https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0 ela period 6 en-us 2016-10-05 16:31:44 UTC 2023-01-19 05:54:54 UTC hello@padlet.com 20magiannisl https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/128555642 first essay of the year.]]> 2016-10-05 16:37:22 UTC https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/128555642 20magiannisl https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/128556384 The hitchhikers guide to the galaxy essay was overall a good essay with good vocabulary with clear transitions. Grammar usage in the essay was good but not the best. The thesis was clear but could have been better. The analysis section needs to improve and connect more to the main ideas of the essay. The most important thing that needs to improve is the analysis and connecting it with the thesis. The writing style of my essay wasn't that engaging or enthusiastic as it could have been. The fact that the essay was timed also had an impact on my essay, I tried to focus on getting all my information down rather than taking my time and producing a solid piece. ]]> 2016-10-05 16:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/128556384 20magiannisl https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/129186875 In the proficient section I got checks in evidence, organization, use of language, and grammar and mechanics. In needs improvement I got two checks one in Thesis and Purpose and analysis. My overall grade was an 83%]]> 2016-10-07 16:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/129186875 20magiannisl https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/129188132 2016-10-07 16:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/20magiannisl/kw3f15l1zii0/wish/129188132