https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-10-04 14:47:53 UTC 2021-12-02 19:35:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f47a.png https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1796868049 First of all, your price is absolutely amazing. I also play video games too. Second, I like it when your favorite sport soccer Believe it or not, I play soccer too. I wish you can explain what video games you like. It will get me to know you better.]]> 2021-10-06 15:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1796868049 https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1796991306 Something I liked was how your introduction went right into the about me intro. It was very entertaining and informative. I like how you said welcome agents to the vault of valuable. In addition I also like your title and picture. Mostly I liked it because your pictures matched in with your title it made the piece look professional and easy to read.Although I wish that you had elaborated on what video games you liked and why but in all your piece was really  good.]]> 2021-10-06 15:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1796991306 28abonavitacola https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800106737 Reilly liked how you put the story together and it was fun to read you spend time making it fun and telling us about you the details were good and I like a lot of things in your about me writing peace. I feel like you could add more details into your story and some parts I liked and some parts I did not like I hope and wish you good luck Angelo ]]> 2021-10-07 14:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800106737 28abonavitacola https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800120818 E

]]> 2021-10-07 15:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800120818 28cblank1 https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800204179   I am agent Cooper and came here to write about your file. I liked how you made it the agent theme like the boss told you. I also like how you talked about the things you enjoy like the chicken wing song and I’ll beat you Even though you're in a basement. I enjoyed it but that was not the only reason I came here to talk about what you should add. Well, I guess I’ll add just one to make the boss happy. You should describe more of this file to the readers. Hopefully you see this. This was written by agent Cooper.]]> 2021-10-07 15:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1800204179 28abonavitacola https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925519858 2021-12-02 16:07:12 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925519858 28cblank1 https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925602104 I really enjoyed your writing piece showing how you were going to start driving a bike without wheels, this was fantastic from you saying your riding past houses as if it were a bee, then to where you started riding and then fell off your bike. This was Great! I loved how other things like your dad were there with you when you rode the bike, then when you had a moment where you felt like nothing could stop you, but then you fell off your bike. Which is great because this is what is needed to happen when you ride a bike. But I still think you could add a couple things, maybe like punctuation or more story. But still it was great, but the story felt fast like you could add a couple things but it’s alright if you don’t want to, but if you could work on this that would be great. Shalom!]]> 2021-12-02 16:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925602104 28rsingh https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925959741 I really liked that you included lots of descriptive writing in your piece. Another thing I liked was that you added a lot of interesting moments. My one wish it that you added more metaphors.]]> 2021-12-02 19:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/28abonavitacola/kvnpxoufm42c9gls/wish/1925959741