Lucy Cui's Showcase 2021 by Lucy Cui https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e feedback about homelessness en-us 2021-11-14 22:31:38 UTC 2025-12-09 09:18:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f493.png Mr Howard's Feedback https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1895787535 Lucy, please check the following:
  • - Check your punctuation on your home page. 
  • make sure that all titles have a capital letter for the first letter. 
  • You need to do more research. Your information is just what you know. Get some facts and include those.
  • Your bibliography needs to formatted using the correct way like you were shown in Library. 
  • Where's your infographic?
]]> 2021-11-17 02:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1895787535 Ophelia's feedback https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1901683804 Hi Lucy,
Overall this is a strong topic, however just one tweek you can do this if you want. For your home page instead of putting full stop after your name, you could put a comma like My name is Lucy Cui, I'm 12 years old.....

Overall, well done.
I'm proud of you :)]]> 2021-11-19 09:06:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1901683804 Amritha's Feedback https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1903029526 I think you have done great, and put a lot effort into your project. The only thing I would change is maybe don't say 'like' on the website. For example on the home page you said 'they need like food'. I think you should change it to 'they need food'.

 Overall great job on your project. You should be proud. :)]]> 2021-11-19 22:58:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1903029526 Mr H's extra feedback choward109 https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1904143897 Lucy, Make your infographic larger. It gets lost amongst everything. Also you have found statistics from countries in Europe. Can you find some images from Australia?]]> 2021-11-21 07:44:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1904143897 Nice https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907380555 2021-11-23 02:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907380555 hi Lucy, I’m Angelina from 5N and i just read about your article about helping homeless people. i think thats a really great topic and you did such a gud job! <3 https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907503544

]]> 2021-11-23 03:39:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907503544 Angie’s questions & feedbacks: https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907521652 Questions:

1. Why was this topic so important to you?
2. What is something that you have learnt about the topic that interested you?
3. What research skills did you learn & find the most beneficial?
4. What do you want to learn more about? And why?
5. What were some of the most challenging moments and how did you overcome them. 
6. Has anyone of your family members or friends from other schools experienced being homeless before?

Feedback:

Overall, i think you’ve chosen a great topic and have clearly explained the point in your article. But, one thing i would like to say is maybe next time use a bit less of repetition. Ofc, maybe you didn’t realise when you were publishing it, but its good to check & edit it after you’ve done writing it. Great job!

]]> 2021-11-23 03:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907521652 https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907532916 amazing

]]> 2021-11-23 04:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907532916 https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907575101 Nice! I like your website!]]> 2021-11-23 04:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1907575101 Nice work https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1911424541 2021-11-24 23:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1911424541 Feedback from Amritha https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1913300198 Great Job Lucy! On your call to action page I couldn’t read the graph and was quite confused. Also on your home page you were reading off the introduction, maybe just summarise it. Overall this is an amazing website. Good job! :)]]> 2021-11-25 22:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1913300198 Gurnaaz’s feedback https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1913301117 You did great but I would say maybe dont speak of the page just try in summarise it. Try and vary your voice and add eye contact. Your weebly was nice and the facts were in the right places, you had good ideas.]]> 2021-11-25 22:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/1913301117 https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/2037042220 comment sa va]]> 2022-02-09 04:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lcui4/l3bq0t7fbqxv5g5e/wish/2037042220