Grade 7 EAL-Free-DW by Staff-ISK Petal Sophia Williams-Campbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9 en-us 2021-01-10 15:33:53 UTC 2021-02-08 05:17:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Abdulrahman: petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145288730 Description 1
All the students are being crazy with the  acting, they will destroy the class.




Description 2
The loudly classroom was dancing like an elephant dancer on the stage, the class was bouncing up and down, what is going on.The class looked wobble like dirty ben full of     





WWW: he did really good at personification and simile but he didn't mention what the kids were doing


EBI:


]]> 2021-01-31 12:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145288730 Sara petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145302880 Description 1

The kids are happy and having fun and become crazy and playing and making a mess





Description 2

The door went BANG!! and kids started screaming and making paper planes whoosh whoosh flayed paper planes all over the place the class was a mess and it smelled like sweaty kids ahhhhhh kids were under the table and on top of the table suddenly the door opened wide and there stood the principal stood quietly everyone  





WWW: she used Onomatopoeia in a good way


EBI: don't forget the full stop at the end.


]]> 2021-01-31 12:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145302880 Rashed petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145305374 Description 1
Something is gone something important to someone.






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]]> 2021-01-31 12:16:36 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145305374 Abdulla petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145306881 Description 1
The mr is out and they are playing










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]]> 2021-01-31 12:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145306881 Mouza petalcampbell https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145310476 Description 1
They are throwing paper at each other and jumping and screaming.





Description 2
The door opened bang there was children screaming and jumping  like they were animals from the jungle. In front of the students desks sat the teachers desk without a teacher.


WWW: Good use of onomatopoeia and metaphor.


EBI: Needed to find own examples and not use example from teacher's description.
]]> 2021-01-31 12:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1145310476 alghalla https://padlet.com/petalcampbell/kvcpy2x85xpn9qq9/wish/1175115628 description 1
It's a very chaotic class and it has students everywhere

description 2 
It's a very noisy class with hectic kids everywhere racing.








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