https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks Sửa Bài en-us 2022-03-02 03:22:51 UTC 2022-06-17 16:43:50 UTC hello@padlet.com cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2199197745 Đề: Some people believe that teaching children at home is better than letting them go to school. Discuss the advantages of each method.


Paraphrase: A group of people argue that educating young people at dwelling??? is the better. Other people think that there are learning at school is superior. This essay will discuss the benefits of each way of education.



Many people believed that educating children at home is better for a child's their development. Children at home have feel a safe environment and can focus better on their development. Parents can decide on what kind of education can be given to children instead of following the age-old way of learning taught at school.  (not relevant)

However, sending offspring to school also has it’s its benefits. In this competitive world, kids children need to be taught about competition. At schools, there are vast sources of knowledge providing available options available for children kids, so that they can learn and improve their skills. Schools have teachers as the person who can guide the children in the right direction for their development.


In conclusion, So schooling and family both have their own importance in children's lives and for their careers. We should use both methods above.]]> 2022-05-25 10:38:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2199197745 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2200875182 Đề: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that there are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both views.



Paraphrase: A group of people believe that the only purpose for learning a foreign language is related to travelling or finding a job overseas. Reasons to motivate people to learn a new language. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

On the one hand, owing to the proliferation of society (what do you mean), numerous people are travelling abroad each year. Therefore, being bilingual learning bilingualism for travel is increasingly popular and important. In addition, this is a useful good opportunity for us to expand our knowledge and experience new interesting things. For example, there are many famous books with interesting content published in foreign languages.

Nonetheless, travelling abroad is not the only reason for people to learn a foreign language. Someone is keen to get better qualification, a better job. They will learn more foreign languages ​​to increase their self-worth. For example, a foreign language certificate like IELTS.


In conclusion, each person has their own purpose to study foreign languages. However, you should know the reason you study learn a new language so that you would easily acquire it.]]> 2022-05-26 13:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2200875182 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2205977020 Đề: There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company.Some believe that money is the main reason.Do you agree or disagree?

A group of people argue that employees stay for a long period with the same organisation due to the monetary benefits, while others say that there could be other factors as well. This essay disagrees with that statement, as people might stay due to the favourable work environment and the flexibility at work.


The most important reason people stay at the same company is it is supportive at work. In other words, when employees are satisfied with their managers and colleagues at work. They will feel comfortable and safe. because they know they will have support when they need it, this increases a sense of security so they will stay at the company. For example, A survey conducted at The Apple Inc., for 5 consecutive years, they found that employees who are satisfied with their manager and co-workers are most likely to stay at the company.

Another reason is the policies and facilities provided. Employees will consider monetary benefits and consider other benefits such as time off work, health insurance, working from home, and flexible working hours. When an employee is only paid an extra salary without additional support in terms of health assurance holiday cover. They will feel that they have a loss of personal interests. For example, my friend is working for Momo. My friend got a raise according to the time he worked. But the company does not allow employees to work from home and does not have a shuttle to pick up employees.

In conclusion, The element of working relationship between managers, employees, facilities and policies is provided by the company. which plays an important role.

]]> 2022-05-31 12:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2205977020 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2212257637 It was  (be) a rainy day of November.
We were comming  (come) from school at 2 o'clock.
We weren’t  (not be) very hungry but we were (be) too cold.
While we were walking (walk) with my umbrella, we finded (find) a coin.
It wasn’t  (not be) a normal coin, it was  (be) a strange coin.
We did not continue  (not continue) walking.
We were  (be) a bit nervous.
What should we do? Maybe, we were having to  (have) put the coin where we finded  (find) it.
We did  (do) this.
We were walking  (walk) on the street, when a tall man asked (ask) us for the coin.
We  told (tell) him that the coin was (be) at the beginning of the street.
We knew  (know) what happened (happen), so we  continued  (continue) walking.]]> 2022-06-06 14:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2212257637 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2213467507 One of the most challenging problems of today's society is who should pay for the old generation after they retired. Some think that government have to pay for them while other said that they have to stay with their families to look after them.

Firstly, The person who works his whole life and pays taxes to the government. That has also become some efforts in the development of country after doing this all they need some benefits from the government. For example pensions medical benefits or free old age homes if they need.

On the other hand, The person who did hard work in his life to maintain the family. For example, both husband and wife work to buy a house and then they send their children to schools, colleges or universities for a bright future. All the expenses are paid for by the parents. So, they only need that their children look after them in their old age or after their retirement.

Mostly people cannot live without their children. For example, the person who lives in an old age home is not feel good compared to a person who lives in a family.

In conclusion, I believe that old people can stay with their families and family have to pay for them.]]> 2022-06-07 11:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2213467507 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2218511495 In various countries, children are paid to do some work. A group of people do not accept this fact while others claim that it helps children to get/gain important experience for the future. This essay will discuss two viewpoints and show my way of thinking in the upcoming paragraph.

 On the one hand, many people think that if the children are engaged in some kind of work, they will not be lazy and learn a lot in life.  They will also see difficult moments in life as their parents suffer, with what difficulty they earn money.  In addition, they will have experience in the future, and support their personal development among the working people.
  On the other hand, others think that this is completely wrong because every young person must be educated at school on time.  Work prevents them from learning, doing in time for additional classes, and doing homework.  This will not give them a chance to learn something new. 
In my opinion, working alongside studying can help youngsters gain many skills such as teamwork, the responsibility of completing a task, and experience, and it can also provide you apprentice environment in the field you would like to work in.

 To conclude, it is true that children are getting paid for some works nowadays. Although if children study hard they will reach many achievements in their life in the future, I still argue that working experience is more beneficial for the young generation in the long term. 


]]> 2022-06-12 11:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2218511495 cao01688212549 https://padlet.com/cao01688212549/Bookmarks/wish/2221471117 The issue of whether children should engage in paid work during studies is a matter of concern for many guardians. Critics argue that children earning money at a young age can harm education, however others and I believe the opposite. This essay will discuss both views by using examples from Oxford University study 2020 and the Bupa Employment survey 2019.  

On one hand, many believe when children start getting involved in other activities such as a job, this harms their schoolwork.  For example, a study done in 2020 by Oxford University found that 76% of young people in positions of employment had 15. 5 % lower grades than children who are not involved in any work. Based on these results, it can be said that children who are only fixated on studying tend to get higher marks in contrast to youngsters who have jobs. So if children just focused on school learning and not on paid work they will increase their grade percentile in school. 

On the other hand, youngsters are encouraged to work, gain experience and learn a new set of skills. As many job employment agencies hire someone with experience and not just academics. For example, a Bupa Employment survey done in 2019, found that children who started working early were more likely to be hired and additionally, 45% were in high-rank positions at work in the future compared to children who had no work experience. Based on this report, it can be said that working alongside studying is a vital component of development and guardians should get kids in some kind of paid-work weekly. 

In my opinion, working alongside studying can help youngsters gain many skills such as teamwork, the responsibility of completing a task, and experience, and it can also prep you in what field you would like to work in.  

To conclude from the aforementioned arguments, though working at a young age has benefits such as work experience, it also has drawbacks, like lower class grades. Hence, youngsters and parents should be cautious about how many hours of paid work should be done to keep the balance between education and other activities.



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