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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear John,</p><p>I hope this letter finds you in good health and great spirits. I am thrilled to receive your letter and am responding to you about my new job.</p><p><mark>I just accepted a new job because my previous career is boring and low salary and I want to change other work(x) place (separated paragraph).</mark>&nbsp; I currently work as a water supply and drainage engineer at the ABC firm with the primary role is planning <mark>project(s)</mark> and <mark>design(ing)</mark> water supply and drainage systems. My new position is interesting and active. I often travel business. Additionally, I was also paid higher than before.</p><p>I believe that with the provided information you will have a better understanding of my new job. If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me without hesitation. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.</p><p>Best regards,</p><p>David</p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p><br></p><p>In modern days, the rapid advancement of technology has led to the fact that machinery will gradually replace <mark>(the)&nbsp;human</mark> workforce. there is a believe(belief) that machines will replace<s><mark> for </mark></s>human labor. This issue has two problems and two solutions. This essay will discuss these issues in detail.</p><p>There are two reasons for this issue. First of all, <mark>M</mark>achinery has higher productivity and accuracy compared to manual labor. This leads business owners to use machines instead of humans. The use of machines instead of humans causes unemployment, which leads to poverty and social problems.</p><p>To tackle this issue, there are two solutions this issue has two impacts. First of all, Vocational training and proposing new job opportunities.<mark> (Try to complete)</mark></p><p>In short, the problems involve the use of machines instead of humans causes unemployment, which leads to poverty and social problems. And the solutions include Vocational training and propos<mark>ing(e)</mark> new job opportunities. The task <mark>need(s</mark>) to be conducted by the government and business <mark>accosiations</mark>. (wrong spelling)</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear John,</p><p>I hope my email finds you well (<mark>and</mark>) in the best health and spirit. I am writing to tell you about<mark> I</mark>nfection <mark>P</mark>revention and <mark>C</mark>ontrol job which I have just offered.</p><p>As you know, before coming to my new job, I worked as an administrative employee <mark>that(which)</mark> made me feel bad. I had to go to work at 6:30 every morning to prepare for daily work. All I have to do is read the medical records, find errors and fill out the checklist. That makes me feel lazier.</p><p>Being the <mark>I</mark>nfection <mark>P</mark>revention and <mark>C</mark>ontrol practitioner, I conduct<s><mark>s</mark> </s>rounds, discuss<s><mark>es</mark></s> and monitor<s><mark>s</mark></s> infection prevention practices with staff members, maintain<s><mark>s</mark></s> records for each case of healthcare-associated infection, train<s><mark>s</mark></s> staff members on<mark> (the) </mark>implementation of infection prevention. Although<mark> i </mark>have to do more in the new role, <mark>i (can) </mark>get a higher salary and enlarge my knowledge.</p><p>Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon</p><p>Yours sincerely,</p><p>Jame</p><p><br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Test 1</strong></p><p>Dear John,</p><p>How have you been recently? I hope my email finds you well in the best of health and spirits. As you know, I am moving to live in Can Tho <s><mark>from</mark></s> this year, and I have also started a new job. So, I am writing to tell you about my new job and recent changes.</p><p><br></p><p>Firstly, I changed jobs because I found that this new opportunity led me to step out of my comfort zone and try new things. I can learn new skills and apply my knowledge from university, which is quite exciting for me.</p><p><br></p><p>Secondly, in my new position, I am assigned to serve at the reference desk. I help to solve problems for users when they face difficulties in research or publishing their works in medical journals. It's a challenging but fulfilling role that aligns well with my passion for helping others.</p><p><br></p><p>Thirdly, I have also moved into a new house that is conveniently located near my workplace and has a friendly neighborhood. The change of scenery has been refreshing, and I'm enjoying settling into my new home.</p><p><br></p><p>I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.</p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Celina</p><p><br></p><p><strong>Test 2</strong></p><p><br></p><p>The world has changed a lot, but some negatives have happened. One of them is the advances in technology leading to the fact that the human workforce is gradually replaced with machinery. However, there are both pros and cons to consider with everything, and this trend is certainly no exception. Fortunately, there are several ways to solve these problems. This essay will discuss the main problems related to this issue and suggest some solutions to improve the situation.</p><p><br></p><p><s><mark>Many people argue that </mark></s>advances in technology lead to the fact that the human workforce is gradually replaced with machinery. One of the significant results of this trend is causing unemployment and economic challenges. <mark>Example? </mark>To detail this issue, workers in various industries may find themselves obsolete due to the automation of tasks that previously performed by humans. For examples, robots are increasingly taking over tasks To tackle this problems governments and businesses can invest in retraining programs to equip workers with new skills, making them adaptable to the changing job market. This helps minimiz<s><mark>ing </mark></s>the negative impact on employment.</p><p><br></p><p>Another result of this trend is<mark> technology(ical) advancing(ment)</mark> can lead to environmental issues. <mark>It(This) </mark>is because automated machinery often<mark> use(s)</mark> non-renewable energy sources, contributing to pollution. For instance<s><mark>s</mark></s><mark>(,)</mark><s><mark> </mark></s>manufacturing plants using automated systems may increase their carbon footprint. However, I believe that promoting the use of sustainable technologies and renewable energy sources can help solve this problem. So, governments and businesses should invest in research and development to create eco-friendly and automated processes. <mark>results?</mark></p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, advances in technology leading to the replacement of the human workforce with machinery pose various problems. The responsibility for addressing these issues lies not only with the government but also with businesses, educational institutions, and society as a whole. If the solutions above are applied, we can mitigate the negative impacts as well as the adaption of advancing technology in modern society.</p><p><br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Part 1</strong></p><p>Dear John,</p><p><br></p><p>I hope my mail finds you well in the best of health and spirits.<mark> I writing your new job???.</mark></p><p><br></p><p>I took a new job because my previous job was low<mark>(-)</mark> paying and I wanted to change to another workplace. (1 line spacing). Currently, I am working at the post office in Can Tho with the main role being project planning and post office operations. Office hours are from Monday to Friday morning from 8:00 am to 11:00 pm from 1:30 to 5:00 pm. My new position is very exciting and dynamic. I often travel for work.</p><p>I believe that with the information provided<mark>(,) y</mark>ou will better understand my new job. <mark>If you have any questions, please contact me without hesitation (share without applying for a  job???). </mark>I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.</p><p>Best Regards,</p><p>John</p><p><br></p><p><strong>Part 2 (out of the topic)</strong></p><p>In recent times, the appearance of an artificial intelligence <mark>(AI) tool called ChatGPT(technology nói chung ở đây bạn đang lạc đề nói về AI)</mark>, with all the capabilities such as: writing, solving math..., has made users very excited. After a period of experience, people begin to wonder about the possibility that<mark> ChatGPT</mark> and later many more and more powerful AI products can threaten a series of human jobs. However, there are reasons why AI cannot replace humans in the workspace</p><p>When faced with the rapid development of AI technology in today's labor market, employers can think about automated processes that make work easier, faster and more efficient. On the other hand, employees may fear losing their jobs and being replaced by machines.</p><p><br></p><p>Although AI is designed to replace manual labor by performing work faster and more efficiently, it cannot replace the need for human input in the workspace. In this article, you will see why humans are still extremely valuable in the workplace and cannot be completely replaced by AI.</p><p><br></p><p>Firstly, AI is not something to be afraid of. However, you must enhance your capabilities and skills to avoid being replaced by AI. Improve your skills, keep up with the latest trends in your field, and innovate and create. Therefore, you can rest assured that humans will always have an advantage over AI.</p><p><br></p><p>In short, AI is not something to be afraid of. However, you must enhance your capabilities and skills to avoid being replaced by AI. Improve your skills, keep up with the latest trends in your field, and innovate and create. Therefore, you can rest assured that humans will always have an advantage over AI.</p><p><br></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>Part 1 </strong></p><p>Dear John,</p><p>I hope this letter finds you well. I am excited to share some news about a significant change in my professional life. After much contemplation, I decided to move on from my position at ABC English Center to embrace a new opportunity. Having worked several years at ABC, I felt it was time for a change.</p><p><br></p><p>Honestly, I opted to alter since I was looking for new challenges and growth. In other words, I wish to take on more responsibilities and expand my professional horizons. I wanted a role aligned more closely with my skills and ambitions, so I am now a leader in human resource management at Gia Viet, which is not just a teacher but also a captain. At ABC, while I cherished my time educating students, I found my skills and potential were underutilized.</p><p><br></p><p>My new role at Gia Viet is both exhilarating and demanding. As a leader, I am now involved in curriculum development, administrative decisions, and mentoring new teachers, in addition to my teaching duties. It truly leverages my expertise and experience in English language teaching. This shift has been refreshing and invigorating, offering me an opportunity to impact the learning process more significantly.</p><p><br></p><p>Aside from work, I recently fulfilled a dream of mine: visiting Paris, my favourite destination! The city was everything I imagined and more. Strolling along the Seine and visiting the Louvre, or the breathtaking view from the Eiffel Tower, were experiences I will stick in my mind forever. The blend of art, culture, and history in every corner of Paris was truly mesmerizing.</p><p><br></p><p>I cannot wait to hear what you have been up to as well. Do write back when you can. I am looking forward to catching up on your latest adventures.</p><p><br></p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Christ</p><p><br></p><p>Part2</p><p>In today’s modern world, there is no denying the fact that the relentless march of technology has revolutionized our workplaces, leading to a significant shift from human labor to automation. This state of affairs can be attributed to a host of factors, and some viable solutions that can be adopted to alleviate this problem will be outlined in this essay.</p><p><br></p><p>There are two main contributors to this shift. Chief among these is that automation and artificial intelligence technologies have become increasingly sophisticated, allowing machines to perform tasks more efficiently than humans in certain industries. To illustrate, manufacturing plants now heavily rely on robotic systems to assemble products, leading to a reduction in the need for human labor. Added to this is the fact that businesses are often motivated by cost-cutting measures, and investing in automation can lead to long-term financial benefits for companies. In other words, the economic incentive to replace human workers with machines is a significant driving force behind this trend.</p><p><br></p><p>The problem of unemployment and job displacement can be addressed in several ways. Firstly, an immediate remedy is that governments and businesses should invest in retraining programs to equip workers with the skills necessary for emerging industries. For example, a former assembly line worker can undergo training in programming or maintenance of robotic systems. A long-term solution to this is the promotion of entrepreneurship and the creation of small businesses, which can absorb the displaced workforce. Another effective way is that educational institutions should adapt their curricula to focus on skills that are less susceptible to automation, such as critical thinking, creativity, and emotional intelligence. This can be seen in initiatives where schools emphasize project-based learning and interdisciplinary studies.</p><p><br></p><p>In conclusion, recent advances in technology leading to the replacement of human workers with machinery are driven by technological sophistication and economic incentives. However, I believe this issue can be well-tackled if the proposed solutions, such as retraining programs, promotion of entrepreneurship, and educational reform, are implemented. By proactively addressing the challenges posed by automation, society can ensure a smoother transition for the workforce into a technologically advanced future.</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>letter</p><p>Dear John,</p><p>I hope my letter finds you well in the best of health and spirits. How are you and your family? I have not seen you for a long time since we <s><mark>have</mark></s> finished the volunteer work in <s>(the) </s>K association. What do you do for work right now? I am writing to tell you about my new job.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Do you remember that I told you before I <s><mark>have </mark></s>wanted to become an engineer <mark>of(for)</mark> F company, it is a company have a good reputation for beautiful house. So, I want to explode my ability by this my changing. In my new company, I am worked in a group which contains many brilliant people, we discuss together about ideas in architect of houses. This is a precious chance for me enhance my major skill. Anyway, my company is still in the hiring staff time. <mark>If you are interest in my company, I can give you some necessary information for the intervewing. I hope that we can have a chance to work together there as the time we were in K association. (third paragraph)</mark></p><p><mark>&nbsp;</mark></p><p>I have to go now. Write to me when you have spare time. I am<mark> look(ing) f</mark>orward to hearing from you soon.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Best Regards,</p><p>Lisa.</p><p><br></p><p>essay</p><p>The world has changed a lot. One of which is the development of technology. Therefore, the using of machinery to replace of human workforce is gradually becoming popular in many advance<mark>(d)</mark> countries. This essay will discuss <s><mark>about</mark></s> some problems that it causes and offer some solutions to tackle these issues in detail.</p><p><s><mark>t</mark></s>he first problem that <mark>(the)</mark> human workforce is gradually replaced with machinery is the unemployed. When companies and factories more and more prefer to use <mark>advance(d</mark>) machines for <mark>its(their)</mark> <mark>producing(production</mark>), a lot of people who are working there will lost(lose) <mark>the(ir)</mark> <mark>job(s</mark>) by their companies('s) staff cuts. This <mark>makes(has) </mark>a potential negative impact<mark> to(on)</mark> society because many people cannot<s><mark> to</mark></s> pay their expenses by <s><mark>(being)</mark></s> unemployed. The solution to address this problem is government should promote a policy to keep the balance between<s><mark> the</mark></s> machinery and <s><mark>the </mark></s>traditional labor. <mark>results?</mark></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>The other issue is <mark>link(ing) to</mark> social evils. For instance, when many people <s><mark>are in the</mark></s> lack of money situation by <mark>lost(losing) job(s</mark>), they <mark>easy(ily)</mark> commit <s><mark>to</mark></s> social evils such as kidnap or robbery even more serious mistakes. To tackle this issue, the authorization should have a method to support<s><mark>s</mark></s> citizen<mark>(s)</mark> who are unemployed to look<s><mark>ing </mark></s>for other job<mark>(s)</mark> for lives.<mark> Results?</mark></p><p><mark>&nbsp;</mark></p><p>To sum up, the world is developing day by day. Using machinery more and more is preferred by many countries. In my opinion, <mark>(the) </mark>government should be known how to use the machinery a<mark>pp(r)o</mark>ppriately to keep the balance between the machinery and traditional labor. It contributes to thrive<mark>(ing)</mark> development of each country for <mark>a(the)</mark> long term.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Part 1:</p><p>Dear John,</p><p>How are you? I hope you are fine. (No line spacing)</p><p>I am writing this letter to reply question that you are wondering.</p><p>First of all, I changed jobs because I felt I was no longer suitable for it. For example, it is quite far from my house and the salary is not high. The cost of living is very expensive so I need to find a better job to make ends meet.</p><p>Secondly, I found a new job <mark>(with) </mark>a pretty good salary. I work in the marketing field, <mark>(and)</mark> I can be comfortable with my time but I must ensure the quality of my work. </p><p>Thirdly, my colleagues at my place are also new but I will soon get to know them. At my company, I have overtime, I often work overtime to earn more income.</p><p>I hope respond to my letter. Now I have to go back to work.</p><p>Best regard, </p><p>David</p><p>Part 2:</p><p> Technology is currently very popular in everyone's life. It is widely used in electronic devices, including machinery.</p><p>There are 2 causes and 2 solutions <mark>(to) </mark>each problem. This essay will discuss these issues.</p><p> One of the primary reasons is applying machinery technology to work will help save costs. While initial investments in automation technology can be significant, over time, the cost of maintaining and operating machines is often lower than employing a human workforce. Companies may choose to automate certain tasks to reduce labor costs and enhance profitability. The immediate solution is to use the workforce for manual work, and let machines do the work that requires complexity.</p><p>Another reason is increased productivity and efficiency. Thanks to the application of technology, productivity and efficiency will increase. Machines can often perform tasks more quickly and consistently than humans, leading to increased productivity and efficiency in many industries. This can be particularly attractive to businesses looking to optimize their operations and reduce costs. The solution is that people should learn how to use machines to do their jobs instead of letting the machines do it themselves.</p><p>In short, it is inevitable that machines will gradually replace the labor force. <mark>Summary sentence?</mark> We should develop it further to bring profits to businesses. The government should issue a policy to train people to know how to use machines to improve employment. It suggests we <mark>be</mark> aware of these issues.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear John,</p><p>How are you and your family these days? Today, I am writing this email to you to talk about my new job. Last week, I changed my job because it is not suitable for me and the wage is low. I have found a new job. It is very suitable for me. My new colleagues are very kind and help me a lot. The wage is also higher. Thanks to my new job, my life is more stable. I plan to <mark>b(u)y</mark> a house at the end of the year</p><p>I am looking forward to hearing from you soon</p><p>Best wishes,</p><p>Sara</p><ul><li><p><mark>Xuống hàng cho từng vấn đề khi trình bày</mark></p></li><li><p><mark>Tham khảo lại các model letter và follow letter outline</mark></p></li></ul><p><br></p><p>ESSAY</p><p>Nowadays, the trend of using machines in life is becoming more and more popular because it is very convenient. However, machines replac<s><mark>e</mark></s>ing <mark>(the) </mark>human workforce has many disadvantages.There are many problems and solutions <mark>of(to)</mark> this<mark>(these)</mark> problem<mark>(s) </mark>will be discussed in the following essay.</p><p><br></p><p>It is easy to see that the most important problem is making (the) human workforce<s><mark> are</mark></s> unemployed because robots and smart machines are gradually replacing humans in fields such as shopping, tourism, hotels, and house cleaning services. For example, it replaces hotel staff. If a customer needs a cup <mark>(of) </mark>water, the robot can<s><mark> take </mark></s>bring the water to where people need<s><mark>s</mark></s> it. The solution to this problem is that workers need to improve their knowledge and behavioral skills to avoid being eliminated. For example, people study abroad and join many skill clubs. This is something that intelligent machines can hardly have</p><p><br></p><p>Along with unemployment, machines replacing people also causes psychological stress for workers.....</p><p><br></p><p>In <mark>sho(r)t</mark>,the problem of unemployment and psychological stress <mark>(not a sentence) </mark>when machines replace humans is difficult to avoid, so compatible solutions are needed to adapt to life. Everyone including families, schools<mark>(,) </mark>and governments should raise awareness and work together to tackle this problem effectively.</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear John,</p><p><br></p><p>I hope my email finds you well in the best of health and spirits. I'm writing to you about my new job.</p><p><br></p><p><mark>Remember our talk last time? (Make it a question)</mark> I really enjoyed to share my life and my career with you. After a long time<mark> (of)</mark> consideration and preparation, I felt stressed and pressured by the working environment. So<mark>(,)</mark> I changed my job to another environment.</p><p><br></p><p><mark>At (In) </mark>this new environment, I have met many friendly co-workers. Everyone enthusiastically taught me and helped me get used to the job quickly. The working environment here is modern with new machines. It can serve the essential needs of everyone. The company has a high salary and bonus with other support packages for employees.</p><p><br></p><p>Currently, I'm also supported <mark>to learn (in learning)</mark> to improve my professional qualifications and soft skills to serve my job well such as English skill<mark>(s)</mark>, Chinese skill<mark>(s)</mark>, office computer skills, etc.</p><p><br></p><p>How is your work now? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.</p><p><br></p><p>Best wishes,</p><p>Jenny</p><p>--------------------------------------------</p><p>Nowadays, technological advances help to gradually replace the human workforce with machinery. Although people can benefit a lot from replacement, I think there are some drawbacks to this trend. This issue has many problems such as the social interaction among workers, the workers being lazier and increasing the unemployment rate. This essay will discuss these issues in detail.</p><p><br></p><p>First of all, the social interaction among workers is less. They have to work with machines all the time, they just focus on the machines instead of communicating with their co-workers.<mark> Example? </mark>The solution is <mark>(that) </mark>the company can organize social activities such as team building, holding staff parties on national holidays, going travel and so on. Through these activities, workers have a chance to talk and share their work experience together.</p><p><br></p><p><mark>Secondly, this trend has made workers lazier because they tend to heavily depend on machines. For example, they are unwilling and even refuse to fulfill their task by hand when a technical problem like power-cut occurs.</mark></p><p><br></p><p><mark>Thirdly, this trend may lead to increase the unemployment rate. As machines can play an important  </mark></p><p><mark>--&gt; Try to make it complete</mark></p><p>In conclusion, machines are made by people(<mark>,)</mark> but <mark>people's intelligence and creation(not a sentence)</mark>.(,) So, people in this world <mark>can't</mark> depend on machines and be controlled by them. Nowadays, the government, the factory management can take the above mentioned measures to make a great contribution to minimizing this problem.</p>]]></description>
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