https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6 en-us 2021-01-26 18:57:26 UTC 2024-09-30 08:21:36 UTC hello@padlet.com mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1128479460 2021-01-26 18:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1128479460 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1128585335 https://www.wordreference.com/]]> 2021-01-26 19:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1128585335 adinabalas19 https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1133281434 This is a very good translation that has been seriously worked on. There are notes throughout the text and the unknown terms have been researched in the dictionary. I think the area that needs improvement is the punctuation, as some commas are missing. The English dialogue format also ought to be revised, as well as the verb "was" at the beginning of the text "Once upon a time there was three bears...", as it is followed by the plural form of the noun "bear". Moreover, in this sentence, "The soup was too hot to eat it", I would omit the "it" at the end, and here, "the delicious soup that Mama bear had done/made", I would go for the "made". Also, in the sentence "I wonder if they would share their soup with me…" I would change the tense "would share" as in the source text "si ellos compartirán su sopa conmigo…" the verb "compartirán" is conjugated according to the future simple tense. 
Overall, I consider that the target text was translated with well-chosen words in order to replace the source text's ones. ]]> 2021-01-27 18:52:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1133281434 https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1139046344 Be sure to review capitalization of proper names of the characters in the story (see source text). 
The only thing I would add to Adina's comments is to question why you decided to go with the adjective "wicked". You need to consider the expressive meaning of choosing between synonyms.

]]> 2021-01-29 00:35:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1139046344 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170169124 2021-02-05 20:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170169124 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170273539 2021-02-05 20:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170273539 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170299194 2021-02-05 21:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170299194 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170722928 2021-02-06 02:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1170722928 Nigel_Manu https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1183978032 look at your table of contents, numbers 12(handcrafts spelling), 16(spelling), 18(the?), 26(lodging)
50(night club instead of evening center)]]> 2021-02-09 18:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1183978032 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1209553147 2021-02-17 03:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1209553147 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1209557326 2021-02-17 03:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1209557326 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1248742810 2021-02-27 21:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1248742810 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1248743115 2021-02-27 21:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1248743115 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1257717208 2021-03-02 11:12:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1257717208 https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1260115770 Its a good start, however I would watch out for the sentences and punctuation. As well as the flow of each sentence depending on which strategy you chose.
The gender from Spanish to English needs to be revised
Perhaps double checking certain meanings of cultural specific items and names
Don't forget to add and translate the epigraph

]]> 2021-03-02 18:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1260115770 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1288981707 2021-03-09 17:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1288981707 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344014210 2021-03-23 16:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344014210 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344015557 2021-03-23 16:50:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344015557 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344018074 2021-03-23 16:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1344018074 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1368864575 2021-03-30 17:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1368864575 https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1368906157 Good use of formal equivalence, along with appropriate and accurate word choice. Sentence structure is properly formulated as well. The word choice is accurate but lacks a bit of poetic allure to them, otherwise everything is solid and the flow of the poem is good. ]]> 2021-03-30 17:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1368906157 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1397622260 2021-04-08 20:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1397622260 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465496068 2021-04-27 17:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465496068 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465500143 2021-04-27 17:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465500143 mariejoechk https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465501605 2021-04-27 17:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465501605 alexvelicu123 https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465555573 Overall, the translation is good. However, does it look readable for children? 
Does the translation respect all conditions asked by the client, such as a 2-page long recipe, and enticing to children?
While the translation is well done, I think that it could be more children-oriented because it sounds and looks very formal for a children's cookbook.
Apart from that, I think the recipe is very clear!]]> 2021-04-27 17:30:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mariejoechk/l4fg46ecd49v9sz6/wish/1465555573