The role of audience knowledge in the second email by Pavel Zemliansky https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg As a group, come up with some ideas and then post them here. en-us 2021-09-02 07:35:25 UTC 2021-09-02 09:18:15 UTC hello@padlet.com Ethos and Logos are very present but Pathos is missing https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712345149 You can read through the text that all of the facts comes through quite clear and are easy to understand but there isn't a  lot of feelings and personal opinions in it. He could have added a part under the data sheet with an part why this has happened since then the reader already has the important parts so it's fine adding something to bind it more together.

What about the phrase about "good impression of the community?"]]> 2021-09-02 09:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712345149 https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712349102 -Presentation of the information

-Relevant information for different people is in sections

]]> 2021-09-02 09:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712349102 Case https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712349446 The writer understood who the Audience was and composed the message accodingly.

The message was call to action and briefly described why it was important to do so.

It was also communicated that excess funds would be used at a later time and therefore not go to waste. ]]> 2021-09-02 09:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712349446 -She knows the audience on a deeper level therfore she is able to connect more to them and understand their needs. -She writes from the start what the money is used for. -The text is shorter and more understandable/direct.-she knows that it is a lowerclass neigborhood with a most likley lower income, so instead of writing the big total amount she writes the small amount each people needs to donate. -The envilope makes it easier to donate and respond. https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712351008 2021-09-02 09:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712351008 The 2nd text was much more effective https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352077 The 1st had way to much details and was not organized in a propper way. It felt like we where reading a facebook post. There where a lot of numbers, but didn't really get to the point quickly enough. Us as readers lost motivation to read further. The 2nd text was much more clear. As the readers most likely are on their way out or comming back home, most of them might not have the time to read through all the details. Besides they most likely don't care. The 2nd text gets right to the point, making it easy for the reader to immediately make up their mind if they want to read further and perhaps donate.]]> 2021-09-02 09:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352077 How knowing the audience helps https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352318 Person who reads the first text and makes suggestions is a part of  the intended audience, and thus has valuable insight into what would appeal to them personally. Also, it helps to get a seperate set of eyes from one’s own to look through one’s work.
 
Deals with the issues quickly; tells what the point of the document is within first few lines.
 
Structured to make it easier to read and understand before having read it all.
 
Nice separation in the document, with headlines and the numbers separated in an oversightly manner.

People don't like to read more than necessary, so a layout that allows skipping around, while still effectively conveying the message is key, especially when the intended audience is an average home-owner.
]]> 2021-09-02 09:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352318 Case 2B, ideas from the group https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352482 - What did the author have in his mind when writing to his audience, the assumptions we have made is as follows;

> He was someone that had been involved in the community for a long time, and knew his readers well

> He had probably done some previous research by speaking with his neighbours, before delivering the letter

> He has probably looked at other donation letters, as it is similar to other donation letters we have read in the past

> He knows what he`s asking for, before he writes the letter and centers his letter around that


]]> 2021-09-02 09:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712352482 The audience needs the maintenance the author is trying to ask money for. https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712354327 This is something the author has taken into consideration. So facts and predictions pertaining to the state of the maintenance has a direct impact on the audience. The author already knows that the audience's background and therefore the context in which the author is shaping the text from is local. ]]> 2021-09-02 09:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712354327 Case 2B, Ideas https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712360175 Case 2B had clearer understanding of the the audience since she know its a low income community and she is just informing about the donation amout. And the structure was clearer and easier to get information out of. So if you just want to read som specific information in the text, you can easily find it. ]]> 2021-09-02 09:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/pzemliansky/l720l02kp0cg4keg/wish/1712360175