WRITING ESSAY VSTEP by Jennifer Hà https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i en-us 2023-10-06 14:45:08 UTC 2023-10-15 04:11:46 UTC hello@padlet.com Khanh Hoa https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2735778905 Dear Jean!
I'm sorry I haven't written for such a long time in that I am super busy for my C1 upcoming examination.
Hi! How are you? Congratulation on your passing interview round.
It quite surprised to hear that An wrote an email for you to ask for permission to stay at your house, immediately, I'am willing to share with you about her.
An and I have been friends for over 3 years. For me, An is a really warm- hearted person.  She is the one that I'm nice to share with her about my feeling or my story in that I know she can give me a lot of useful advices. She like playing volleyball and that is the reason why she very tall and energetic . Moreover, she really into singing, especially singing ballad songs but her voice quite...... This time, An went to London to continue pursuing her dream, becoming a doctor so it's her honnor to recieve your family's help.
As a friend, I am very glad if you and your parents accept her.
Best wishes !
- Đừng dùng dấu chấm cảm ! Ở đầu và cuối mà dùng dấu phẩy
- Thiêu động từ tobe quá nhiều
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]]> 2023-10-06 15:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2735778905 Quảng https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736242915 Dear Jane, 

I’m sory i haven’t written in touch for such a long time as i am super busy for my C1 upcoming examination. How it’s going? I have just received your email .I'm glad to hear that An reached out to you for a possible accommodation during her stay. I’m eager to share with you about her. We have been the best friend for ten years, so  i understand her personality and interests very well. An is a wonderful person and I believe she will fit well with your family. She has a warm and friendly personality, always eager to engage in meaningful conversations. Her hobbies include photography, reading, and exploring different cultures. An is also passionate about outdoor activities, such as cycling, jogging,… Currently, she went to London to pursue her dream of becoming a graphic designer. Therefore, she really needs your family's help and believe her stay with your family will be a positive experience for both parties.
Đoạn này cụt nè, phải "kết luận" và give my best regards to your family.....
I hope your family will help her.
Best wishes,                            Bài này em cơ bản viết được, không có vấn đề gì, đạt yêu cầu  3/4 điểm
]]> 2023-10-07 03:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736242915 Hà Châu https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736275226 Dear Jane
( thiếu dấu phẩy)
Many thanks for your email. It was great to hear from you recently, I hope your family is well and I wanted ( want) to share with you some exciting news about An  ???
First, I will tell you about An's wonderful personality (Không cần nố như vậy). She is extremely outgoing and friendly, always bringing / brings positive energy to every situation, always helping people feel comfortable. In addition, An also has an inquisitive personality (không cần đâu) , she is always eager to learn about new cultures and explore different perspectives.??? sai từ = places?

An likes listening to music. That's probably An's only hobby when she has free time. She listens to a lot of different genres of music from pop to classical and I think when she comes to London she will be fascinated by the music style here. An is also a person who craves knowledge. insatiable,  ok lắm các từ vựng tốt especially in the fields of history, literature, and art.
An told me that this trip was to exchange and learn between countries. An speaks English very well and I think she will soon be able to adapt to the environment in London. This trip may be quite long, so An plans to work part-time at some souvenir shops to learn more from the people here.
I think An can be suitable for a modern family like yours because her personality is quite agile. If you have any advice or suggestions for An, please share! I'm sure she will be happy to receive that advice ( tot)
I hope you enjoy receiving my emails. My best wishes to your family. See you again in the near future.
Lots of love, Jane.       - Đa dạng từ vựng
- Cấu trúc ổn
- Sai lỗi cơ bản về thì 


]]> 2023-10-07 05:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736275226 Hà Vy https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736292340 Dear Jane,
I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch for a long time in that I am super busy for my VSTEP upcoming examination.But it quite surprised to hear that you wrote an email for me to ask about An , immediately, I am willing to share with you about her.For me , she is a helpful and humorous girl.You know she is always willing to help people around her. Besides her sense of humor will make you laugh all day . Regarding An’s hobbies , she is a big fan of playing tennis and piano. This piece of information definitely excites you , right? Because as I know, you are also into playing tennis. If you live with her , you two can experience relaxing moments together when playing tennis. About her ability of playing the piano , i am sure you  may love it.I tell you a secret that she will enroll at London College of Music. That is why she moves to London. That is some information I know about An and I think she will be amazing friend for you , please send my regards to your family    
Lots of loves,
Your friend]]> 2023-10-07 06:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736292340 Linh https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736312841

Dear Jane
Thank you for your email. It was nice to hear from you recently, i hope your family are well and i wanted to share some exciting news with you about our friend,An, who is soon going to embark on a study abroad adventure in London.
First of all, when talking about An, she is a very friendly and approachable person. An is an extrovert so she gets along well with her friends and she is quite good at working in groups.
Second, she enjoys reading books and learning about world history. I think that when she goes there she will be attracted by the historical and cultural museums here. In addition, she cooks very well and she knows how to make the house neat and cozy. If you are single, she is very suitable for you.
Furthermore, she is also very good at studying and has a high sense of responsibility towards everyone, so she was honored to be sent to London to be an exchange student this summer. In addition to having a good education, she also worked part-time at a travel company while in Vietnam, so she has a lot of experience and the ability to adapt flexibly in all situations and she really needs your help abroad so I hope you will help her.
Sorry to end here because now I have to go to school. Please send my best wishes to your family. Wishing you and your family always joy and happiness. See you soon!
Lots of love,Jane.
]]> 2023-10-07 07:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736312841 Thuý Ngân https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736536365 Dear Jane,

Many thanks for your recent email. I am sorry I have not been in touch for a long time in that I am super busy for my C1 upcoming examination. I’m glad to hear that An sent an email for you to request an accommodation to live with your family. Surely I am glad to tell you about her. 

An is a lovely and kind girl. I have been in contact with her for a long time and An is more active than any girl I have ever met. She is an extrovert person so she is extremely friendly and especially always looking for opportunities to make friends with foreigners.

Bedsides, I can guarantee that you and An will get along very well because she loves cycling, walking and swimming like you. Interestingly, An always knows how to impress people with the funny stories she tells. Additionally, she is a patient person. Unlike me who can get angry easily. In term of being patient, I am learning a lot from her.

As a friend of An. I hope you will accept her offer, we will be glad to hear that.

Lots of love, Jane.]]> 2023-10-07 15:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2736536365 Trần Thảo https://padlet.com/jenniferha311/l61lyk24dqismm0i/wish/2746437871 Dear Jane,
Many thanks for your email. I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch for such a long time that I am super busy for my B2 upcoming examination. How’s it going? I've just received your letter. I'm glad to hear that An sent and email for you to ask for an accommodation. I'm willing to share with you about her. 
An and I have played together for a long time so that I really understand her. She is a hilarious and lovely girl. It's very interesting to talking with her because she can make you laugh all day. She really into playing sport like badminton and volleyball. Her hobbies are listening to music and watching films. This summer, she went to London to take a course.
As a friend, I hope you and your family will accept her offer.
Remember to give my best regards to your family,
Lots of love,
Your friend

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