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3) Write a title and a topic sentence. 

1. First, If you are tired, stressed, or have nutritional imbalances, your immunity will be lowered and you will catch a cold easily.

   -lack of sleep

   -high stress levels

   -poor diet (lack of vitamins, especially vitamin C)

2. Second, If you have poor personal hygiene, you can catch a cold.

   -not washing your hands often

3. Finally, You can catch a cold if you have frequent contact with infected people or stay in a closed space for a long time.

   -no ventilation

   -staying indoors too long

Concluding sentence: In conclusion, you may catch a cold if you have lowered immunity, poor personal hygiene, frequent contact with infected people.

First, the price of movie tickets increased significantly.

• at 2010, the price of them is around 7,000 won on average.

• but it increases gradually in these 15 years, and now it prices 15,000 won on average.

Second, people's movie preferences has changed.

• Because the price of tickets have increased significantly, people became to prefer high-quality movies that is worthwhile to pay high ticket prices.

Finally, multi-platform streaming services(ex. Netflix, Disney+, etc.) has grown, so people can watch movies that has ended its run or new original movies by using streaming services.

In conclusion, increased ticket price affected people's movie preference, and rise of streaming service makes people to choose a house instead of a movie theater.

First, global warming has changed ecosystems.

It is causing the simplification of species, and some species are even going extinct.

Second, global warming has caused many climate issues.

It is a major factor behind extreme weather like hail and drought, as well as longer summers.

Finally, global warming has contributed to various social issues.

For example, it leads to a lack of food and water, and a large increase in harmful insects.

CS : In a brief, Global warming is literally changing everything we used to know. If we fail to stop it, the world as we know it will no longer exist.

1.First, drinking Coke can cause tooth decay.

-Sugar in Coke is main cause of tooth decay

-The acidity of Coke can lead to tooth decay

2.Second, drinking Coke can increase our weight.

-Sugar in the Coke is high in calories

-The fat is saved by drinking Coke

3.Finally, drinking Coke can make us more likely to develop diabetes.

-Drinking Coke increases insulin resistance

-There is a huge amount of sugar in Coke

Concluding Sentence : In short, drinking Coke may be harmful to our body.

TS: Many people today struggle with mental health issues for several reasons.

1. First of all, students experience the pressure to succeed academically.

• high expectations

• universities

2. Second, intense competition among classmates can make students feel insecure.

• exams

• grades

3. Finally, the lack of free time due to after-school classes and homework leaves little room for relaxation.

• could result in physical and mental health problems.

CS: In short, academic pressure, competition, and tight schedules all contribute to rising stress levels, which negatively affect students’ well-being.

1. First, they neglect advices of experts.

2. Second, they

1. First, Drinking too much alchol changes the pattern of life.

   - your morning will be dissappeared

   - morever, the after day will be hard.

2. Second, Alcohol-related dementia and stroke can be a consequence of alchol.

- Alchol can make our health bad.

- Complications appear when you are old

3. Third, People with alcohol addiction make people around them suffer,too.

- You don't have a normal mind.

Cs : In conclusion, people in Korea have become more indifferent because they focus on themselves, talk less in real life, and feel too much competition.

First, people care more about themselves because individualism is growing.

• These day people think their own life and success are the most important.

• People don’t spend much time with others or try to build close relationships.

• People focus on their own goals and problems.

Second, people talk more online, so real-life relationships are getting weaker.

• Many people use smartphones to talk with others.

• Online messages are short and don’t show real feelings.

• People talk less with other people, and they don’t understand each other well.

Finally, strong competition makes people see others as rivals, not friends.

• In school and at work, everyone wants to be the best.

• People often feel jealous or worried about others.

• People see others as rivals rather than friends

  
  

2) Provide supporting information, such as details and/or examples.

3) Write a concluding sentence.

CS : In short, South Koreans are highly susceptible to fast-moving trends due to the influence of K-content, social media, and a focus on appearance.

1. First, disrupted global supply chains have led to shortages and higher prices.

   • Pendemic by Covid-19

2. Second, rising energy and raw material costs due to geopolitical conflicts have driven inflation.

   • War between Ukraine and Russia

3. Finally, excessive money printing and stimulus spending have increased demand, pushing prices even higher.

   • Lowered interest rates to boost the economy.

Cs: In conclusion, inflation is happening all over the world, because of these several reasons.

-cell regeneration

-recharging energy

-activating immune system

Second, sleep helps in resolving stress and maintaining psychological health.

-adjusting and controlling emotions

-reducing stress hormones called cortisol

Lastly, sufficient sleep improves brain function and strengthens memory.

-strengthening memories

-improving concentration and problem solving abillity

CS: All in all, as the saying goes, 'sleep is the best medicine,' it helps you recovering your body, maintaining mental health, and improving brain function.

• sharp and hard

Second, thorns limit access to only specific pollinators like bees.

• Bees help pollinate flowers

Finally, in dry environments, thorns reduce water loss by replacing leaves.

• cactus

CS: For these reasons, thorns are a necessity for flowers.

– nighttime relaxation

– rewarding taste (spicy, salty, rich)

2. Second, staying up late causes hunger to return, making people crave something to eat before bed.

– late sleep habits

– natural hunger after dinner

3. Finally, watching food content on social media or YouTube can trigger strong cravings at night.

– using SNS at night

– lots of food-related content

Concluding Sentence

In conclusion, late-night snacking is driven by emotional needs, physical hunger, and social influences such as media.

• advertisements on Instagram

• product promotions

1. Second, being highly exposed to a lot of K-Pop and K-Dramas can make people sensitive to rapidly-changing trends.

• Culinary Class Wars

• cosmetics or foods that celebrities enjoy

1. Finally, it might be a consequence of desire for self-improvement.

• be a better person inside and outside

Main points :

There are three main reasons why fast food is unhealthy for our health.
First, fast food contributes to major health problems. It is often high in calories, sugar, and unhealthy fats, which can lead to serious conditions such as obesity, heart disease, and diabetes. These illnesses are becoming more common, especially among young people who consume fast food regularly.

Second, eating fast food frequently can negatively affect brain function and academic performance. Fast food lacks essential nutrients like vitamins and omega-3 fatty acids that support brain health. As a result, students who eat fast food often may feel tired, have trouble focusing in class, and perform poorly in school.

Finally, fast food can weaken the immune system and increase the risk of chronic diseases. Meals that are high in sodium and sugar put stress on the body and reduce its ability to fight off infections. Over time, this can lead to long-term health problems and a reduced quality of life.

Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, fast food harms our bodies in many ways, and reducing its consumption is necessary for better health and well-being.

• Waste discharge through urine

• As a result, prevent adult disease

Second, it can also help to relieve constipation

• Soften your stool

Finally, it can enhance your physical performance

• Good at diet

-Conclusion sentence

In conclusion, given the fast pace of modern life, economic pressures, and persistent stigma surrounding mental health, it is clear that many people today struggle with mental health issues, underscoring the urgent need for greater social awareness and support.

Concluding sentence : In conclusion, resolutions often fail not because of a lack of will, but due to the absence of immediate rewards, the power of entrenched habits, and unrealistic expectations that exceed one's limits.

-educational expenses

-pocket money

2. The second reason is perception that they don’t have to procreate

   -one of main causes why people have that perception is they put emphasize on their own life

3. Finally, There is a lack of infrastructure that parents use to bring up their child

   -kindergarten

   -support fund

   -school

- a lack of deep sleep

- insomnia

Second, drinking a lot of coffee often results in health problems.

- a heart disease

- problem of hearing

Finally, caffeine in coffee can cause mental problems.

- increase anxiety

2. Second, prolonged stress weakens the immune response, making the body more susceptible to infections and illnesses.

   • excessive cortisol : interference of immune cells

3. Finally, stress interferes with the ability to fall or stay asleep, leading to fatigue and reduced concentration during the day.

   • anxiety

   • depression

   • insomnia

Second, sleep deprivation negatively impacts emotional stability.

Finally, a lack of sleep weakens the immune system and physical health.

1. First, Poland needed weapons which could be deployed quickly and in large numbers.

- During Russia-Ukraine war, Poland had to deploy new weapons quickly and in large quantities because it provided Ukraine with the weapons it was using.

- Currently, western countries don't have facilities which can make weapons quickly and in large due to disarmament over a long time. However, Korea has them.

2. Second, Korean weapons have outstanding performance and high cost-effectiveness.

- Korea is a country with the potential for military conflict with North Korea, so Korea has invested considerably in weapons development and has proven its achievements.

- Since Korea makes weapons for its soldiers, the weapons is of high quality and can form a low price range.

3. Third, Korean weapons is compatible with Western weapon systems.

- Poland should purchase weapons which are used by NATO or can operate in NATO's system because it belongs to NATO.

- Korea has a history of receiving military aid from the U.S. and forming a military alliance with the United States, so Korean weapons naturally used system of western weapons.

CS: In short, Poland chose Korean weapons due to speedy and mass production, high quality and low cost, suitability with NATO.

-fructose

-Enzyme-treated stevia

Second, liquor, which is the main ingredient of diluted soju, is not made by each company but is delivered from a single company.

-대한주정판매라는 단 하나의 회사에서 생산 후 다른 모든 회사에 납품

In conclusion, the difference in taste in alcohol, where the absolute majority of the raw materials are similar, is the difference in sweeteners, which can be difficult to capture unless the taste buds are sensitive.

•cartoon cafe, board game cafe, dog cafe, book cafe, room cafe, Instagram emotional cafe.

Second, cafe start-ups are relatively low in cost and easy to operate.

•Franchise Café supported by headquarters

•unemployment crisis

Finally, people use cafes for various purposes.

•study, work, meetings, dates.

•cozy atmosphere and free Wi-Fi

Main points :

There are three main reasons why fast food is unhealthy for our health.
First, fast food contributes to major health problems. It is often high in calories, sugar, and unhealthy fats, which can lead to serious conditions such as obesity, heart disease, and diabetes. These illnesses are becoming more common, especially among young people who consume fast food regularly.

Second, eating fast food frequently can negatively affect brain function and academic performance. Fast food lacks essential nutrients like vitamins and omega-3 fatty acids that support brain health. As a result, students who eat fast food often may feel tired, have trouble focusing in class, and perform poorly in school.

Finally, fast food can weaken the immune system and increase the risk of chronic diseases. Meals that are high in sodium and sugar put stress on the body and reduce its ability to fight off infections. Over time, this can lead to long-term health problems and a reduced quality of life.

Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, fast food harms our bodies in many ways, and reducing its consumption is necessary for better health and well-being.

CS : In conclusion, the influence of social media and K-culture and the desire to be a better person has made people vulnerable to rapidly changing trends.