https://padlet.com/26jmartinez/kxt6xx1vfqva Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:53:06 UTC 2019-12-06 16:13:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f970.png 26skhurram https://padlet.com/26jmartinez/kxt6xx1vfqva/wish/420835023 I really liked how you described the color of her eyes when she was crying like you first said that her chocolatey eyes were seen after the wind blew her hair out of her face than in the next sentence you said how her eyes turned red after crying. I also really like how you described how Valentina can see the view of the ocean and how you described how the water looked like through the black tinted window of her bedroom and how you said the water was crystal clear. I really wish that you could use the peoples names more instead of saying she so much for example in the first paragraph instead of saying she every time you could use her name but still use she, but not after like every sentence.  ]]> 2019-12-06 16:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/26jmartinez/kxt6xx1vfqva/wish/420835023