Narrative Writing Grading by Nupur Sethi https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14 1)What grade did you and your partner agree on for Katie's narrative writing? 2) What convinced if you changed the grade and why did you give her that grade? en-us 2016-11-02 15:38:57 UTC 2016-11-02 17:31:50 UTC hello@padlet.com Karis #10 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826456 I gave a 4 on Katie's writing because she had really good dialogue and descriptive words. She had good organization because the events were in chronological order. She also used a little figurative language which was a nice addition.]]> 2016-11-02 15:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826456 Annika #21 20annikrios https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826463 I gave a 4 on Katie's writing. At first I gave her a  -4 because her writing style seemed weird to me. But then Karis convinced me that it was a good writing style  that captivated the reader. Like in the first page the reader didn't know who Lucy was so the reader wants to know.]]> 2016-11-02 15:49:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826463 Kaelyn #14 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826916 I gave Katie a 3+ because, I dont think the story was detailed enough to deserve a 4. She used some good and complicated words that bring the story to life. Eugene and I actually agreed on something. For once]]> 2016-11-02 15:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134826916 Ethan-28 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827125 I  gave the narrative writing  a 4-3 Because ]]> 2016-11-02 15:51:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827125 Mia #4 20miaborg https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827334 I gave Katie a 3 because she used dialogue and focused and generally maintained throughout. She also used good detail words. ]]> 2016-11-02 15:51:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827334 Will 25# https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827605 SHE WROTE TO MANY PEIRIODS SO A 0 AND SHE WENT THROUGH SCHOOL IN ONE SENTENCE

]]> 2016-11-02 15:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827605 Evan Chiao #7 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827620 I gave Katie a 4. She had a lot of good dialogue and also the events were in order. She had descriptive words.  ]]> 2016-11-02 15:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827620 Christian 32 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827756 I gave her a 3 because of the  Dr . Malden/Dr. Walden mistake on page 3 and the fact that she did not use many vocabulary words

]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827756 Geno/Eugene 27 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827786 I give her a 3. I gave her she did not have good punctution. But she had good detail.]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827786 Jennifer #11 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827797 I gave katie a 3 because she stayed on track, she had no run on sentences but she didn't have that much details.Also toju didn't change my mind because he was just telling us that it should be a 4 because she didn't have that many mistakes but it still didn't change my mind.

]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827797 Eneko#22 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827865 I argued to fight for a 3+ because she use words like hyper and she uses good dialog.   ]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827865 Ashton # https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827928 I gave her a 3 because I got say this it was  a grade level writing also Mia told me  that she had 11 mistakes  and I would know that is not above grade level.Also she if she only had like 1 mistake I would gave her a 4 but she had 11 and that's a lot of mistakes.]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827928 Isaac #26 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827965 I gave Katie's writing a  4 - at first because she ]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134827965 Toju-16 20toritmaku https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828143 I would give her a 4 because even though she made a silly mistake, she had good
 
]]> 2016-11-02 15:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828143 Sebastien #15 20sebasleve https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828235
I gave Katie a 2, because she had run off sentences that turned into paragraphs. She  didn't have go sentence structure along with not too many vocab. words. Katie also got confused by Dr. Walden and Dr. Mallden.]]> 2016-11-02 15:54:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828235 Haley3 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828332 2016-11-02 15:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828332 Jose https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828393 I GAVE here A 3 and c- 
because she didn't have a plot. And she focused on to many people.


]]> 2016-11-02 15:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828393 Aresema #1 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828460 I gave Katie a 4 because she had good details. She had messed up a couple of times but she still deserves a 4 ]]> 2016-11-02 15:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828460 Elias #12 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828504 I gave her a 2 and 1 thing from the 3 box she had to many ...s in the first paragraph and she put two doctors names Dr. Walden and Dr. Mallden Iwas ]]> 2016-11-02 15:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828504 Nate #25 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828611 I gave Katie 2 I argued with my partner to give her a two because he said that she had good supporting reasons I argued ]]> 2016-11-02 15:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828611 coty  6 20cotycars https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828825 2+]]> 2016-11-02 15:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828825 Maria # 18  https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828873 I gave her a 3 because it was good writing but she needed more detail .]]> 2016-11-02 15:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134828873 Madeline #8 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134829037 I gave katie a 3 because she did not have any transition words. She also had bad punuation.]]> 2016-11-02 15:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134829037 Trinity # : ) 5 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134829970 I gave Katie a 2 because it wasn't as ]]> 2016-11-02 15:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134829970 coty 20cotycars https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134830126 2+  gave her that

]]> 2016-11-02 15:58:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134830126 Haley #3 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134830217 I gave her a 2. I would have gave her a 3 but the second parigraph ]]> 2016-11-02 15:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134830217 Dhatrisri-29 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134831276 I think it was 3 because it seemed to have a lot of good ]]> 2016-11-02 16:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134831276 Trinity #5 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134831448 I gave her a 2 because she didn't get it ]]> 2016-11-02 16:01:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134831448 Savanna#30 https://padlet.com/sethin/kwjgz1073s14/wish/134831606  I think she gets a 3 because she made it real listeck.

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