all about the show and her kindness, on the other side people got really upset and badly mad when they knew that everything is fake, and she is in fact rude. Ellan should change a lot of things in her personality for me to like her like being really kind in the show but not in real life, respecting people’s pain, and not making fun of people’s traumas. People could go through a lot of things like, divorces, breakups, sickness, even childhood trauma. Peoples fear should never be the point of someone else laugh.

Why do you dislike them?

-          Tons of CO2 emitted from her plane yearly

-          She could fly commercial sometimes

-          Harming the environment

What made them successful?

-          Her songs and songwriting

-          She’s the 1^st in history to win album of the year 4 times

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

-          Her publicly acknowledging her wrongdoings

Entrepreneurs are typically praised for their actions. We do not see them get criticized as much, even though some of them need criticism to stay successful and relevant. There are many entrepreneurs I respect, but I must call them out for their wrongdoings, for example, Taylor Swift.

Every year, Taylor releases tons of carbon dioxide emissions into the atmosphere from her private jet. This action was once excused by her need for security. However, the question remains: can’t she afford to bring her security with her on commercial airlines instead of harming the environment by flying on private jets?

It all started in 2006, when humankind was introduced to a song called “Tim McGraw” by a sixteen-year-old girl called Taylor Swift. Later that year, she released her first album. Taylor continued writing songs and putting them out to the world; she released her second album, “Fearless,” in 2008 and won her first “Album of the Year” Grammy award for it. Last night, Taylor broke her own record by being the first artist in history to win this award four times. She also announced her newest album, “The Tortured Poets Department,” which will be released on the upcoming April 19^th.

I am a true believer in second chances if the person shows that they deserve one. Taylor is no exception. A simple public acknowledgment of her wrongdoings is the first step towards the righteous. Moreover, she must use her private jet for emergent or urgent circumstances only. Especially since she is considered a role model for many members of today’s youth. Her impact is real, so let it be a positive one.

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(Write about an entrepreneur you dislike)

Plan:

Why do you dislike them?

·      Who is Hillary Clinton?

·      She is not who she claims to be.

What made them successful?

·      She has an extensive political experience.

·      Her notably serving as First Lady, U.S.

What changes could they implement for you to like them?

·      She has many hateful qualities that would stop me from liking her.

Essay:

Hillary Clinton, a well-known figure in American politics, held positions as secretary of state, senator, and first lady. She has received criticism as well as praise for being a role model for women in politics. Her dedication and hard work still have an impact on conversations about leadership and gender equality.

Throughout her career, which included her time as First Lady, her time as Secretary of State, and more, she has encountered a variety of criticism. Her use of a private email server, accusations of bribery, and how she handled different issues in politics have all been the subject of critics, separating opinions on her leadership.

Hillary Clinton has an extensive amount of political experience from her positions as First Lady of the United States, U.S. Senator from New York, and Secretary of State under President Barack Obama. Her long career has been influenced by her campaigns for women's rights, healthcare reform, and diplomacy, all of which have led to her success and amount of knowledge as a leader.

Notably, during her husband Bill Clinton's presidency from 1993 to 2001, Hillary Clinton supervised over the United States as First Lady. During her time there, she actively played a role in the development of policies, campaigning for improvements of healthcare particularly.  Her time as First Lady provided her with significant experience and set the way for her future political career.

She kept on creating and starting campaigns to improve the U.S. from many aspects but, behind all of these campaigns she was approaching a different goal. Many people does not like her because she shows the world a face that is innocent but in reality she did all of these campaigns for fame and money. She didn’t care about anything but her fame, money and how she looks from the perspective of other poor people who kept their trust within her.

plan:

•   I dislike him because he cheated in around 100 games while playing on the site over the years.

•   Niemann achieved success by starting chess at 8, gradually gaining knowledge, and eventually becoming highly successful in the game.

•   I'd admire him if he refrained from cheating in games and focused on self-improvement to reach his goals without cheating.

Essay:

•   Why do you dislike them?

• What made them successful?

•   What changes could they implement for you to like them?

  
  

Niemann

Let's turn inside out into the topic of an entrepreneur I dislike in addition lets delve into how they became successful in the thing he does. The entrepreneur I dislike is Hans Niemann because he cheated in around 100 games while playing on the site over the years.

Hans Niemann is an American chess grandmaster and twitch streamer. His achievement at a young age is amazing, he became a fide grandmaster in 2021, he has won a numerous number of tournaments, and those achievements led him to become so successful in chess. His ability to plan in the game, captures, tactics and other things did lead him to his success.

With all his achievements that he did have, there is one thing that he did that did destroy everything. Niemann started cheating in both of his online games and over the board games in addition he won against the world chess champion by cheating and that's what destroyed his career. The changes that he could implement to make me like him is refraining from cheating in games and focus more on self-improvement to reach his goals without cheating.

In order to appeal to a wider range of voters, some argue that Trump could focus on unifying the country rather than dividing it. Unification involves listening to different points of view and finding common ground between them. In other words, it is about building unity and being receptive to ideas from different points of view. Leaders who emphasize understanding and inclusiveness tend to be more popular.

When it comes to politics, there is no such thing as a one-size-fits-all solution. Opinions abound. A constructive dialogue, in which leaders listen to and engage with different points of view, is essential for good governance. If, for example, Trump focused on working together and finding bipartisan solutions, it could help to improve the perception of a broad segment of the population. It is a continuous process of assimilating and reconciling the diverse points of view that comprise a nation.

Leaders who understand and include everyone, regardless of their ideas ,often gain more support from the public.if trump focuses on working and finding solutions that everyone can agree on, that make more people see him in a positive light.

Snoop Dog is a famous rapper turned entrepreneur, but I must admit, I'm not really a big fan. Here's why I dislike him. First, his lyrics are often filled with offensive language. As a 17-year-old, I find it hard to support someone who promotes such inappropriate messages to young listeners like me.

However, there's no denying that Snoop Dog has achieved great success in his career. He has a unique style that helped him stand out in the rap industry and captivate a massive audience. He became one of the most well-known and important musicians of his time thanks to his infectious beats and fluid flow.

If Snoop Dog wanted to win more viewer , there are a few changes he could make. First, he could focus on creating clean versions of his songs for younger audiences. By doing this, he would show that he cares about his impact on his fans and respects their age . Additionally, he could use his influence to promote positive messages and support important causes. This would make his role as a responsible entrepreneur who wants to make a difference in the world.

In conclusion, while Snoop Dog may be a successful entrepreneur, there are several reasons why I dislike him. However, if he made efforts to produce cleaner content and use his platform for positive change, he might just win me over as a supporter.

she only care about herself i feel that she is so selfish. She is always trying to have more money also, she doesn't care about other people's happiness either. She doesn't make a good difference in the world or use her success to help others.

I do have to give credit where credit is due, though. Halema Boland's success was due to a few reasons. She has excellent self-marketing skills and builds a good personal brand. She is very good at attracting attention and starting conversations between people about her. She also knows how to appeal to a specific group and has a wonderful sense of style.

In conclusion, I dislike Halema Boland  entrepreneur due to her conceit and lack of empathy. However, she has been successful due to her marketing skills and skills of style and fashion . If she wants me to like her she must to change her attitude and start by her success for the greater good.

Even though I dislike them, I have to admit they have been successful in their business. They have a big company that sells cool gadgets, and they earn lots of money. They know how to advertise their products and make people want to buy them. They are smart and have good ideas to make their business grow. That's why people keep buying stuff from them.

If they want me to like them, they need to make some changes. One change they could do is to treat their employees better. They should be kind and understanding, praising them when they do a good job, and helping them when they make mistakes. Everyone deserves respect and kindness at work. 

They could also show more care for the environment. They should reduce waste and use more sustainable materials for their products. This would show that they care about nature and our planet. 

If Mashael Al Shehi and Ahmed Khamis make these changes, I might actually start to like them. Being kind to others and being eco-friendly are important things that all entrepreneurs should focus on.

· Why do you dislike them?

· What made them successful?

· What changes could they implement for you to like them?

Plan:

1. Who’s the entrepreneur and their achievements

· Jeff Bezos

· Amazon

2. Why do I dislike them

· Amazon prime

· Treatment to workers

3. Something they can do that would change my opinion about them

· Price changes

· Improving work nature

Jeff Bezos

Jeffery Bezos, also known as Jeff, is one of the richest entrepreneurs, known for being the CEO of the online shopping platform, Amazon. Jeff was a simple guy studying electrical engineering when he started designing his first website. Amazon, one of his biggest achievements, started as a simple online bookstore. This simple website gained the attention of many people and investors. Since then, Amazon has become a well-known international online shopping platform.

Jeff might be loved by many; however, several reasons led me to dislike him. One of the major reasons is the addition of “Amazon Prime” to the website. Amazon Prime is a subscription service that gives the customer extra privileges to enhance the shopping experience. I think that this addition is unnecessary because first it’s expensive and it contributes to money inflation. Another point is how the fast delivery services result in an increase in CO2 emissions, which is harmful to the environment. Finally, the way Jeff treats his workers must

be the reason why I dislike him a lot. Several reports revealed the work nature of his company, which said how the company was against unionization and how the workers were poorly paid and treated.

Although these reasons made me dislike Jeff, my opinion about him can still change if he made the Amazon Prime subscription affordable, used environmentally friendly vehicles for fast delivery services, improved working conditions as well, and paid his workers fairly. Therefore, I’m waiting for the day when Jeff will make these changes so I can eventually stop disliking him.

Feedback:

According to the rubric, all points had been met. However, I think I can use a much wider range of vocabulary than the ones I've included.

Sara Rashed Almutawa owns a successful company that specializes in selling seeds and agricultural products. I dislike Sara’s approach when it comes to her business, my dislike is mostly originated from: Almutawa’s mindset that’s very resistant to change, Almutawa’s refusal to use other more sustainable practices in her production, and Almutawa’s willingness to do anything for profit, which can lead to her neglecting her morals and ethics in some situations. 

Almutawa’s success in the Gulf region is originated from monopolizing the seeds in the commercial market; however, her success is overshadowed by her refusal to invest in research, more sustainable modern agricultural practices, and technologies. Almutawa has yet to realize that embracing innovation is the only way to keep her market dominancy and keep public opinion in her favor. 

If there’s something that’s going to lessen my disdain, its so see her working on achieving a balance between profit, social responsibility, and ethical labor standards won’t only improve her image publicly, but it will also strengthen the basis of the company. In short, a comprehensive strategy that integrates ecological awareness, creativity, and morality is capable of turning Sara’s current achievements into an enduring legacy of positive impacts and sustainability. 

Plan:

Introduction

Start by describing why I hate him

Why do you dislike them

How they got popular by doing what they do

Why are they kinda successful in their own way

My opinion on them

Real insights on how I view them

TikToker Wasil Daoud

Were you ever scrolling through TikTok and stumbled upon a video of a guy with an annoying voice dumping a hugely monsterious gigantic amount of food and mixing them? Weirdly accurate but yeah, you know who I’m talking about specifically, the influencer Wasil Daoud.

With all the talks about world hunger, people in poor countries not having access to food and some even starving to death. On the other side of the globe, there lies Wasil Daoud, wasting food like its nothing. The problem not only lies within the fact that he wastes food, which is already an ungrateful act. The fact that he decided to share these videos with millions and millions of people is what raises my anger to its peak. How many childrens and teenagers are watching his videos? His viral videos might inspire people to waste food, and make it an normal act that should be ignored, or worse, accepted.

Lately Wasil Daoud started uploading vidoes about making food and giving it to the homeless. It’s true that he might’ve had a change of heart. But does videos someone uploads reflect a persons deep thoughts? Im not sure if he really had changed and felt regret for the food he wasted. I always have the thought of him doing it for views in thr back of my mind. What if he makes videos of giving food to the homeless just for views, to stop the hate he was getting from his previous videos?