🤔A suggestion for next time is to maybe try to not follow and look at your script so strictly, for example, reading off of the slide for the poem instead of from your script to make it feel more natural?

⭐️I also really enjoyed how your slides are straight to the point, but your presentation went more in depth and brought us through the process of how you completed each game. Also your pictures of your dog are very cute; they made it feel more genuine and personal.

-Kelly

By: Peyton

-Yumi

There were some lulls and pauses when looking back to your script, which made things feel less smooth, but overall it was very reflective and well done :)

Eden

-Yumi

• Grace

From: Cherine

The images you used in your presentation in very useful in getting your message across. They are very good pictures and I enjoyed looking at them.

One thing I think could make your presentation a little bit better is to have a more structured project. You started with the phrase "touch grass", but I did not see a clear start. Maybe you could have added a beginning slide/table of contents?

By: Julie

By: Peyton

• Grace

By Amari

🤔You did really well there are really no suggestions, but just being picky, some of the fonts and colours made the slides a little hard to read.

⭐️Your presentation seemed to be really well prepared and it seemed to actually have an impact on you; it seems like you genuinely enjoyed doing this.

-Kelly

I appreciate your script for being memorized and you projected really well when presenting, but I would have loved to hear more about your journaling and writing! They were on the slides, but I think it would have been really compelling to read out some of the work out loud, because I think there’s a lot of emotion/context that could’ve been added by hearing the words you wrote come from your voice.

But overall, I can tell you were very well prepared for this presentation and it made it go very smoothly!

Eden

Step1 flower picture was beautiful and colorful. The way her PowerPoint presented is so colorful and cheerful. Her drawing is very good at showing her positive emotions.

-Yumi

-Olivia

By Yvonne Cao

I loved your enthusiasm and how engaging your presentation was without a script. I like your connection to your title and your reflection to your 5 steps. A piece of advice I would give you is to condense your information with the key points. I felt like you  had so much to say but not enough time. Overall, your presentation was wonderful.

Manmeet

My feedback is to keep up with that tempo all throughout your presentation. I think toward the end, your voice started to get a little more quiet.

By Sophia

By Jason Shellard

-Olivia

Your speaking voice was loud and clear. Your final step/reflection really resonated with me. One thing to keep in mind for next time is that it did seem like you were reading a script, maybe you could take some breaks and make more eye contact next time. Keep up the good work! - Luna

Your voice was nice and clear and I could understand every word you were saying.

I suggest looking up from your script once in a while to make eye contact with the audience to engage them more :)

By: Julie

I liked the small activity she had at the start to get the audience engaged. Her body posture was great however she would sometimes get carried away

Her reflection were deep and had a lot of care put into them.

-Diego Sanchez

- Serena Tsou

By Jason Shellard

-Olivia

• Grace

- Serena Tsou

One piece of feedback that I have is to try to not keep looking back at the slides and focus more on engaging with the audience.

By Sophia

By Jason Shellard

-Angelica

- You an amazing amount of effort into all of your drawings

- Try not to pause that often and maybe try to interact or acknowledge the audience a bit more

- Fantastic connection to indigenous knowing and the course content. It seems like you really put the time and effort into this project, great job!

• Diego Sanchez

-Tiffany

-Manmeet

-Yvonne

Her PowerPoint is clean and easy to read. Her speaking tone and speed are comfortable for me. Her findings are clear and drawings reflect inner strength of herself. I also come to appreciate different seasons after hearing her presentation even the cold winter. A mini video of rain reflective practice is so engaging to the audience. To notice beauty of nature is important as she said.

-Yumi

🤔A suggestion is to maybe read a bit of your journal entry despite it being longer because I would have loved to hear about that!

⭐️Your pictures are super cute. I also like how you invited the class to participate in a step which engaged me more.

-Kelly

Dear Maria,

I loved your presentation PowerPoint slides and hand gestures. The simplicity of the PowerPoint highlights the key information. Additionally, by incorporating hand gestures, it makes the presentation more dynamic and more engaging. Additionally, I love the media supports you've incorporated into your powerpoint. Whether it's your drawings and pictures, it showed artistic reflection and it's impacts the prompts.

One thing I'd suggest would be using cue cards instead of a phone as a script. That would free up hands for more hand gestures and create a more dynamic presentation!

I'd like to say, I love how you included a class engagement activity!

Overall, your presentation was very nicely laid out and included multiple audience engagement techniques (whether that be humor or visual examples, etc.). Thank you for presenting!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

From: Cherine

-Tiffany

-Angelica

I like the visual supports you included in this presentation. I also liked how you spoke without a script! It increased the dynamicity of the presentation through movement and arm gestures. Overall, it aided your voice project as you could look out into the audience throughout the presentation instead of looking at the phone or script.

One thing I'd add would be simplifying the PowerPoint, word-wise. At times, it was harder to catch the main points of the slides. Aside from that, I love the visuals displayed in the PowerPoint.

Overall, I loved the script-less feel of the presentation as it seemed well-rehearsed without the use of cue-cards or a phone. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

My feedback is to have a little less words on some of your slides. For example, for game step two, you described the candles in large paragraphs. This kind of makes it hard to follow.

By Sophia

🤔A suggestion is to maybe not write so much on your slides (specifically the candle one) because it made it a little hard to read and look at. A few notes on the slide instead and going more in-depth with your presentation perhaps would have been better?

⭐️Through your presentation, I feel like you put a lot of effort and thought into each step.

-Kelly

• Diego Sanchez

-Yumi Kimura

Some of the slides were a little overwhelmed with text, which made it a little harder to absorb all the information being presented, but your smooth delivery and memorization of your script made it easier to follow :) Awesome job!

Eden

-Manmeet

From: Cherine

I loved the vibrancy of your presentation with the bright colours captivating the audience's attention. In addition, I loved the simplicity of the PowerPoint and use of visual aid.

A suggestion I'd love to see would be presenting without a script. This would free up hands for hand gestures and alternative body movements that can engage the audience's attention.

That being said, I loved the voice projection in your presentation as it was loud and clear. Great job!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

By Jason Shellard

• Diego Sanchez

- Serena Tsou

-Yvonne

-Olivia

• Cherine

-Angelica

• Diego

Peyton

🤔My suggestion is to maybe talk more about the process of the steps and what you learned from doing them-“in conclusion”

⭐️I think you got my step for touching the water and I really like how you completed and interpreted it!

-Kelly

Maybe next time, you could include a script to ensure that you are more confident.

By Sophia

-Yumi Kimura

By Jason Shellard

-Yvonne

-Manmeet

Peyton

By Jason Shellard

- Diego

-Angelica

By Sophia

I never knew there was such a thing as mood board and it was good to know how to use it. Looking at rain from a positive perspective on poem is a great idea. It must be good for feeling differently apart from your usual reaction to the rain. Your documentation overall is so beautiful and precise. I got some hints from your presentation for my life.

-Yumi Kimura

• Cherine

-Yvonne

Peyton

-Manmeet

• Grace

-Olivia

• Cherine

• Diego

Kole

In the future try to look into the audience more. You tended to look at your slides and read off from them.

By Sophia

• Cherine

-Yumi Kimura

By Mikaela Ghorashi

🤔No suggestions it was wonderful (:

⭐️I like that you had cue cards to help guide your presentation, but you did not seem to be reading off of it.

-Kelly

Peyton

-Yvonne

Kole

🤔A suggestion is to maybe consider touching on personal experiences to relate to the steps.

⭐️I like that you included your handwritten notes which showed the process of working through each step.

-Kelly

• Manmeet

You tend to talk a little quiet sometimes so try and focus on keeping your volume raised the whole time.

By Sophia

By Mikaela Ghorashi

Peyton

• Grace

• Cherine

-Angelica

Kole

🤔I do not have any suggestions for improvement, it was great!

⭐️Your video was very helpful in allowing the class to feel your experience.

-Kelly

-Yumi Kimura

• Diego Sanchez

• Manmeet

🤔A suggestion is to maybe also include some positive aspects of human roles.

⭐️I like that you reflected on our human role in  the steps, taking accountability and making it feel genuine.

-Kelly

-Tiffany

Peyton

• Cherine

🤔Something to improve on is to include more words on your slides like bullet points of what you’re saying so we can follow along.

⭐️Your pictures seemed to capture the beauty of things, displaying a more positive vibe overall.

-Kelly

I liked your ideas and points that were presented. I noticed that you looked at your phone a lot while presenting. But the things you discussed were really interesting to listen to such as the points that were made about the domino effect and the colors within fall. There were so many beautiful drawings as well. I also liked how Vancouver was referred to as “Raincouver” and the video clip of the sounds and asking the class to close their eyes. This really engaged us as an audience! Good job on the presentation :)

-Navroop Padda

By Mikaela Ghorashi

• Diego

• The presentation was really neat and I could tell there was a lot of thought and effort that went into the presentation. I really enjoyed how u went deeper into the color palette of the rock which was interesting because it is not something that we normally think about. If anything could be changed, maybe look around the class a little bit more, rather than at the TV. Overall, great presentation and even despite the technical issue with the powerpoint, it was notable how you still powered through it!

  
  

  -Navroop Padda

I don't have any feedback because your presentation was already amazing and I can tell you are comfortable with presenting.

By Sophia

• Grace! I really liked the design of your powerpoint, it was really colourful and super informative with the points you added onto it. You were also really confident when speaking in front of a class. It was cool to see you use one of the game prompts that I designed and see how you brought that to life through videography! If anything could be changed, I would say looking towards the class a little more, but overall you did a great job and this presentation was phenomenal :) 

  - Navroop Padda

Kole

• I enjoyed this presentation a lot and how you incorporated so many artful forms into it such as drawings and photography. You summarized your points very well and covered every game that you engaged in a way that allowed us to fully grasp what it is like to watch the sky’s movements and relate it to emotions. If anything could be changed I would say maybe try to speak a little louder. All in all, great work and I loved the powerpoint!

  -Navroop Padda

- Serena Tsou

-Yumi Kimura

• Serena! I really liked the layout of your powerpoint and how organized everything was. Despite the mini technical issue at the start, you still continued to proceed with the presentation and keep us engaged. If anything could be changed, I would say speak a little bit more clearly at certain times. Aside from this, the summary was really neat and well done on a great presentation!

  -Navroop Padda

• This was an amazing presentation! You did a great job at incorporating images and videography. Everything looked so organized and it was super engaging to listen to because of how you went deeper into your own personal thoughts. One thing that could have been done differently is maybe speaking a little bit louder. However, it was a fun presentation to listen to and I liked how you added in some songs that stood out to you in relation to the games.

- Navroop Padda

• Manmeet

By Mikaela Ghorashi

• I liked this presentation a lot because of how clearly and well spoken you were throughout all of it. You went really deep into your personal feelings which was intriguing to hear. There were certain times where you were looking at your phone but it is understandable because all of your speaking points were on there. Overall though, it was an outstanding presentation and I liked hearing your experiences with the games.

- Navroop Padda

- Navroop Padda

Grace Lee

Peyton

-Navroop Padda

🤔A suggestion is to maybe make your slides more colourful or visually interesting so it engages viewers more.

⭐️I like that there were pictures for each slide accompanying each step.

-Kelly

• Cherine

• Diego

Try to Avoid looking down at your computer and focus on engaging with the audience.

• Grace

-Olivia

Kole

-Yvonne

• Grace

-Navroop Padda

Peyton

Try looking into the audience a little more instead of down at your script.

By Sophia

-Olivia

• Cherine

🤔A suggestion for step 2 is to use a picture that is relevant to the step, like a picture of your backyard instead.

⭐️I liked how your presentation did not feel like a script or too rehearsed.

-Kelly

knowledge that you worked had on this project.

• Diego

-Navroop Padda

-Yumi Kimura

Kole

-Olivia

• Grace

• Cherine

By Mikaela Ghorashi

🤔A suggestion is to maybe include some bullet points on what you are saying onto the slides.

⭐️Relating to your personal tattoo and pictures made it very interesting and fun to listen to.

-Kelly

-Angelica

-Navroop Padda

By Sophia

-Yumi Kimura

-Yvonne

• Manmeet

• Cherine

-Navroop Padda

-Olivia

By Sophia

By Mikaela Ghorashi

-Yvonne

🤔A suggestion for improvement is to include some words of your reflection onto your slides.

⭐️I like how you explained your takeaways from each step. I also like how you touched on both negatives and positives of situations which made it more realistic.

-Kelly

• Manmeet

• Grace

One thing I'd suggest would relate to body language when presenting. I did notice that you included hand gestures for body language to engage the audience, which aided the presentation. However, I'd suggest to incorporate more hand gestures or alternative body language movements to substitute fidgeting with hair. (note: one thing that may help would be tying your hair up, as I find I also tend to fidget with my hair when presenting and it can get distracting).

The confidence when you spoke and your powerpoints were beautifully done. I found your presentation slides especially engaging through its colours, layout, and visual aids. Well done.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

• Diego

Awesome video!!!

• Cherine

• Grace

-Navroop Padda

-Olivia

One thing I'd suggest would be opting for more bullet point texts as opposed to paragraph texts. For example in the slide, "sounds of rain," using bullet points highlighting your main points instead of paragraphs can further aid the clarity of your presentation.

Overall, I love your presentation composition and the simplicity of it. Your presentation was nicely done and thoroughly done. I loved how you also included a music video in your presentation. That was incredibly captivating and aidded the audience's focus. In fact, while the music video was playing, I noticed everyone was captivated by the music video as I was a beautifully laid out visual aid that aided your presentation engagement. Absolutely well done. Your effort, time, and work put into this project is beautifully done. Great job!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

🤔A suggestion is to include the names and rules of the games onto the slides.

⭐️I like how you adjusted to technical difficulties very fast and well.

-Kelly

-Angelica

• Manmeet

• Grace

-Navroop Padda

Peyton

By Sophia

You have a very natural calm voice when presenting, but I think it would have helped to work on your volume and expression, just to help keep the audience engaged throughout :)

However, your memorization of your script made it feel very personal, which made the presentation feel more comfortable. Good job!

Eden

🤔A suggestion is to include more words on your slides.

⭐️I liked how you acknowledged your role as a human in nature.

-Kelly

I loved the simplicity of your slides and how it highlighted the key points discussed in your presentation. However, I noticed that each slide, while beautifully laid out, seemed distinct from each other. Maybe altering the composition of the slides so that each of the slides seem to connect with each other so that it'll increase the flow of the presentation. That the slides connect with the other slides.

That being said, I loved the presenting skills you displayed which showcased thorough preparation and engaged the audience. Good job!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

One note would be to either omit the use of a script or alternatively using cue cards instead. By using cuecards or a smaller scripting tool, the audience’s focus will gravitate more on your as opposed to your script document. That being said, I did notice that you hadn’t used your script document much once getting into the rhythm of your presentation, therefore I’d suggest either placing the document someplace else that’s at an arms reach- in case, or just omitting the use of a script in general.

Your presenting skills in terms of voice projection, audience eye contact, and arm gestures are nicely and beautifully done. Your incorporation of multiple media forms is beautifully done. I love it so much and it really captivated my attention. Your use of video with the addition of your speech had added and elevated your overall presentation. You have an an amazingly well job that resulted in a captivating presentation and audience attention. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

-Yvonne

One thing to suggest was to limit the duration of the music during your step 2 slide. Although the music was a nice presenting technique that captured the audience’s attention, limiting the music to a certain amount of seconds instead of the whole duration of the slide would eliminate the music as an distraction and improve the audience’s focus.

Aside from that, your presentation was nicely spoken and did beautifully well. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

• Manmeet

-Angelica

-Navroop Padda

Peyton

🤔A suggestion is to maybe slow down a bit while speaking.

⭐️Your artwork was very abstract and up to interpretation. In a way it made it beautiful, reminding me of Picasso.

-Kelly

-Yumi Kimura

- Angelo

• Manmeet

-Navroop Padda

Peyton

• Grace

One thing I would suggest would be slowing down your speaking pace. At times of your presentation, I found that I would often get lost as I couldn’t keep up with the presentation’s context. Slowing down the speaking pace would aid the presentation’s clarity so that the audience can be fully immersed in the presentation’s context.

Additionally, your speaking presence was amazingly done. Your confidence actively engaged the audience which improved the audience engagement and focus. Incredibly well done in your speaking presence.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

🤔A suggestion is to try and go more in-depth with your conclusions.

⭐️Your voice was very loud and clear.

-Kelly

Jason: Your confidence and the way you carried yourself through the presentation was something that stood out to me. I also enjoyed listening to the connections you made from the different activities to your own life and any lessons/metaphors you learned from the unique elements of nature. The only suggestion would be to maybe have some more variety with your documentations or perhaps try to speak without a script because your public speaking skills are very strong.

Peyton: I enjoyed your presentation because of your confident voice, strong sense of presence, and fun personality. I think you did a great job on your documentations, due to the variety of art methods you incorporated. I also really liked the colours and overall design of your presentation as it made viewing your project more amusing.

Cassidy: I love the layout, colours, and overall look of your presentation! Your tone and pace of speaking is very calming which helps set and support the ambiance of your presentation. I really like the idea of documenting your step through a playlist and song lyrics because that was a unique and creative approach. I thoroughly enjoyed your presentation!

Julie: Your pace, tone, and volume were very good! I also liked your enthusiasm throughout your presentation. One suggestion I have would be to try having more eye contact to make your audience feel more connected to you and your project.

Manmeet: I really enjoyed viewing your presentation as the design was very cute and colourful! I enjoyed listening to the connections you shared with the class regarding memories from your childhood. The only suggestion I have would be to slow down when you are talking so you can include all the points you want to mention without feeling rushed.

Ana: I love how calm and relaxed your voice was during your presentation – it made your project feel very warm and comforting! I enjoyed listening to the reflections and thoughts you comprised from each step because they served as great reminders for how to live life harmoniously with ourselves and nature. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to your presentation.

Angelo: Your tone, speed, and volume of voice were very relaxing which made your presentation very comforting. I loved the documentations you shared and especially loved the crossword puzzle and the video you created! I admire the effort you put into this project, and I thoroughly enjoyed listening to your presentation.

Grace Lee: Your confidence in both yourself and your thoughts really shined bright in your presentation. I love how thoroughly you explained each step and it made me feel like I was accompanying you on this reflective journey as well! I greatly admire your public speaking skills and how insightful each of your reflections are.

Cole: I like how you showcased your personality with the addition of humour throughout your presentation because it made your project very lighthearted and fun to listen to. The only suggestion I have would be to slow down when you are talking so your audience can thoroughly follow along with your thoughts.

One suggestion would be incorporating more hand gestures into the presentation for body-language engagement.

Overall, your presentation was clearly structured and the slides beautifully presented your findings.

Well done.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

-Yumi Kimura

-Tiffany

A note of suggestion would be using cue cards as a scripting alternative instead of phones. This will elevate the professional format of the presentation, which would increase a speaker’s speaking presence. Speaking without a script would be preferred, however, cue cards or alternative non-digital scripting prompts would further elevate your presentation professionality.

In spite of this, I found that your hand gestures were nicely incorporated throughout the presentation. This made the presentation seem more dynamic and engaging.

The incorporation of presentation clarity and visual aids were nicely done. Good job.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

• Manmeet

I loved the simplicity of your presentation PowerPoint. In addition, your presentation was well spoken and seemed thoroughly prepared.

One thing I’d suggest would be using cue cards instead of reading off the computer. By speaking with cue cards, it allows more space for hand gestures and can elevate your overall speaking presence.

That being said, I loved your voice project and confidence throughout the presentation. It was nicely said, spoken loudly and clearly, and showcased thorough preparation in advance.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

-Navroop Padda

This may just be a personal preference; however, I’d suggest altering presentation styles in the future. Throughout your presentation, I found myself a little distracted by the background the slides. Aside from specific slides, ie. Day and night slide, most of the time I couldn’t see a clear relationship between the slide designs and was instead distracted by it. Again, this may be a personal preference, as slide designs often can be suggestive and most of your points were clearly illustrated.

In reference to your slides, I loved your incorporation of the different visual aids and overall structuring composition. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

Btw: I love your docs!

One thing to add would be including an ending slide so establish a feeling of closure with the audience. That way there’s a clear feeling of a conclusion after explaining your steps.

Overall, I don’t have much notes for improvements as I found your presenting skills and presentation aids were nicely-done. You have a lovely speaking prescence and your slides were easy to follow along with. Beautifully done.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

I found your presentation’s visual aids beautifully done in support of your presentations. I also like how you split up the steps for the processes you’ve gone through. Despite the technological difficulties, I loved how you maintained calm and cool-headed through it. Due to your calm and swift transition, I found that technological difficulties, while it may deter audience focus, hadn’t derailed my attention due to how calmly you responded to the situation.

One note I’d like to suggest would be to incorporate more open-body gestures to accompany your presentation. Whether that’s gestures pointing to specific items to the powerpoint or keeping your arms in an open position will increase the audience’s focus and engagement in your presentation.

That being said, I love how you presented without a script which allowed for some hand gestures in the presentation. Throughout your presentation, I could tell the level of effort and time put into this. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

Throughout your presentation, I loved your voice presentation. This made your presentation more engaging and dynamic. One thing I noticed was despite your use of cue cards, there was a high presence of body language and gestures which I loved. Your presentation skills in terms of voice projection and hand gestures were beautifully engaging and captivated my attention.

In addition, the variety of different artforms as your forms of documentation showcased a deep understanding and reflection of the project. I loved that! It made it a lot more engaging as there was a variety of different artforms and documentations throughout the presentation. IT was very creative!

One note would be splitting up your presentation slides to simplify the information. This would increase clarity and audience understanding of the main topics.

Overall, your presentation was well thought out and beautifully done. Well done!

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

One quick note would be to lower less words on the power, as sometimes the powerpoint seemed a little crowded. Aside from that, your powerpoint was nicely done and was well supported with visual aids.

Another note: I love the poetry included in the presentation and really brought the audience to reflect artistically on the steps provided. Good job.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

Grace Lee

Grace Lee

The unique formatting of the presentation was a captivating hook that focused the audience's attention. By structuring your presentation outside in a circle, you immerse the class' engagement with your reflections and the steps taken.

One note. Whilst I loved your approach of inviting the class to look at your presentation in a circle, the formatting of the presentation made it difficult to see your prop/visual aid showcased. Maybe finding something to prop your poster to could aid the audience's sight of the visual aid could be beneficial.

Overall, the class engagement activities immersing the audience in your process, was something I found engaging. I loved your unique approach, aside from the weather of course, as it refocused the class' attention on your presentation. Your visual aid of multiple mediums showcases the thorough preparation and effort put into this presentation. This drew the audience's attention to it's tactile and artistic documentation, as it elevated your presentation's performance overall. Lovely job.

Sincerely,

Zoe Rarama

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- Julie

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One suggestion I have for you is to maybe add a conclusion side or a conclusion paragraph in your presentation because I found that it ended pretty abruptly.

Awesome job!

-Julie

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• Manmeet

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-Tiffany

The presentation was very clear and engaging and I really liked how you incorporated photos to really capture the moment so we could experience it well. One thing is no try not to look at the script in hand but overall great job!

Diego

I thought your presentation was great and you had detail that was included in every step. One thing I would say is to make some eye contact when you can but overall it was very clear and your voice was loud and clear.

Zoe

Your presentation was wonderful and you were very confident and prepared for it. One thing I would say was that maybe you could have been more clear on the phrase “touch grass” and also cut down on information. But overall you did great and your voice was loud and clear.

Maria

Your presentation was very clear. I really liked your drawings. One thing I would say there were a couple of pauses but other than that your presentation was wonderful!

Peyton 

Your presentation was wonderful! I really liked the theme of your presentation. It was really pretty. The steps on each slide were detailed but perhaps shortening the amount of words on each slide. I also really liked how you changed the step about the candle to fit what you can do and it was really creative, great job!

Grace Z

You put a lot of effort into each step and it was very colourful. One thing I would say is to face the class more but overall great job!

Katelyn

I really liked your presentation, especially the comic I thought was creative and different from the other types of art forms. One thing I would say is I would have loved for you to read out the comic since you put a lot of time into making it. Overall great job and voice and pace were also great!

Serena

Your presentation was really wonderful and easy to understand. One thing I would say is to speak a little louder. Overall I also loved your photos. They were wonderful and captured each step.

Cassidy

I really liked the style of this presentation and really fit into your theme. You had a great pace and I could hear your voice. One thing I would say is I personally would have loved to gear the entire journal entry since you put a lot of time and effort but I do understand that we only had 5 minutes but it was great that you summarized it. Overall you did really great!

Olivia

I really liked the colour and photos of your slides. One thing I would say is I would have loved to see the videos but I understand that there were technical difficulties which happen sometimes. But you had great voice projection and overall great job!

Julie

You had great pace and spoke clearly. One thing I would say is to have more eye contact but overall I also really liked your poem and you did a great job!

Manmeet

You had a great presentation and each step you did was very detailed. One thing I would say is to have more eye contact but overall you did a really great job!

Marrisa

You did a really great job with the photos and overall theme of your presentation, I really liked it. One thing was to fix the volume when the song was playing for one of the step so I could hear you or maybe you could have repeated what you had said but the song was really nice, a great choice and wonderful job!

Ana

I really liked your presentation and all the colour and photos you added. One thing was to make a little more eye contact. I also really liked your reflection of the rock and incorporated both the negatives and positives and how detailed you were with just a rock, great job!

Angelo

Your presentation was very clear and organized. One thing I would say is to speak a bit louder. Also I really liked that short video that you included and all the personal experience and steps from high school to university and the video was very well made and you put a lot of effort into it and it is seen. Also the crossword was just great and the way you connected all the words with each other. Great job!

Grace L

I thought you did a great job with engaging with the audience but one thing is I wish that the videos would have worked but technical difficulties. Overall you did such a great job at reflecting and your voice was loud and clear. 

Kole

The presentation had great photos and the one with the rainbow was wonderful. One thing was to face the audience more but overall great job!

Amari

I really liked your presentation and all the effort you put into making it. One thing was to speak a little louder. It was kind of hard to hear at times since we were outside and also it was hard to see where you were pointing to at times so maybe having someone hold your poster would have been great. But I loved how you also had the class look around and engage with your presentation, great job!

Yvonne

Your presentation was great and you explained each step with detail. One thing is to try to look up from the script and speak a little louder. But overall a great presentation and I loved your paintings. They were wonderful! 

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

I also liked how you added a list of various music for your slide, making a connection with water and music. The incorporation of quotes in your slide also made your reflection stronger which I thought was insightful. I do not have a specific suggestion for you as I enjoyed every little part of your presentation. Your calm presence when speaking made me feel comfortable and at ease while listening. Thank you for sharing your reflection and the steps you took to the class! Your presentation was very insightful and fun to listen to!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

I really liked the copy of the leaf you drew with your reflection. I also enjoyed the poem you wrote especially because it rhymed and had a nice flow to it. My suggestion for you is to try to look less at the laptop and engage more eye contact with the class. Another suggestion is to possibly add more various art documentation as the first few slides were simple but looked a bit empty. Nonetheless, I enjoyed your soothing, nice projection of your voice as you shared your steps and reflection with the class! Excellent work!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

From: Sumin (Christina) Park