https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm Which Exemplars did you analyze and what did the author do well? 3 total en-us 2018-04-18 12:50:05 UTC 2018-04-18 13:59:20 UTC hello@padlet.com meghan_jenson https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252989511 #5-- This author used a clear claim, they gave great reasons, and used awesome transitions. 

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#2--]]> 2018-04-18 13:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252989511 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252991786 #1) Clear claim awesome transition they connected really well great examples and a phenomenon conclusion. 

#7) Good transitions an alright claim. didn't really see the connection.

#9) Great Claim. okay transitions, connected really well and an awesome conclusion. 
   

]]> 2018-04-18 13:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252991786 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992104 #4 This author gave a great description of how Walter was like at first and how he was such a scared and timid boy at the beginning of the movie, later improving to be a outgoing and energetic young man, and had a great, appropriate claim 

#7 This author gave a great example of coming of age, using a claim that clearly states this

#5 This author gave a great claim, they had a right amount of examples and clearly stated everything.]]> 2018-04-18 13:44:42 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992104 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992286 #3--This author used a clean, clear claim. They have used great transition words. This author has a great conclusion. This author has great examples and explains they very well. 



#5-- This author has a great claim. They have great examples and they explain well.



#7-- This author used  great  transition. this author has a good claim. this author has a great example of coming if age ]]> 2018-04-18 13:44:59 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992286 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992414 #1-  This author gave great transitions, facts, and had an excellent conclusion. 

#8-  they gave a clear claim, good transitions, and good facts,

#2- they give good examples, and transitions. ]]> 2018-04-18 13:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992414 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992437 #1- This person had a good claim and gave reasons to support his/her claim. They finished with a good conclusion statement.


#2- Good claim, good reasons to support his/her claim. Should not have used the opinion statements.


#4- Claim is well written with good reasons to support the claim followed by a well written conclusion.]]> 2018-04-18 13:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992437 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992449 #3-- This author used a clear claim, they used great transition words, they had good examples to support their claim, and they had a appropriate conclusion. 

#5-- This author had a clear claim, they had good reasons and examples, and they had a good conclusion. 

#2-- This author has a good claim, they give some good examples, and they have some good transition words. ]]> 2018-04-18 13:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992449 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992476 #9- This author used a clear claim, great reasons and examples and had a awesome conclusion 

#5- Used awesome transitions and gave a clear claim and good examples and a great conclusion

#7- Had clear reasons and examples and gave a good claim and had a good conclusion  ]]> 2018-04-18 13:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992476 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992512 #9-- this author uses a lot of examples and transition words

#8-- this author has a good intro and a good conclusion and he states a lot of claims ]]> 2018-04-18 13:45:23 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992512 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992882 #5- the author had clear writing.

#2- they showed great examples.]]> 2018-04-18 13:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252992882 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252993067 #5-This person explained good traits and had good claims

#3-This person shows great claims and great transitions

]]> 2018-04-18 13:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252993067 https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252993219 #8- This author used good transitions but no comas. Also, their conclusion was good.
#7- Again good transitions and good claim.
#3- Good claim, and great examples]]> 2018-04-18 13:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/meghan_jenson/kuoreyvih8sm/wish/252993219