https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin MAKE SURE YOU LOG IN FOR CREDIT. Using the rubric as a guide, give each artwork constructive feedback. Each post should contain feedback on at least 2 of the 4 rubric criteria. Move clockwise around your table (do not skip seats) and label each post with the artist's name (name tags should be displayed with work). en-us 2017-03-17 13:48:04 UTC 2025-10-19 10:50:11 UTC hello@padlet.com llaney1 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160794686 Design - The drawings you repeated were added in a really interesting way.  I like how you added parts of the portrait into circles.  However, I do not see symbolism or a story. 
Balance - There are a lot of shapes and images in the bottom left corner.  To create more balance, you could add more to the top right part of the collage.]]> 2017-03-17 13:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160794686 llaney1 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160803121 Repetition - You only have the hand drawn once in your design.  In order to create a rhythm, you should repeat the hand around your focal point.
Movement - Many of your shapes are overlapping which creates great movement in the piece.  My eye follows along  leaves up to the face.  The hand, however, seems to be randomly floating in the background.  I think it should be repeated and overlapped to fix the problem.]]> 2017-03-17 14:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160803121 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856421 Movement- you should try to fill space more on the paper but overlapping is great.

Repetition- you should try to repeat things more often to create a better pattern or rhythm.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856421 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856471 Movement - She can show more overlapping.
Repetition - She have some of the same drawing she can draw some more.
Visual Balance -  She can put some drawing overlapping to have more balance. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856471 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856519 design- several drawings and patterns were traced but I don't see symbolism. 
repetition- is use very nicely and I liked the way you used old drawings to fill in space. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856519 10035667 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856561 Visual Balance- you filled your space in an even way. no blank space looks random, or out of place. it's nicely spread out. 
Movement- your shapes have been arranged in a nice way. it does guide my eyes through the artwork. however, you could overlap a little bit more. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856561 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856573 2017-03-17 17:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856573 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856586 Visual Balance: The shapes could be more neatly drawn.
Planning & Design : You could have used a specific way on a interesting illustration .

]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856586 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856662 He does repetition really well as he repeats the masks and it brings you down the page. I would recommend more overlapping.]]> 2017-03-17 17:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856662 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856691 Repetition: I see a lot of repetition with shapes instead of art work. I don't see any rhythm or pattern that enhances the artwork. You should add more drawings that are yours so that there can be rhythm.
Movement: There is a lot of movement but I think it is too much movement. Maybe take out some of the patterns in your self-portrait drawings so that it is not so cluttered.  

]]> 2017-03-17 17:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856691 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856731 Design - Nice movement with the leaves . Alot of emphasis on the face . 

Balance - It shows great balance because im focusing on one part of the picture and it makes the background emphasized. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856731 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856733 Movement--You should overlap more to inspire movement.

Repitition--Try repeating shapes more to build rhythm. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856733 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856873 You need to add more details in your face and you also need more images. You only have one image and it is not complete. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856873 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856892 Movement- Your movement was very well done. But there are some marks that you missed tracing 

]]> 2017-03-17 17:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856892 00029886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856941 Movement- Your movement is very well done, it exceeds expectations. But maybe you could connect the three roses, on the top and the bottom, together.

Visual Balance- Exceeds expectations, very well done.]]> 2017-03-17 17:27:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160856941 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857415 I see alot  of patterns. But I'm not sure of what is the focal point. You overlapped a little to much to the point were I can't see the figures. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:28:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857415 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857474 Movement: A lot of overlapping was used in your drawing of the clouds and created a path for my eyes to follow nicely although nothing overlapped your face 
Visual Balance: There are some shaped and imagery in your drawing but does not look distributed throughout. lacks some composition ]]> 2017-03-17 17:29:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857474 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857774 Visual Balance--Your work is really balanced, but it does look a bit heavier around the center.

Suggestion-- You should also try putting the words you have on the paper in the upper half of the page to create more balance and unity.]]> 2017-03-17 17:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857774 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857821 He does well with repetition as certain shapes are repeated, he could use more visual balance throughout the artwork and use more space.]]> 2017-03-17 17:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857821 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857915 Design - the concept is nice but she could've put more time into it . 

Movement- It shows movement because the clouds are moving in a horizontal motion. Nice job.]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857915 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857921 Movement - He can have some more overlapping objects in his drawing.
Visual Balance - He could put some of the same objects on both sizes.
Movement - Is very good a lot of objects is overlapping. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160857921 10035667 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858011 Planning and Design- your artwork shows some original drawings. and i see your symbolism/ meaning because of your repetition/pattern. it looks really good. 
Visual Balance- your overlapping, and shapes are spreader out nicely and evenly. however, there are some unbalanced blank spaces, but other that it looks balanced.]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858011 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858017 Repetition-you should repeat more things to have a beter pattern or rhythm.

Movement-you should try arranging more to create more overlapping to make the drawing stand out.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858017 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858045 Visual Balance: There are very little drawings to create balance but the drawings look good. Add more drawings and try to overlap them to make a balance between everything. 
Repetition: There is no pattern or rhythm. Overlap your drawings. Try to have a story in your art to create rhythm. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858045 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858057 There's a lot of details and uniqueness in this drawing and her use of the scissors is really nice ]]> 2017-03-17 17:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858057 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858112 Visual Balance- was used beautifully.
Movement- there is a lot of overlapping and the way things are set it guides my eyes through smoothly]]> 2017-03-17 17:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858112 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858160 I see many pictures maybe add more details to the back ground because tgeres nothing and it just looks really plain ]]> 2017-03-17 17:32:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858160 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858177 There's no overlap, therefore I'm not sure what I'm supposed to look at first. You have alot  of dead spots. There is no visible pattern or rhythm. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858177 00029886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858219 Movement- The background is connected making the artwork a lot more smooth, Exceeds Expectations.

Planning and Design- I can't tell where the focal point is, but other than that every thing else is fine, Meets Expectations.]]> 2017-03-17 17:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858219 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858333 Visual Balance Needs Improvement because when i look at the paper i see alot of the same patterns but it does exceed expectations for repetition.]]> 2017-03-17 17:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858333 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858424 Plan & Design: There is a sense of symbolism in your design and from your design I can that football means a lot to you and what you do. 
Repition: You repeated the shapes nicely but I do not feel as if they make a complete design, the patterns and rhyme do not flow into one another. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:33:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858424 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858462 2017-03-17 17:33:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858462 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858497 The drawing exceeds the expectations I would just recommend the use of newspaper to cover up some of the lines on the hand as it dose not fit as well with the drawing.]]> 2017-03-17 17:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858497 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858778 Planing and design: you could have used some symbolism, and interesting illustration.
Movement: The shapes could have been more overlapped, it didn't really guide my eye.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858778 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858818 Planning and design- overall everything is placed nicely but your lines with the marker are stopped, you can see crooked line. 
Visual- there are hardly any open spaces ]]> 2017-03-17 17:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858818 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858905 Visual Balance- Its very evenly distributed and very thoughtful. But is a little confusing ]]> 2017-03-17 17:35:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858905 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858971 Planning and Design - She did a good job spreading out her drawing and symbolism.
Visual Balance - Shapes are spread out and balance to create a symbol. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160858971 00025680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859059 The rythm of the drawing is good and, the visual balance is perfectly balanced and there is alot of good symbolism that tells a story.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859059 00029886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859116 Movement- Is very well done, everything is smooth, and it makes it easy to go from one side of the artwork to another.

Planing and Design- I can't really tell where the focal point is.]]> 2017-03-17 17:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859116 10035667 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859120 Movement- your movement is great, mostly all shapes have been overlapped and arranged nicely. your artwork does guide my eyes, and all of your shapes look intentional. 
Visual Balance- everything has been distributed evenly and there's no awkward space at all. it looks really nice. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859120 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859246 Movevent - Their really isnt many movement due to the lack of overlapping . 

Repetition - I see good repetion because i see the football lining up together]]> 2017-03-17 17:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859246 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859331 Plan & Design: there does not appear that you used symbolism or manipulated the space but I can see that you attempted at the top and should continue to do so through the entire paper so you meet criteria. 
Repetition: There are no signs of repetition in your design but I can see if you give more time you will continue to that add hence you started drawing another picture of yourself in the drawing ]]> 2017-03-17 17:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859331 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859370 You have patterns but I'm not sure what you are trying to illustrate. You have a repetition in shapes. There's nothing in the drawing that is overlapping. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859370 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859374 planning and design-needs to have more symbolism.
Repetition-needs more shapes repeating and more composition]]> 2017-03-17 17:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859374 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859423 Planning and Design: There is only one drawing of your own used, use more to meet expectations. The drawing is not interesting. Make it more intriguing so that it becomes interesting for people to look at. 
Repetition: There is no rhythm. There is a pattern but it is not the best and it takes up half of your paper. Erase some of the shapes and try to overlap so that the viewer can be guided through. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859423 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859426 I feel like everything exceeds expectations ]]> 2017-03-17 17:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859426 00025680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859740 Needs alot of more detail and balance to the art work. There is no rythm or movement to this drawing. I think what you need to improve it is to  overlap.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859740 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859780 her designs are very unique and she uses an interesting way to display her facial features I'm impressed ]]> 2017-03-17 17:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859780 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859878 Planning and design-- All the patterns you used in the middle are kinda distracting.

Visual Balance-- Since all the patterns are in the middle, the edges have a very light weight. You might wanna try adding more detail around the edges]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859878 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859896 Repetition - Few shapes have been repeated but it's hard to see whats the pattern is.
Movement - is good a lot of objects is overlapping and show patterns. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859896 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859915 planning you used old works to fill in spaces along with new things nicely 
Movement there are many things that caught my eye through out the paper. still many open spaces though.]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859915 10035667 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859940 Repetition- your thunderstorm clouds that you repeated look great. it shows nice rhythm and it kind of gives a story/symbolism. it does enhance your overall composition and it looks nice. 
Planning and Design- your artwork does create a interesting illusion, and if seems like you contain some symbolism.however you could have added more overlapping, and balance. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859940 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859948 More details could be there maybe point out whats the focal point and more overlaping]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859948 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859957 The art work is awesome and meet the standards on the rubric 
 ]]> 2017-03-17 17:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160859957 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860078 Movement was Exceeds Expectations because of the overlapping faces it looked very nice and it made me look around the paper  ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860078 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860122 More details could be there but overall a good job ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860122 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860166 I like how detailed his drawings are I can tell a lot of effort was put into his details its a strong suit ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860166 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860180  Repetition- shapes have been repeat to form a pattern or rhythm .
Movement- should work on your overlapping]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860180 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860274 I see where the focal point is on the paper but its not completed. shows good background work ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860274 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860287 Repetition: I think you have a great pattern. I like the swirls which creates movement in your art. 
Movement: There isn't that much overlapping that catches and guides my eye. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860287 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860318 visual balance: From your drawing I can see that your shapes and use of imagery is present and fill the entire paper nicely. 
Repetition: You only used repetition twice with two different original drawings which looks nicely on the page however you could add more to create a sense of unity in your work but overall I really like your drawing and looks very nice ]]> 2017-03-17 17:40:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860318 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860378 Very nice drawing. You have many eye catching patterns. All you shapes and figures does overlap. You repeat the pattern of using the swirl design. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860378 00025680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860450 This is a horrible drawing  need alot of improvement in this drawing. There is no rythm, overlaping and, visual balance. I think it would be better if you redo      
it.]]> 2017-03-17 17:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860450 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860716 planning and design - isn't finished 
movement-isn't finished 

]]> 2017-03-17 17:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860716 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860735 It looks good but all you need to do in finish your work and trace ]]> 2017-03-17 17:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860735 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860771 They had really good rhythm as your follow the designs down the page. They could work on spacing as it mostly focused on the right side of the page.]]> 2017-03-17 17:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860771 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860862 Movement--You might want to try overlapping to create movement.

Repitition--Repeat objects to make more pattern and rhythm.]]> 2017-03-17 17:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860862 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860983 Visual balance - There's a lot of overlapping but you cant really see the details of the tool. 
Movement - is good and have a lot of details.

]]> 2017-03-17 17:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860983 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860987 Everything about this was good i really like how you put the words in the eyes and the writing on the forehead.]]> 2017-03-17 17:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160860987 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861004 By looking at the Design I can somewhat tell the story behind it. You did  excellent on balancing out your design. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861004 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861023 A very good job with everything there is nothing really that is wrong ]]> 2017-03-17 17:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861023 10035667 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861113 Repetition- your repitition of objects is nice, and there's never really a blank space. you have a good rhythm, but you could have overlapped more. 
Planning and Design- you have good symbolism, and your illustration is very interesting. your patterns look nice also.]]> 2017-03-17 17:44:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861113 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861203 Visual Balance: There is great visual balance. I think it is perfect.
Movement: I really like the way that you repeated your face and slowly got smaller. I think you did great with movement. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861203 00025680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861236 I like the overlap and the rythm. My suggestion is to add pattern to this drawing. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861236 00029886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861267 Visual balance- Their is a lot of white spots and areas that could be filled with more pattern. 

Repetition- Has many repeating patterns.]]> 2017-03-17 17:44:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861267 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861347 planning and drawing - has good symbolism

visual balance thoughtful and balanced composition

]]> 2017-03-17 17:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861347 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861452 Planning & Design: I see that there is symbolism in your drawing and illustrates a very interesting design and seems to be very creative with original and new drawings 
Visual Balance: the drawings look to be very creative and are distributed evenly. you have made a pattern in your design and looks very good. however you could add more elements to fill the empty space rather drawn or with the use of the paper, and color later in enhance your drawing all together ]]> 2017-03-17 17:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861452 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861473 Movement--You should overlap shapes and objects to create movement

Design-- Add more and different objects to meet expectations on planning and design]]> 2017-03-17 17:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861473 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861480 His work isn't finished but his background is nice ]]> 2017-03-17 17:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861480 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861512 planning- off the bat i can tell the symbol of this art work is flowers. Art work is beautiful ]]> 2017-03-17 17:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861512 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861778 the symbol is storms im guessing. good job spreading things out on the paper]]> 2017-03-17 17:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861778 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861858 They did really well with overall attention to detail. But they could work on adding more drawings, overlapping, spacing, and repetition.]]> 2017-03-17 17:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861858 00025680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861953 I like the background design. I think you can overlap the drawing and have rythm to the drawing. I think the visual balance can be improved.]]> 2017-03-17 17:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861953 00055680 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861971 Visual balance - nice thoughtful artwork and balanced  composition

Movement - has good overlapping and arrangements .

]]> 2017-03-17 17:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861971 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861995 His details are very nice and his lines are nice and dark and vary by the area i like that]]> 2017-03-17 17:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160861995 00029886 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160862152 Planning and Design- Everything is well drawn and shows a lot of symbolism. 

Movement- The flowers easily guide my eyes trough the artwork. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160862152 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160862248 You did a good job with the repetition on the symbolic background.]]> 2017-03-17 17:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/l47rtgr47lin/wish/160862248