My terrific padlet by Malak Elsissi

great usage of color and visual elements to make your information appeal

2024-10-04 05:48:56 UTC

The colors are distracting, maybe chose things that are not as bright

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:03 UTC

be louder and use vocal range

2024-10-04 05:49:10 UTC

i like your slides

mgardner25_4 — 2024-10-04 05:49:13 UTC

anaul_25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:17 UTC

Too bright!

i like the way that you present yourself and the way you use your body language

mgardner25_4 — 2024-10-04 05:49:19 UTC

You should speak more loudly

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:19 UTC

you could talk a bit louder

2024-10-04 05:49:20 UTC

speak louder please!

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:20 UTC

It's hard to read some of the text

mburney25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:21 UTC

Being loud and using good vocal range

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:49:22 UTC

Pick colors that contrast each other more, it's hard to see while text in a bright green circle

abao25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:49:33 UTC

Try to speak a little louder

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:37 UTC

I love the colors you are using

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:49:37 UTC

good pace!

2024-10-04 05:49:41 UTC

Great statistics!

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:43 UTC

You have a good use of eye contact and hand gestures!

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:44 UTC

anaul_25 — 2024-10-04 05:49:48 UTC

Its hard to understand your line of reasoning as you are talking very quietly.

good selection of statistics to explain the relevance of your problem

2024-10-04 05:49:55 UTC

the slides are a bit distracting

2024-10-04 05:49:55 UTC

You could enunciate more your words

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:49:58 UTC

you clearly understand and know your topic

mbaig25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:04 UTC

good usage of arrows to show how different factors are correlated

2024-10-04 05:50:04 UTC

I cant see nutritional health very clearly. change background color or considering switching it more meaningful visuals

2024-10-04 05:50:15 UTC

I like the colors and transitions in your slides as it is very engaging.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:50:17 UTC

Your problem and gaps in research connect really well to your research question!

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:21 UTC

You don't explain the connection between the effects of sleep deprivation - can you go into more detail on how one leads to the next?

mburney25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:24 UTC

Are you asking too much at once? How will you be able to answer all aspects of the question

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:31 UTC

I like the use of arrows to showcase how one thing leads to another - it also helps contextualize your question

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:33 UTC

Research question sounds quite specific, maybe broaden it to ensure you can have a proper population/sample size

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-04 05:50:38 UTC

I like how the fruits on the slide relate to your research about the importance of consuming foods with high nutritional value.

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-04 05:50:39 UTC

I'm not sure about the cause and effect slide, it indicates that lack of sleep causes eating less food which causes lower self esteem but there might be more overlap rather than direct connections.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:50:47 UTC

slow down

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:50:47 UTC

If you are looking in the UAE, would you compare this to a different country?

2024-10-04 05:50:53 UTC

mmousbah25_2 — 2024-10-04 05:50:54 UTC

good decision using a mixed method research, it might be a bit tricky but it's definitley possible

Your plan for your methodology is clear

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:51:05 UTC

You speak at a great pace!

bkafi25 — 2024-10-04 05:51:12 UTC

mmousbah25_2 — 2024-10-04 05:51:18 UTC

good presentation and presentational skills

Include a scope to your issue, perhaps limit it to a specific location or type of education curriculum in order to make the project feasable.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-04 05:51:19 UTC

How could you look at culture without other confounding variables coming into play?

2024-10-04 05:51:26 UTC