https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo Spend 10 minutes independently reading 2+ examples. Add to our Padlet: Notice, Like, ? (Don't forget your name on your post!) en-us 2020-09-03 18:45:19 UTC 2020-09-03 22:28:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719406187 They are not long responses ]]> 2020-09-03 20:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719406187 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719406797 They are pretty to the point.]]> 2020-09-03 20:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719406797 okelani_gainous https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407030 2020-09-03 20:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407030 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407144 Conflicting feelings,
Using a hook
Descriptive language
Finding harmony through struggle
Nuanced opinions
Rejecting dialectics

]]> 2020-09-03 20:22:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407144 julienne_madriaga https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407797 A little longer than the UC answers, but still has descriptive language and is fairly simple]]> 2020-09-03 20:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407797 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407977 I like how someone used religion/science and used it as an personal statement for college]]> 2020-09-03 20:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719407977 marcus_zelidon https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719409394 The growth of their story.
From the simple idea of a child to being the dream career and passion as a adult]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719409394 michael_perez6 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719409894 i liked listening to all the peoples experience and story's]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719409894 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410095 i like how one of them talked about their experience working with animals]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410095 emmely_benitez https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410288 I like that the guy has a love for animals and doesn't mind dealing with them. He was patience. ]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410288 paloma_gamez1 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410331 I like how they are interesting and are actually about themselves, personal.]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410331 okelani_gainous https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410677 reading #7 i noticed that you could write about a more niche interest or  emotionally impactful experience which could really show who you are]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410677 fidel_moncada https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410721 I wonder how high school life was like as for a 12 year old. Socially and academically. ]]> 2020-09-03 20:23:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719410721 angelica_h_moscoso https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719412071 I like how they present their hardships that they had to go through, but they learn that they have choice to do something for themselves.]]> 2020-09-03 20:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719412071 julienne_madriaga https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719412689 I like how some used days as plot points in their answers. A new day was another paragraph and it was like marking a log]]> 2020-09-03 20:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719412689 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719413560 A lot of information about themselves, showing vulnerability.]]> 2020-09-03 20:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719413560 jessika_hernandez1 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719415249 A lot of info about the people]]> 2020-09-03 20:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719415249 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719415835 I felt hot, my heart quickened, tense with aprehension

]]> 2020-09-03 20:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719415835 lulu_newsome https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719416433 I like how people talked about their childhood.]]> 2020-09-03 20:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719416433 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719418095 I like how the people talked about how they grew from their struggles

]]> 2020-09-03 20:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719418095 gabriel_duran https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719421718 2020-09-03 20:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719421718 darrian_mankin_davis https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719601237 I like how they connected their interests with their passion for writing. it was also enjoyable because it was relatable habit that i have too. ]]> 2020-09-03 22:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719601237 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719601637 I noticed that they talk about what issues they went through in they’re life ]]> 2020-09-03 22:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719601637 rafael_campos https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602034 I noticed how they talked about important things personal thoughts]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602034 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602463 They went in depth on the topic and connected it to themselves ]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602463 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602704 I wonder how far is too far? Can you be too personal in your personal statement, how can you tell if or when you have crossed that line?]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602704 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602729 2020-09-03 22:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719602729 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603198 I notice that in the one I read not only is he telling his own interests he's also going through struggle he had and how he learned from that struggle.]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603198 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603238 They used sensory details]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603238 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603256 I noticed how they would talk about where they came from and their background.]]> 2020-09-03 22:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603256 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603406 I like how they went into depth ]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603406 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603582 2020-09-03 22:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603582 mahmoud_attia https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603717 i notice thy are using sensory details]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603717 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603763 it's has a purpose ]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603763 duaa_attia https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603835 I notice they talk a lot about how they feel]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719603835 mahmoud_attia https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604050 i like how they use detail]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604050 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604273 I liked how they talked about their life and struggles and grew from it.]]> 2020-09-03 22:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604273 https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604619 I wonder how it feels to switch from one school to another school [?]]]> 2020-09-03 22:23:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719604619 calvianna_davis https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719606266 2020-09-03 22:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719606266 deirdre_obrien https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719608332 I notice that they all have a sort of hook, bringing the reader into the part of the writer's life that is being explained. theyre written like short stories]]> 2020-09-03 22:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jgerosa/kz0sg7rcapcrw3oo/wish/719608332