https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg Create a short essay of 50 - 70 words about a place you wish to visit in future. en-us 2020-11-02 09:29:39 UTC 2020-11-11 08:34:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3a1.png deepaagunalan https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/881722835

Name a place you wish to visit in future.

Why do you love [suka] that place?

What is interesting [menarik]  about the place?

• Using the questions above, write an essay between 50 - 70 words describing about the place you want to visit in future.

]]> 2020-11-02 09:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/881722835 deepaagunalan https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/881745426 EXAMPLE...
My favourite place that I wish to visit in future is Japan. I love Japan because of the country's flower season that produces cherry blossom. I would love to take a beautiful picture of me in Japan with the flower in my surrounding. Japan is a very interesting country because of how its education system works. Students do not sit for test until they reach the age of 10. Japanese education practices manners before knowledge.

Total word count:- 75 words.]]> 2020-11-02 09:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/881745426 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884675350 The place I want to visit in the future is New York. I love New York because in the winter it is very cold and full of snow. I would love to play in the snow and have snow fights. I would also love to take pictures at Times Square. There are also beautiful parks to have picnics. But not in winter time.

Total word count :- 63 words


Very good Halifi. Keep it up!
-Teacher Deepaa-]]> 2020-11-03 01:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884675350 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884687166 The place that I wish to visit in the future is Legoland, Johor. Actually I have been there when I was 4 years old, but because height restriction, there were many activities that I could not join. I love Legoland because there are many activities. I would love to play Driving School, Boating School, Ninjago and Wave Pool.

Total word count:- 55 words.

Nice one you've got there, Farouq! Legoland is a great place for kids definitely. If you have the opportunity, do go again.
-Teacher Deepaa-]]> 2020-11-03 02:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884687166 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884760950 australia because i want to see kanggroo
and i want to give kanggroo eat
in there i want to feel the snow and play snow.i want to make friend in there

Correction
1. Australia - "A" capital letter
2. I - capital letter
3. kanggroo X - kangaroo 

Australia is definitely a good place to visit and yes the kangaroos over there are really friendly. Hope you have a great time!
-Teacher Deepaa-]]> 2020-11-03 02:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884760950 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884761045 The place that i want to go is London. cause i want to see london bridge. I want to take picture with my family. i want to have a best holiday at London.

Correction
1. cause - because 
2. london - capital letter "L"
Yes, Waiz. Some capitalization errors. "I" needs to be in big letter not small. Hope your wish to go London comes true. Good!
-Teacher Deepaa-]]> 2020-11-03 02:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884761045 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884798072 The place that I want to go again is Japan. I love to go there because I want to see beautiful flower like lavender and many pretty flower. The weather at Japan is very cold and I like to play snow there. When I eat ice cream, the ice cream did not melt. There are lot activities when the snow. One time I and my family go to aquarium I see lot of penguin and fish. I and my family go to zoo and I saw a famingo it so cute and lot of pets      And I see a little baby it so cute. I really want go japan again.


Good job Damia!
Just one mistake it's "flamingo". You missed the letter "L"
-Teacher Deepaa-]]> 2020-11-03 03:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884798072 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884869618
My favourite place that I wish to visit was Korea because of my passion towards Blackpink and K-drama and of course the beauty atmosphere in Korea. We can watch a beautiful scenery in Korea.
Their culture food like kimchi and their famous banana milk makes me craving it. I wish I could visit here one day.

Total words - 56

Wow, South Korea!! I can see your a fan of Blackpink girl group. BLINK BLINK :3 
And you watch dramas as well. Yeayyy!! Me too haha

Correction
1. was change to is
2. beauty - beautiful

Overall its good and I see that you are improving Husna dear. Keep it up!]]> 2020-11-03 03:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884869618 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884956596 My favourite place that I wish to visit In future Is United Kingdom. I love United Kingdom because there are many football players and sports clubs there including Manchester United, Liverpool and Chelsea. 
My father and I are football fans, I hope to visit football stadiums there like Old Trafford, Anfield and Stamford Bridge. I hope to be there with my father one day, I love my father.]]> 2020-11-03 04:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884956596 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884988443 The place that I wish to visit in the future is Kundasang, Sabah. I love Kundasang because is very cold and many activities. [because the place is very cold and many activities has been organised there.]
In the Desa Diari Farm also fun to be able to see the cows up close and feed. [I also had fun at Desa Diari Farm because I was able to see the cows in a close-up view and feed them]
 I will be there again. [I wish to go there again with my family members.]

Hi ]]> 2020-11-03 04:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/884988443 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885015912 The place i want to go again is Korea.
I have been to Jeju Island before, but I haven’t been to the capital city of Korea which is The beautiful Seoul.I love Korea because of the big and tall towers, the breath-taking scenery and the beautiful people.

There are many activities that we can do here during the winter. We can play with the snow and build snowmans.We can also take a walk and enjoy the beautiful scenery of the lake and beaches. For those who like shopping, Korea is famous for its beauty care product. Koreans have beautiful features and glowing skin. I love to watch them in K-drama.

 I really hope I can visit Korea once again.]]> 2020-11-03 05:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885015912 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885110570 The place i wish to visit in future is Paris. I love that place because it has Eiffel Tower.The tower is height and at the night the Eiffel Tower is very colourful and shining light. I want go to Eiffel Tower and take many pictures with my family.In Paris,i also can go for shopping with my mom.]]> 2020-11-03 06:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885110570 https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885414917 The place that I wish to visit  in future is Zoo. I love that place because I can see lots of wild animals. There are lion, tiger, elephant, panda and also penguin. The interesting in zoo is I can learn about wild animals.
I wish I can go there again with my family and my friends.

Total words=56]]> 2020-11-03 08:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/deepaagunalan/l6sdip09x1z5y7cg/wish/885414917