Improving Sentences by https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2 How many different ways can you improve my sentences? You could start your own post with a simple sentence for other people to improve too. en-us 2025-01-07 18:28:03 UTC 2025-01-09 16:13:07 UTC hello@padlet.com Instructions MrsSmithSycamore https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282834840 Read the sentence at the top of the box.

In the comments, write your improved sentence.

Add your first name to the comment so I can see who is writing and award house points!


Remember :

  • Try to improve the sentence in more than one way.

  • Use correct punctuation.

]]> 2025-01-07 18:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282834840 He ran up the hill. MrsSmithSycamore https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282839325 2025-01-07 18:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282839325 The bird flew. MrsSmithSycamore https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282840342 2025-01-07 18:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282840342 The game was good. MrsSmithSycamore https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282841509 2025-01-07 18:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3282841509 House Points go to: MrsSmithSycamore https://padlet.com/MrsSmithSycamore/ktk6fei632vylwo2/wish/3283711624 Amelia

Jacob

Albert

Freddie

Eloise

Beau

Arthur S

Noah

Joseph

Arthur C

Maddie

Benny

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