Interesting: It's interesting how religion and god are involved in this worldview, but it encompasses all religions

Even Better: Try looking at the audience more, less reading off of the slideshow.

Interesting: its interesting how collectivism works.

Even Better: speak up it is hard to hear everyone clearly.

I- I enjoyed the vast amount of examples you all used on each slide

E- Face us when you are presenting

Good: information was great.

Interesting: how important religion is in collectivism

Even better: could face the audience more, all kind of just looking at the board

Interesting: I thought the slides were interesting and had good detail on them.

Even better: They need to work on their volume and speaking up.

Interesting: how a disadvantage is suppressing individuality

Even better: try not to stand still

I found it interesting how you included the idea of suppressing creativity.

I would like to see all three talk slightly louder and clearer as well as angle your bodies to the audience and try not to read off the slides.

Interesting - interesting to see how everyone has to work together to thrive

Even better - look more at the audience

I: It is interesting that collectivists view the main problem of humanity as individualism and attribute historical inequalities to that.

E: Face toward the audience, talk with more confidence

Interesting I learned a lot

Even Better speak up

Interesting: I was intrigued by the way that you used the images of each slide and actually connected them them to your presentation.

Even Better: The audience in the left probably couldn't see what you were referring to because your backs were to them the entire time. Also, you were standing in the middle of the screen the entire time.

Interesting: that everyone has to come together

Even Better: try not to stand in front of the projector and face the audience more

interesting: it's amazing to see how collectivism works.

Even better: try to memorize more words from your presentation to be able to look more at the audience.

Interesting: I though that the pictures in the slides were all very interesting.

Even better: You could be more engaging with the audience.

Interesting: The beliefs behind collectivism were very interesting to hear put into a presentation.

Even Better: It was a little hard to hear at times so I think speaking a little bit louder would make the presentation even better.

Interesting: It is interesting how much we are all connected and how we all thrive off of each other.

Even Better: Try having either notecards or some of the information memorized as it would take away from the amount of reading off of the screen- which would increase the performance of the presentation.

Interesting: learned something new.

Even Better: Try to not to block the screen from the audience.

Interesting: interest how they view the world.

Even better: Maybe add more visuals or definitions for us to follow along with.

Interesting: They gave good examples relating to scientific naturalism.

Even better: The slides could've had more detail and look better

Good Eye contact and physical mannerisms

I:

E: add some more visual details or cues to give the audience a better understanding of what you are speaking about.

Interesting: It was interesting how the content reality the human purpose with the idea of what humans are.

Even Better: I would've really liked indented bullet points to give an idea of the answer for each question. The questions were answered, but if someone isn't listening, then they can't really refer back to the slides, because there wasn't much info.

Interesting: jumping around the presentation and tying things together

Even better: could be more organized

Interesting - how our complex thinking makes humans special in this worldview

Even Better - lower the use of the word um

Interesting: how humans learned everything and it is all about science

Even better: maybe put some answers on the slides

Interesting: That the highest good is scientific advancement for humanity

Even Better: Pace and speech flow

Interesting: it's impressive to hear about how we evolved.

Even better: try to be more fluent with the presentation like move around and express confident.

Interesting: The "humanities most basic problem" was interesting.

Even Better: I personally believe that there were 2 slides that would have provided better flow if they were switched around. Rather than having to go back and forth between the two slides.

I really liked that you just put the question on there and then talked about it and you weren't just reading off the slide.

Information:

I thought that you had very interesting answers to the questions.

Interesting: I thought that the slide on problem-solving was very interesting with how it related to your topic.

Even Better: Could do a better job with pronunciation of words and practicing would help get some of the nerves out.

I: Fusion Technology was an interesting aspect to explain how the human race evolves and develops.

E: Work on use of "um" and practice what exact information you want to highlight so you don't accidently trip over your words or talk too fast.

Even better: keep it shorter

I- This is an interesting topic. Much like individualism when it comes to self-interest.

E- Talk a little louder. I found it had to hear a few things. Others were a good volume. Also, maybe add pictures to make it more visually appealing.

Interesting everything can be explained scientifically

Even Better add pictures

Interesting:

Even Better: I liked how you guys presented and how you were spread out. However I for me personally it was distracting when you had a side conversation during the prestation. If you guys just were to talk before the presentation it would have helped alot.

Interesting Lots of good information

Even Better: add some visual's

Interesting: How scientific naturalism separates itself

Even better: Have some more visuals to keep the audience listening and engaged

Interesting: I think it is interesting the way that scientific naturalism functions as a belief

Even better: Could be even better by putting your talking points as bullets in the slides rather than just the questions.

Interesting: Reality is shaped by personal actions

Even Better: Appear more engaged when not talking

I: Interesting how this is so much different than the other ones we have looked at.

EB: Don't read everything off the screen.

Interesting: Explaining the movie clip from pursuit of happiness.

Even Better: A little more detail to the slides.

Interesting - reality is created by personal actions

Even Better - speak a little louder

Interesting: The solo mindset and not being lonely for these people

Even Better: A little quiet and a lot of reading of the slides

Interesting: individualism is very similar to several world views

Even better: could speak slightly louder

I: It is interesting that there are worldviews that are the exact opposite of each other, The relation to collectivism was a good addition.

E: Make more intentional eye contact and talk with a more animated voice.

Interesting: I really enjoyed the idea of putting the short vide of the Pursuit of Happiness in there.

Even Better: I don't think the sharing of content was evenly distributed.

Interesting: it was impressive that they don't believe in God.

Even better: speak a little bit louder

Even better- a little louder would be great

Positive

Had lots of good information and very interesting topic to talk about.

Interesting It was the opposite of collectivism

Even Better speak louder

I: Reality that we know is shaped by personal actions

E: Speak up, it's a little hard to hear

Interesting: like how it creates creativity in individuals

Even better: maybe not read directly from the slide

Interesting: I thought that the topic was interesting and how there was usually some exceptions to rules of the culture.

Even Better: Talk a little louder and make sure you stay engaged when you're not the one talking.

Interesting: I thought the lesson from the video clip fit the topic perfectly.

Even Better: A few more visuals would help keep the attention of the audience.

Interesting: how it differs from the previous slides

Even better: try not to read word for word what is on the presentation

I - interesting how than many people are strong belivers in individualism nowadays

E - I think you guys did an expectational job on talking about indivialism. It could be a liitle better if you were to touch on collectivism just a little bit more.

Interesting: I think that a lot of worldviews are very interesting because of how they can compliment each other, contradict each other, or even combine with each other to have the result of another, separate worldview.

Even Better: I think speaking a little bit louder would make the presentation more engaging and easier to understand

Interesting:I found that the ability to change and adapt worked well in this case with how the video didn’t play

Even Better: I would generally try to talk a bit louder and work on the inflection in the voice, instead of only one tone and pitch(it will help with audience attention)

Interesting: you get to be your own person

Even Better: Speaking a little louder.

I - I though your specific takes were very interesting and well thought out

E - I thought they read off of the screen a little bit too much but because your body language and presenting was so good your prestation was still very strong.

Interesting: The images used within the presentation were pretty cool.

Even Better: There were some slides that had 8+ bullet points, this is too many. Also, I would've enjoyed a more consistent theme within all the slides.

Interesting - don't read off the slide and look at the audience

Even Better - staying off the phone during presenting

I: Interesting how there are no universal truths in science and history

E: Read off the screen quite a bit

Even Better: Don’t read off the slides so much

Interesting: Nothing matters, and nothing is true/ can be known

Even Better: Make more eye contact

Interesting: how everything is biased and nothing can really explain the world

Even better: just look up more

Interesting: How they believe there is no objective reality.

Even Better: Very wordy, there was a lot of reading off the slides. Very fidgety and that draws my attention away from the slides and over to the speaker in a negative way.

Interesting: It was interesting how their view and their truth is influenced and based on personal thoughts and feelings.

Even Better: Specific to your topic due to the complexity- I think it would have helped if you had trimmed the definition down into a simpler explanation.

Interest it was very interesting lotst of information

Even better Not reading off the slides as much

Interesting: I think it is interesting that the worldview basically says there is no objective truth

Even better: could do better not just reading off slides

Interesting: I found the information about the critique of knowledge very interesting

Even Better: I would to hear a little more clarity in the speaking voice, and lowered usage of “um” or “uh”

Interesting: I find it interesting how it was formed and how this worldview may be seen as potentially pessimistic.

Even better: I think that it might be better to take away some of the wordiness on the slides to avoid reading directly from the slides too often.

I: images in the presentation were pretty good.

E: try to not read from the screen

Interesting: What's interesting was how popular is the collectivist mindset seen in the general population.

Even better: Slides are a little wordy, and there's a lot of reading off the slides

I: Interesting that this ideology was created in rejection to another, offering that there is no objective reality

E: Keep your body language open and look at the audience.

I thought there was a lot of very good information on the slides and you did a great job of explaining everything.

Interesting: The slides were interesting

Even better: Read off the slides too much

I- It's interesting how they don't believe that human nature does not exist.

E- Try not to look too bored

Interesting: I thought the core beliefs and some of the views on Postmodernism were interesting and I enjoyed learning more about it.

Even Better: Maybe read off of the slides a little bit less but you guys did a nice job most of the time of not looking at the slides.

Interesting: learned lots of new information

Even Better: Looked down a little to much

Interesting: I like how each of you described your own experiences relating to scientific naturalism.

Even better: Knowing the presenting order for next presentation.

Interesting: Very interesting how the values are biased based on culture.

Even better: Talan and Kaden could have done a better job of not just reading off the board.

I: It's interesting how morals are split up by society/culture.

E: Could've had less screen reading, maybe use bullet points.

Interesting: I think that this worldview is very interesting

Even Better: I think that it would make the presentation better to not read off the slides as much.

I- There are no moral absolutes

E- Less words on slides, read less off of the slides

Interesting - what is considered morally correct varies person to person

Even better - slightly reading off the screen at some points

Interesting: the idea that everyone is correct, which is something that a lot of people don't believe in

Even Better: could not read off the slides as much

Interesting: How they can decide what is right or wrong

Even better: It seems like some group members know/understand the concept a little better than others

Interesting: Ultimate good is determined by a society or a culture

Even Better: Don't read right off the slide as much

I: Interesting how subjective this ideology is and how much morality can change between individuals.

E: Too many words on the slides, condense main ideas into bullet points.

Interesting there were lots of ideas

Even better Be ready to explain your thoughts about it

Interesting: I like how they are spread out.

Even better: Talan and Kaden could do less reading off the slides.

Interesting: how these ideas are kind of like individualism but based on what you say

Even better: slower pace

Interesting: I Liked the Spacing of each person

Even Better: The only critique I can give is lighten up on the amount of words per slide and try to space the information on the slide more.

I: it was interesting to learn about that in this concept if you believe there's God, you're right but you're also right if you don't believe.

E: less screen reading

I - Your content at the end was open to difference of onion which can cause the audience to think more which i really appreciated

E - I feel that at times when you looked back to the slides it did more harm than good. I think I could be a lot better if you guys for the most part do not read from the slides. The moments in which each of you went without your slides your presentations was one of if not the best. Do more of that!

Interesting: I thought your guys' opinions on moral relativism were very interesting and I agreed a lot with your opinions on the topic compared to what the primary message was.

Even Better: You guys could maybe read off the slide a little less and try to memorize some of the information from the slides so that there aren't too many words on each page.

Even better: not read right off of the slides so much

Interesting: I liked the way you guys answered the question about if it was right or wrong.

Even better: read off the slides a little less

Interesting: how something can be ok in one culture and it won't be ok in another.

Even Better: read of the screen a little less

Interesting: first one that believes in a god.

Even Better: Jacob could be interested and less reading off slides.

Interesting

Interesting Lots of information

Even better be more interesting when speaking

Interesting: This was the first idea that believed in a God.

Even better: There were multiple slides in which there really wasn't much content on the slides, 2 bullet points is not enough.

Interesting: Interesting split between Eastern and Western religions

Even Better: Don't pull up your phone and stop the flow of the presentation

I- The different viewpoints of the different religions

E- Half the group had good volume and good energy and the other half seemed to be less happy to be there and had a lesser understanding of the topic which ended up slowing down the presentation and hurt the engagement

Interesting: I thought your topic was interesting and how you compared different religions from different parts of the world.

Even Better: Could have maybe studied your notes a little more and practiced so you could continue talking and not have to try and remember information on the spot.

Interesting: I think it was interesting that religion had such a positive impact on this worldview.

Even Better: Have the notes pulled up before starting, rather than having to get them mid presentation.

I- One of the only worldviews that is solely God/religion based so far

E- Speaking louder would allow us to follow along more

Interesting: This is a very interesting worldview, and it was one worldview I was curious about.

Even better: Less mono tone

Interesting: Theism seems pretty different than the other worldviews we talked about

Even better: could be better speakers, more fluent and louder

Interesting: I liked the Amount of information that was given per slide, Verbally

Even Better:However, The slides could have been better prepared and the spoken information should have been better prepared. Make sure to stay engaged with the audience and the presentation if you are going to stay in one spot.

Interesting: Every civilization has worshipped a god of sorts at some point

Even Better: Speak with more enthusiasm

I: It is interesting that every civilization in history has a developed religion, something I would want to research and learn more about.

E: Took a minute to get into the bulk of the content, restructuring the information might have made it more easily understandable

Interesting: I like the idea to talk about hubris

Even better: maybe put some of your ideas on screen to have visual of the words

I liked how you did the bullet points and then went off on the bullet point about what it is. good information about the topics.

Could be better:

be a little louder and not have some pauses when you talking kinda just let it flow a little better.

I: it's interesting how you say that there are many Gods.

E: not enough information and couldn't answered questions clearly.

Even better: Know what you are going to say

I - I found it interesting how minimalistic your slides were. Due to the amount you both knew about each topic it wasn't a drawback, I just found it to be interesting.

E - I found you both being so spread out leaving the middle of the room a bit to baron and when you guys did every other slide back and fourth I was a little hard to follow physically but your content was still good. With one of you being in the middle of the room OR one of you doing the first half and the other doing the second could really really help the overall fluidity of your talk.

Interesting - the relationship between god and life

Even Better - showing an understanding of the different religions

Interesting: different beliefs in god

Even Better: Have the notes already pulled up

Interesting: I liked the comparison between Eastern and Western religions

Even better: Knowing the slide order and appearing more confident

Interesting: how much nationalism can vary among countries

Even Better: not read off slides as much

Interesting: A very interesting worldview and was explained pretty well

Even Better: Less reading off slides

Even better: try to not read off the slides too much

Interesting: Most basic problem is the absence of unity and cohesion

Even Better: better pronunciation of words

I - How one can believe that their nation/ something physical can be more important than a higher being

E - You all sway from side to side. You guys used a lot of filler words such as uh, uhm and so. Try to do less reading off the slides and more eye contact.

I - You say the world "manna fest esta mi". I found this very interesting because I'm not very firmilar with this word/term.

E - A little less screen reading, easy fix though

Even better: lots of reading off the screen and way too much words on every slide. Kinda of overwhelming.

very good information on the slides.

Could do better: try not reading off the slides as much.

I- I thought the comment on heros existing in nationalism was an interesting point

E- Could have practiced more so you don't just read directly off of the slides

Interesting: nationalism can vary among countries.

Even better: speak clearly.

I: Interesting emphasis on promoting a country's history in order to bring people together

E: Don't talk to each other while another presenter is talking.

Interesting: I was interested in the use of the phrase, “as an excuse” when talking about manifest destiny

Even Better: I would have loved to have seen more concise slides and more bullet points and identifying what information you need and what information you don’t need.

Interesting: I thought the ways to strengthen nationalism were interesting and I wish you guys would have talked a little bit more about it.

Even Better: I noticed you guys moved around a lot whether you were speaking or when someone else was speaking.

Interesting - how political views connect with someone's life

Even Better - look more at the audience

Interesting: Interesting relationship between god and human beings to bring people together

Even Better: Don't read off the slides, have more expression in your voice

Interesting: It was interesting how you connected it to historic events.

Even Better: A little less reading off of the slides.

Interesting: Good examples of Nationalism in history

Even better: Didn't include their opinions about Nationalism

Interesting: Humanity's most basic problem was interesting to hear from this perspective

Even Better: Less reading off of slides would make it more engaging.

Interesting: I really enjoyed the title page.

Even better: Don't look at the screen.

Interesting: how everything is connected and on the same level

Even better: could have pictures

I: Different views for different tribes.

EB: lots of words on the slides which makes it kind of difficult to follow.

Interesting: The worldview is a very interesting worldview and I liked the YouTube short.

Even Better: Less reading off the slide.

Interesting: It was interesting to see that their was no hierarchy in Indigenous worldview

Even better: should have more interesting slides

I- I found it interesting how they believe that everything in life is connected and sacred.

E- Maybe explain a little bit about the Indigenous worldview yourself before you jump directly into the video. Other visuals like pictures would be nice too.

Interesting: I thought the video you guys used was interesting and I thought it did a good job of explaining what your topic was about.

Even Better: I think if you guys would have put less words on the slides and included some pictures it would have been helpful.

Interesting: It was interesting hearing about how the gods aren't connected individually with the Indigenous but is just a part of nature

Even Better: Maybe a little fewer words on some slides, more bullet points, and not sentenced

I: it was interesting to hear how everything was connected on the same level.

E: add more visuals to the presentation.

Interesting Lots of interconnections

Even Better Add pictures or color to the slides

Interesting: Did a great job of relating the information and giving examples.

Even better: I didn't love introducing the topic with a video, and not physically explaining what your worldview means in the beginning.

I-it's interesting to know the concept of inter-collectiveness as a whole

E- probably just looking at the crowd more

Intresting: How everything is connected to nature, even the things you wouldn't think.

Even Better: Try to stand together as a group, as well as stand still.

Interesting: How hunted and fallen animals are "offered to the spirits."

Even Better: I think having some more visuals would help deliver the information in another way.

Interesting: the connectiveness between things

Even better: slides are a little wordy

I: The video was perfect, good start to your presentation

E: Try not to read too much off of the ppt.

I thought that angel could have been a little louder when speaking, otherwise good presentation.

Interesting: that there is no hierarchy and everyone has a function

Even better: summarize the points with out looking at the slide

Interesting: how everything is connected.

Even Better: Little less rocking.

I: It was interesting that you didn't mention the downsides, this by no means took away from anything it just was interesting

E: although the introduction video is solid content wise, I think I could make it feel a lot more fine tuned if the video wasn't cut off mid sentence

I: Don't believe in a god or higher power.

EB: Don't read completely off the slides.

Interesting: It was interesting how they viewed God and the phrase "Good Without God."

Even Better: Try not to read completely off of the slides/notes.

I- I found the connection to Jainism very interesting

E- Maybe focus on more eye contact and speaking to the audience

I - I found it interesting how you guys talked so much about religion, however it really benefited your whole project

E - Add more visual ques. Your groups spoken information was impecable however a few pics could go along way

Interesting: It was interesting how similar it was to scientific naturalism with the thoughts of no god, evolution, and our education driving us as a species.

Even Better: Don't ramble as much in the beginning.

Interesting: The pictures on the slides were very interesting.

Even Better: More eye contact

Interesting: this is how a lot of people live without calling it humanism

Even better: could speak a little louder

I: it was interesting that in humanism they don't believe in God, and they even say they're better without one.

E: info in the slices is there to help you in your presentation but you don't have to just read everything off from the slices.

Interesting: The critiques were very explanatory and justified well.

Even better: There were some bullets that were capitalized, and some that weren't. Stay consistent.

Interesting: Used a good example with Jainism

Even better: Could speak a little more clear

Interesting: I liked all the slides and how they were put together.

Better: try not just reading right off the notes and more eye contact

Interesting: only focuses on logic and reason

Even better: don't read the slides as much

I- not believing in a higher power per se but just fear of not being part of a supposed afterlife

E-not reading of the slides word for word

Interesting Don't believe in a higher power.

Even better Make more eye contact

Even better: Less words on the slides then it should be great.

Interesting: that they do not believe in a god

Even better: read less of what is on the slides or on notes

Interesting: I thought your topic was interesting and your group did a good job of putting it into perspective and making it easier to understand.

Even Better: Your group could do a little better job of not reading off of notes or the slides but overall, you did a good job of not looking at them.

Interesting: how there is a fear of a god

Even better: don't read off the slides

Informative: Don't believe in a god

Even better: Not as much reading off the slide.

Interesting - how this worldview values how humans shape their own life

Even Better - less reading off the slides

Even better more visuals on the slides.

Interesting: I enjoyed the reference to the Bible verse and the video.

Even better: As you get more comfortable, try to refer less to notecards to a point where you don't need them anymore.

Interesting: I liked the example of Gekko

Even better: read off the slides a little less

Interesting: It was interesting how humanity's most basic problem was greed

Even Better: Look at the audience more

Interesting: I thought it was interesting and cool to include a Bible verse.

Even Better: Try looking up towards the audience a little more.

I- I found it interesting how often ethical ideals were brought up. I didn't previously know the importance of ethics in this ideology.

E- Try not to sway or fidget so much

Interesting the bible verse was cool

Even better Look at the audience a little bit more

Interesting:I really enjoyed the reference of the bible verse in the presentation.

Better: could be a little better not reading just off the not card.

Interesting: the solution is not simple as it requires cooperation from everybody

Even better: look at the audience more

Interesting: The slides were very interesting and well structured

Even Better: Read off slides less

Intresting: Intresting how your beliefs show you where you stand on this topic.

Even Better: Talked to the auidence instead of reading off slides

Interesting: the bible verse part

Even better: less reading directly from slides or notes

Interesting: I thought your slide on God and how it relates to your topic was very interesting and I like how you mentioned something from the Enron Video.

Even Better: You guys could read off of the slides a little bit less, but you did a good job overall of not reading off the slides.

Interesting: I like the bible verse relating to consumerism.

Even Better: less reading of the note cards.

I: The discussion of greed was interesting

E: Good idea with notecards- with more practice you may not need to rely on them as much

I - I found it interesting that you made notecards. It shows you all put time in ahead of time.

E - if anything at all maybe slightly less reading off of notes. Other than that your guys presentation was very strong

Interesting: how advertising is a big part of ethics that preside people

Even Better: just look up at the audience when looking at the cards