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Exposition:They were going holiday shopping at the mall.

Rising action: Jean stole a button and got caught and or arrested

Climax: Jean has to call her parents and tell them what happened

Falling action: Jean gets released from jail and meets her parents again

Conclusion: Jean ends up not getting in trouble, but her mom still scolds her.

Everything is in chronological order, and every element seemed necessary.

• Holly and Jolly

• Anxious

• Terrified (x2)

• Shocked

• Humilation

• Excited

• Delusion

• Trembling

• Where else might the writer tell how he/she/they felt?

  1. The Jail

  2. At home

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List the different tag lines used.

A few seconds later my sister appeared and asked.

How successful were the tags? Could they have been better? How so?

They weren't successful, they could have been better. They have been more descriptive.

Where might dialogue be added?

When the officer first talked to her and when she was talking to her parents.

How does the writer show the significance of the event: The author tells significance through dialouge and internal thoughts

• 2 days before Christmas

• They start the story in the car

• They then go to the mall

• General store

• Store is crowded

• They leave and stay outside of the store

• Walk to the office

• Head to the cop car outside

• Empty jail cell

• Back in the car

1. I was 13 years old at the time, and things like buttons and calendars, and posters would catch my fancy.

2. I thought about how sly I had been, and I felt proud of my accomplishment.

3. I was too ashamed to tell my mother the truth, but I had no choice.

   Adverb Connectors-

   1. I walked back to the basket where I had found the button and was about to drop it when suddenly, Instead I took a glance around assured myself nobody could see me so I took it.

   2. Everything happened so fast I didn't have the chance to feel remorse for my crime, Instead, I viewed what was happening to me as if it was a movie.

1. ) Sight--> car, shopping center, store, snoopy button, swarms of people, cashiers.

2. Smell --> N/A.

3. Touch --> Snoopy button, pushing people, jail cell, phone, family members, sweater pocket

4. Taste --> N/A

5. Hearing --> Christmas carols, chattered, laugh

   
   

   How dose the author's use of descriptive language add to the narrative?

   6. It doesn't add as much except for sight.

      
      

      Where is more descriptive language needed?

   7. Jail scene

   8. Mall scene