8-1 Mindmap E -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2 Religion Sparks Reform en-us 2016-09-15 15:24:16 UTC 2023-10-22 14:33:13 UTC hello@padlet.com mwilkinson2 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124096464 2016-09-15 15:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124096464 jejoiner https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124124362 I like how much information there is!]]> 2016-09-15 16:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124124362 I like how much information you gave on each subject, but you could have compacted it. jtaylor61 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124124738 2016-09-15 16:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124124738 ndawson1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131061 Too much info, it is very close together and kind of hard to read. ]]> 2016-09-15 16:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131061 cruiz8 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131323 The information is to close together and things get confusing]]> 2016-09-15 16:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131323 You need to compress your information. It is too close together and hard to read. cray3 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131484 2016-09-15 16:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124131484 JuliannJones https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124132142 You have a lot of information, but I think it is too cluttered and needs to be more spread out. Or if anything, just take a little information out of the map. ]]> 2016-09-15 16:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124132142 lugutierrez https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124133462 There is too much information which it's kind of hard to read.]]> 2016-09-15 16:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124133462 could of simplified information to make easier to read but detailed so its good dnewcomb1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124134622 2016-09-15 16:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124134622 Love it ndawson1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124134775 2016-09-15 16:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124134775 asingh9 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124135069 I like how you put a lot of detail but you put so much I might as well read the section.]]> 2016-09-15 16:57:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124135069 jvalladolid https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124135099 loved how there was so much info but just spread it out that way it can be easier to read ]]> 2016-09-15 16:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124135099 mcampbell23 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124164299 The info is good but it needs to be organized more...]]> 2016-09-15 18:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124164299 dmartinez5 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124184926 there to close together ]]> 2016-09-15 18:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124184926 You have a great map with tons of great points the organization is great too but maybe you should of separated it to be a little neater and that's about it because you guys covered a lot :) dserna https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124197459 2016-09-15 19:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124197459 stsosie https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124214220 There is a little too much stuff on screen if i were u i would take it a little bit down. ]]> 2016-09-15 21:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124214220 what is this ^^^^^^^ pehawkins https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124216741 2016-09-15 21:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124216741 skandler https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124227982 The information is to long and needs to be shortened

]]> 2016-09-15 23:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124227982 rbamburg https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124233686 This punched me in the face with information. Unfortunately too much information is bad when it the less important factors are bunched up with more important factors. There is also some miss branching, for example, you explain a lot about Dorothea Dix and her accomplishments but you should connect her accomplishments to  Dorothea directly because it helps keep her information together. You also said how laws were changed in 1843 to improve conditions of prisons but it's important to note that Dorothea had a huge influence on those improvements. It's kinda hard to read yellow on light blue too.]]> 2016-09-16 00:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124233686 nisidro https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124239786 There is a lot of information but it could be a little more organized]]> 2016-09-16 02:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124239786 There is a lot of info, it's not bad but it needs to be shortened and spread it out next time. (: amartinez46 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124244151 2016-09-16 03:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124244151 wrowan2 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124245512 A lot of information great and it feels like I read the section. Okay maybe a little to much information but its still great]]> 2016-09-16 03:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124245512 sdelfin https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124249060 You had good information but you could have paraphrased it so it wasn't so long. ]]> 2016-09-16 04:32:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124249060 rvilla1 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124249305 It has a lot of information but some of it is not really important and also some of the colors you chose were hard to read.]]> 2016-09-16 04:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124249305   eriesen https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124250720 The info is confusing and hard t read]]> 2016-09-16 05:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124250720 dnoland2 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124250911 Lots of good information in the mind map, but it seems a little bit unorganized. ]]> 2016-09-16 05:18:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124250911 jruiz6 https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124256999 too many words.]]> 2016-09-16 06:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mwilkinson2/l47au8l719j2/wish/124256999