10. Yes

    It’s easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university

11. No. For me, Singing karaoke is a stressful activity

12. Yes

    For these reasons, i will not visit that restaurant again

13. No. Therefore, a real friend is a person who supports you on everything.

10. Yes. The concluding sentence is "It’s easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university."

11. No. The new concluding sentence is "In conclusion, I still don't have enough confident to sing a song in karaoke with my friends."

12. Yes. The concluding sentence is "For these reasons, I will not visit that restaurant again."

13. No. The new concluding sentence is "Thus, the friendship will be long-lasting if we respect each other."

10. Yes.

11. No: To summarize, I'm afraid of my singing ability.

12. Yes

13. No: In summary, genuine companionship entails accepting and embracing one another's uniqueness without making judgments solely based on superficial aspects such as looks or hobbies.

Paragraph 10: Have concluding sentence

• It's easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university.

  
  

  Paragrapth 11: There is no concluding sentence

• As a result, singing karaoke songs with my friends was a terrible memory that I've ever had.

  
  

  Paragraph 12: Have concluding sentence

• For these reasons, I will not visit that restaurant again.

  
  

  Paragraph 13: There is no concluding sentence

• In conclusion, befriending someone who makes you feel comfortable and be yourself is the most important.

1. It’s easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university. (Yes)

2. Because of that, I think I will never sing karaoke with my friends again. (No)

3. For these reasons, I will not visit that restaurant again. (Yes)

4. In conclusion, you can see a good friend will never judge you. (No)

Paragraph 10: yes

Paragraph 11: no. For these reasons, I worry so much whenever I sing karaoke with my friends.

Paragraph 12: yes

Paragraph 13: no. In short, a good friend likes you just how you are like.

Paragraph 10: Yes. It's easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university.

Paragraph 11: In brief, despite my friends' encouragement, my nerves got the best of me, leaving me too afraid to sng karaoke again.

Paragraph 12: Yes. For these reasons, I will not visit that restaurant again.

Paragraph 13: Thus to me, someone admiring us for who we truely are is worth being called a best friend.

10:Yes:It’s easy to see how getting enough sleep can improve your performance at university.

11. No.

--> For me, singing karaoke with friends is an embarrassing memory that i would never want to do again.

12. Yes: For these reasons, I will not visit that restaurant again.

13. No.

-In conclusion, it's the attitude a good friend should have.