https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg Made with whimsy en-us 2017-11-06 09:50:22 UTC 2017-12-14 10:56:06 UTC hello@padlet.com amynelson_x https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203817886 George 

]]> 2017-11-06 11:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203817886 amynelson_x https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203823362
i like the part of when she is getting ready in the morning, its simple but i think it could look really effective. i also think you could imporve on the arrest bit, as it seems quite rushed. the language used well, and I think the swearing will appeal to the main target audince. ]]> 2017-11-06 11:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203823362 amynelson_x https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203829697 2017-11-06 12:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/203829697 amynelson_x https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/204254350 the script is good and the story is original and interesting, maybe a slight amount of background inforamtion in the dialoge woud be good an and describing what the sets look like.  ]]> 2017-11-07 09:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/204254350 https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216094586 i really like the style of programme it is and i would most defiantly watch it. although i think the script is very rushed and that you should focus more on Kate and her character. this would improve it massivly. 

]]> 2017-12-14 10:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216094586 https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216098123 good script, bit dragged out though 

]]> 2017-12-14 10:47:53 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216098123 https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216099796 really like the script, think its flows well, although the ending is a bit weak, i think you could do more to make it sound better]]> 2017-12-14 10:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amynelson_x/kv3hy642pkg/wish/216099796