https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86 Provide some feedback... en-us 2018-02-15 18:26:53 UTC 2025-10-12 16:49:41 UTC hello@padlet.com crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232385359 'Nothing' and 'What' is not based on criteria]]> 2018-02-16 15:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232385359 vanessa_menendez https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386014 2018-02-16 15:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386014 crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386163 Be more specific. Which part is neat? Organized?]]> 2018-02-16 15:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386163 michelle_thompson1 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386271 What is very clear? How is it well organised? ]]> 2018-02-16 15:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386271 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386487 2018-02-16 15:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386487 crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386760 Good Job! not specific enough.]]> 2018-02-16 15:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386760 celia_mcmenamin https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386956 Great - how does that relate back to the criteria that you set? It is not specific enough. It doesn't let the student know what part of their work met the success criteria]]> 2018-02-16 15:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386956 crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386995 Lots of positive feedback!]]> 2018-02-16 15:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232386995 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387014 Helpful comment because it gives a specific goal for improvement]]> 2018-02-16 15:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387014 shaz_tyndale https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387108 Details using success criteria is needed in feedback. One word or phrase is open to interpretation and not enough for individual improvement.
For example, there is evidence that this work represents the use of a ruler and protractor. Conclusion is determined via several practice triangles. Suggestion: explain thinking by using a step by step process to indicate learning.]]> 2018-02-16 15:56:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387108 crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387321 More focus on specific next steps.]]> 2018-02-16 15:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387321 melissa_hennin https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387329 Cool? There is no reference to the success criteria. This feedback is not very descriptive. Feedback that I would give would refer to the learning goal. For example: You written answer effectively refers to the question using specific math vocabulary like "opposing angles". ]]> 2018-02-16 15:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387329 joseph_reilly1 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387458 What the heck are we supposed to do?

]]> 2018-02-16 15:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387458 sherry_mckee_freeman https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387537 Be more specific, there are already 6 types of triangles labelled with angle charts. What else would you like to see?]]> 2018-02-16 15:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387537 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387760

Encouraging feedback but it would be nice to be more specific. Great what?

]]> 2018-02-16 15:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387760 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387948 2018-02-16 15:58:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232387948 bethany_pye https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388018 What part does not make sense? Is there something specific they can do? (e.g. diagrams, labels)]]> 2018-02-16 15:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388018 holly_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388162 2018-02-16 15:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388162 sophie_leger https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388206 How do you know the work is "finished"? Be more specific in your feedback. How do you know it is the "right answer"?


]]> 2018-02-16 15:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388206 vanessa_menendez https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388468 2018-02-16 15:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388468 crissy_taylor https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388540 specific example "needs color because can't see shapes']]> 2018-02-16 15:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388540 mark_holowka https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388603 2018-02-16 15:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388603 lorna_thomas https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388704 2018-02-16 15:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232388704 michelle_thompson1 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389010 How is this related to success criteria?]]> 2018-02-16 16:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389010 celia_mcmenamin https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389025 Very specific feedback. Lets the student know what they can do to improve their work. ]]> 2018-02-16 16:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389025 https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389652 2018-02-16 16:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232389652 melissa_hennin https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232390098 This is a good example of descriptive feedback.  It refers to the question and the learning goal and provides a clear next step to improve the work.]]> 2018-02-16 16:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232390098 johnm_spence https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232391456 2018-02-16 16:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232391456 shaz_tyndale https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232392092 2018-02-16 16:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_holowka/kwsacsj83c86/wish/232392092