Short Story Planning by Vasthy Lamadrid

Ms.Lamadrid's example

lamadridclassroom — 2020-10-05 05:25:32 UTC

Plan for our short story.

My Topic:

Setting:

Problem/ Conflict

Events:

First
Middle
End

Solution:

Characters:

Daniel Hernandez

807871 — 2020-10-05 14:46:35 UTC

My Topic: Is about a school bully and helping the kid that gets bully.

Setting: School

Problem/ Conflict:

Events:

First
Middle
End

Solution:

Characters: Group of friends

Janely .Lugo

804071 — 2020-10-05 14:47:25 UTC

Plan for our short story.

My Topic: Is about how I struggle with my now dog I can't sleep because he cry I got him on satrday.

Setting: It is at my house.

Problem/ Conflict: The Problem is that I have a now dog but win we go to sleep we can't because the dog what to run around but we don't what him to run around because win we wake up were going to step on poop and pee that the Problem.

Events: I got the dog on Saterday.

First: The day we got him he was scerad to play and win my dad came we went too go get his. first shot but my mom has to do it she has to pok him but we hvent because. were suupost to what for 2 week and he has to get 5 shots and im scerd but ya.

Middle:

End:

Solution: I have not salvd it but I think that we are going to do some think hop it works.

Characters: The Characters are me Janely and my dog name Roque.

louis

810513 — 2020-10-05 14:50:59 UTC

plan for short story

my topic anime

settings japan

Problem/ Conflict a kid with no powers

events gets power from some

first a boy named midorya had no powers. but every one else did. one day this guy named all might. gave him powers. he had to train a lot.
middle that boy had a power. now it was all for. his hero name was deku.he had to go to the nears
end he got his hero lisens. he can use only 7%. of his powers to not brake his bones.

Solution: all might

Characters all might deku

yurem

807307 — 2020-10-05 14:51:40 UTC

plan for short story

my topic: scary mystery

setting: forest, police staction, a bot

problem/ colflict

events: a group of kids went into a scary house

first:
middle:
last:

Roque

8105181 — 2020-10-05 14:51:44 UTC

Plan for your short story.
My topic: Go back to Arizona.
Settings: Island.
Problem/ conflict

First: One day I was in a ship I was going to Mexico in a ship but one thing was wrong in the ship and wen I sleeping I hear something like boom sip soop and I wake up I was with my family in a island.

Middle: I was trying to wake up my mom and dad wen they wake up they scream my mom was crying to much and my dad go to find some food and I was graving some leaves to sleep.

last: Wen was the time to sleep it was so cold but all together we can do we can make antler the impossible.

End: In the second day they pass a helicopter and we scream to much and we do a S.U.S so big with coconuts and they see us and we go back to my houses.

FIN

Alejandra

2020-10-05 14:52:57 UTC

topic an army fights giants

settings village

problem/confilct titans/giants are attacking there village

event they had to do an army to attack the titans/giants to save humanity
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first
Long time ago in the 800 there was a village the village had three walls maria rosa and sina to save the village from the titans/giants. one day it was going good in the village in till the scary thing happend. titan/giant broke in to the wall trying to eat us but everyone ran got hurt many people got ate by a titan. i heard everyone yelling. when I ran I was starting to feel sick then after that I fainted.
middle
When I woke up there was people around me and also I wasnt in my house I was in a random persons house i wonder why there was people around me then i saw there outfits it was the army that killed titans/giants i told them.
eran: what are you guys doing here.
mikasa: we are here because

end

solution

character eran mikasa armin

Sariah Tisnado's short story

Sariah_Tisnado — 2020-10-05 14:54:08 UTC

My topic - some kids discover ghosts on a late night.

Settings - This takes place in a abandoned house, and night time outside.

Problem/Conflict - The problem of my story is why is there noises coming from that abandoned house? The problem is for the kids to solve.

Event - 4 kids come across an abandoned house that been making tons of scary noises. ( I had made a long story of this, but I changed my mind and made a short version. )
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First:
During a nice sleepover around 1 AM there's a group of friends named Noah, Cassidy, Charlotte, and Zack they wanted to go outside while it's dark and the sky is pitch black, expect one didn't want to go outside which was Noah.

Middle:
They all went outside because they all thought it'd be fun, but not Noah. The group of friends come across a abandoned house, the house was making tons of noises like, "S-screech, wooosh". They thought it was just because it's old and teared apart.

End:
They were pushed inside the house by Charlotte, when they were inside it was all very old, no materials, no beds, no anything. Later on they went into separate groups of 2, they didn't plan to do that they just did it randomly. A couple minutes later they would start hearing banging noises, and somebody talking. They all thought it was nothing and carried on exploring the house. But a couple moments later Cassidy, and Zack screamed and ran out the house.

Extra end 2:
Noah and Charlotte were confused, they turned around to find a white figure standing in front of them. They were both calm when they saw it, the white figure said, "Boo." They both just looked at it confused, as it the were not scared. They walked out the house saying nothing.. What a weird day.
[I think the story is kinda long, but hopefully that's fine I'm still practicing]

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Solution - They had to go inside the house in order to figure out what the noise was coming from, it was coming from a ghost.

Characters -
+ Noah, Noah is the character that didn't want to go outside at all. At the end he was apart of the 2 people that weren't scared and just walked out the house like nothing.
+ Charlotte, Charlotte was at the end with Noah walking out the house like nothing either.
+ Zack, Zack was a character that was scared and ran out the house screaming very loud.
+ Cassidy was with Zack, she was also scared so she ran out the house screaming very loud.

-*There was no names in the story told.*-

806220 — 2020-10-05 14:59:30 UTC

My topic: Two best friends get into a fight.

Setting: School

Problem/conflict: They are fighting over something silly but don't realize it.

Events:

First: They walk to school together. They soon share one secret that led to an argument.

Middle: One walks away, and the other says something that triggered them.

End: The next day, they say sorry

Solution: They bump into each other and apologize.

Characters: Emily/ the person telling the story, and Samantha/ Emily's best friend.

806217 — 2020-10-05 15:01:42 UTC

My topic: Games

Setting: At home

Problem/Conflict The problem is that most games a dyeing because their boring.

Events: None

First: The reason most games die because they are no updates. So that means that the games stay the same.
Middle: Most game are die because other games like Among us blew up and keep on growing because people post it on social media.
End: How ever Among us will most likely die like fall guys. A nother reasion games is because they a exclusive to consoles. like fall guys was only on ps4 and pc.
End: It will take longer for Among us to die because it is on mobile and pc. According to the charts the mobile players surpass pc players by 12.9 million players

Solution: Games can have weekly updates like old fortnite

Characters: None

ANTHONY

8103181 — 2020-10-05 15:04:22 UTC

Setting: my house
my topic: haunted house
problem: it is scary and we can't sleep.
events: none
First, one day I was asleep and I heard foot steps coming to me. So I woke up and saw nothing but I still heard the foot steps😑. So I said ''please god protect me'' and I heard my brother screaming. So I rushed over there and saw him crying we were home alone. We forgot my mom went to go get groceries so we were 10 x scared.

Next, But my mom texted me saying they are going to a trip and I said no I hear foot steps in front me but I can't see anyone. And Jayden is screaming so loud and we are both scared😨. So I said fine god will protect and I said to my brother "believe on god😇'' he said ok so we just fell back asleep. So the next morning we woke up we went down stairs and we ate and we went upstairs and called the cops so we can be protected👮‍♂️. So we were so scared so we went shopping and the scary ness got out.
conclusion I hope you guys like my story it is spooky 👻.

Mauricio

8104721 — 2020-10-05 15:05:37 UTC

My topic: games
setting home
problem a boy dont want
first in a house a mom go to buy a xbox

edson

8041071 — 2020-10-05 15:12:57 UTC

setting at my house

Azariah

810974 — 2020-10-05 16:16:43 UTC

Setting: how I swiched school to this school to sheely farms

my topic switched school

problem why i switched school sad and happy

events none

First my mom told me and sibling we are switched school we said when she said around in feb or next month. We said okay I told my friends I was moving soon they say noooooooo why you are really moving. then I was doing basketball around this time sometimes we won sometimes we don't. Some of them know some do not know like my friends in my classroom. i was living with my granma for a while then I lived with my mom and my lil sis.

middle: next I told my friends I 'm leaving next week but I do not know when
they said okay. at practice make some layups play games we had to run around the filed 4 or 3 or 2 times if we don't listen or help or for fun. we did some streaches excirse we get tired we get of at 3: 30 . i went one my filed trip it was so fun we went to a museum.

end: theni i played after school ending i went basketball to my basketball we were so close winning. i made some shots like 2 or 1 my coach was so proud of me. i played number 1 or 2 or 4 becasue i'm good at thouse. basketball game ending it was my last day it was so sad becasue. i really love basketball my friend game me so ething so i can rember them i said bye i ate mcdonlda sanwhich. next day it was my last day of school school end it i said bye i pack all my stuff. my best friend cryied becasue i was leaving and almost criend then said bye to all of my best friend i know one for long time. i said bye to everone i went to my mom i said bye to my grandma i still vist.

so yeah this is a story swiched school

i will miss you basketball team i will miss yu chaparral elmentry school

solution
they give me some golden paws so I can remeber them so I won't for got them and one of my basketball team. gave me a picture its said I hope you will be playing basketball for your hole life and remeber me and my team mates.

characters my friends at my old school family

Jackie

804207 — 2020-10-05 16:17:35 UTC

Topic: How I found my bestfriend

Setting: Park

Problem: The puppy needed a home and I couldn't keep it

event: Can't spoil the story

First, It was a long day I had nothing to do. So I decided to go on a walk to the park and back. When I went to the park I was this box it said free? Hmm I said I wonder what's in here. I went closer is that a puppy I said. It was I went and took it out it was nice sweet puppy. I want to take it home so I did. I knew my mom would say no but it needed a home. So I took it home without my mom knowing there was a doing in our house. I had a little sister named Bella and my little brother named Noah. They always come to my room so I had to find a way to keep they out.
Middle, If I lock my door Noah and Bella will tell my mom Gracie, Gracie is my mom's name. My mom wouldn't care but she had to act like she did because my brother and sister would start to cry because they will say it unfair. Then I got home I went to my room and locked my door I saw Noah. He started knocking and bothering me. I yelled at him to tell him that I am changing. Of course he started to cry and told my mom. I had to hide the dog and go tell her. She told Noah to leave me alone and that I keep the door lock if I want to. He got mad but go over it even if it took him hours to. Then my mom came in my room when I was playing with the dog! She was so shock she told me to put it back outside but I didn't want to.

End, I begged and begged until she said yes. It took me some weeks. She said that I can show her how I will take care of the dog. After so weeks she said fine we can keep her. We were all so happy. I named her Luna and I still have her till this day. I did everything with her went to the store with her played with her. Have the best time with her she always made my day. My mom ended up loving her always buying her things. Its crazy how she was a homeless dog and now she has the best life. I don't know what I would of done with out her. I don't think I ever told you my name my name is Ava.

solution: To keep on begging and begging and to show them that you can do it.

characters Gracie ,Noah, Bella, Ava

Daniel

2020-10-05 16:19:20 UTC

think what your going to do
pre write
Settings-football filled
topic: How we play

Hi this is how we play football. First you call you people. You line up you hike the ball evry body goes we catch the ball you try to tackle or make a touch down. You can get inerception that means that if the other player catches its there ball. Or you can fumble it means that if you drop the ball when your running you can recover the ball or lose the ball.

Charcters Jacob, Jeramia And Daniel

8095021 — 2020-10-05 16:20:07 UTC

My Topic: Ghosts story

Setting: Dark house/3am

Problem/ Conflict: A "Ghost"

Events: I will not spoil the story right here

First: There where three friends in a dark house at 3am. They where telling ghost stories. Then the one named Sariah went to go get snacks.
Middle: Then Matthew said "Sariah has been gone for a while." Then Estella heard a weird noise!
End: Then the door opened and they saw the lady from The Ring. They screamed but the lady also screamed because... It was there friend the whole time! Her hair was just covering her face.

Solution: Matthew and Estella scream

Characters: Sariah, Matthew, Estella

Makayla

8058552 — 2020-10-05 17:11:08 UTC

My topic- How I met somebody I never saw again

Setting: Friendship park (I believe)

Problem/ Conflict: Somebody I met but never saw again.

Events: Not spoiling

First: One day my mom drives me over to her friends house. (Fast foward we get in the car and she has a really annoying son and he had to sit in the back with me.) We get to Friendship park and I start playing on this really fun ride but I had to get pushed for it to go faster. I met this one group and they were really cool so I started hanging out and playing with them.

Middle: Later on, I met this one girl and we started playing and talking together. She seemed really nice so I thought she wanted to become my friend or something. We played in the area and her mom had called her name telling her that we need to go. She told me bye and gave me a hug. She told me that hopefully we could see each other again.

End: She walked off waving bye to me. I never knew this would be my last time seeing her, I thought she would probably come back the next day but I didn't know that for sure.

Solution: There is currently no solution for this story but what I could have done (which I didn't think about during that time.) was got her number or something so we can plan when we are going again.

Characters: Me, Mom, Mom's friend, The girl.

Ileessa

8060921 — 2020-10-05 17:42:39 UTC

My topic - My first volleyball game.

My setting - Volleyball court.

Problem - first game in six months.

Events - great game.

Angelita

2020-10-05 17:43:20 UTC

My topic: A secret in the town
Setting: In a town in the middle of no where and a old looking house.
problem- To under stand what these spirts need from the main character.
events- Coming to a new town into a new house.
begging- A family comes to a strange town that's miles away from other places.
Going to there new house one of the children are not excited at all

how i found the sadist thing happend to me i was born to early that i was born with heart problems i couldnt breath and they rushed me and after i was fine i think it was 2018 or 2019 i was in 3rd grade it i got out in a warm shower my heart was beating fast and i was shaking and they said i had asthma but my mom told them a story i told u she told them and they said probly anxiety or somthing else i had a breathing treatment now im fine but i still panic have anxiity with my heart so im done ty

2020-10-05 17:44:11 UTC

Amaiyah's short story

809245 — 2020-10-05 17:45:01 UTC

Plan for my short story.

My Topic: Happiness👌😊😀🥰

Setting: my house

Problem/ Conflict : people will not stay happy and get along.

Events: There was a sleepover

1. Your kids will get a chance to practice the manners you teach – it’s no good if they don’t, right?
2. Your kids will get to do and try different things – food, games, travel, etc. they may not otherwise, which is all part of making it a treat, yes? If it’s good for you, why isn’t it good for them??
3. Your kids will make new friends, and so will you, if you behave yourself.
4. Your kids will get to learn social boundaries and custom – how to behave in someone else’s house, car, etc. is different than behaving at home – and they only way to learn that is “on the road”.
5. You and your kids will have a chance to unwind and relax, away from the constant attention of each other.
6. You and your kids will be on the path of mutual trust, which has to start early.
7. Your kids will HAVE FUN. That’s what’s its about. THEM HAVING FUN.

*** And a summary of the “No Sleepover” points, by CR Moewes ***

AAAAAA.. I can’t keep reading that article my head will explode. But to save other people I will summarize the 9 slides

1. Things are different now (so if you did sleep overs and are normal your experience doesn’t invalidate our assumptions)

2. The kids will be too tired the next day from staying up all night. And your house will be dirty…. except that since there was no sleep over (or maybe it’s ok to host one, but then who would come over since you woulnd’t let your kids play with someone whose parents would let them sleep over) how is your house gonna get dirty.

3. Some kids aren’t ready for sleep overs so no one should have sleep overs.

4. You don’t like/trust some parents so you should just not let any sleep overs happen rather than explain to your kids that some things are ok and some things aren’t.

5. This seems like a repeat of #2 but instead of just a sleepy kid you will wind up \\with a stupid kid because one night of sleeping over will leave them so exhausted they will fall behind in their school work.

6. They might watch or hear something that you don’t approve of. Movies, TV, etc. If they are at someone else’s house they may experience something outside the controlled environment you have at home.

7. They might do somehitng else you don’t approve…. i.e. DRUGS!!!! bumbumbuuummmm. Because since you can’t select whose house they sleep over at (see #4, all-or-nothing) you will have to let them sleep over at the neighborhood crack-mamas house and you know what that means.

8. Rape and Molestation… ‘nuf said here.

9. But it’s your call…. if you love your kids, you will not allow any sleep overs, but that’s only if you really love them… like we do our kids, so you decide for yourself.

Solution: always say yes to a sleepover it is fun and can make you really happy

Characters: Me, Rebecca, Ileessa ,

Carlos short story

2020-10-05 17:49:08 UTC

topic bulling
setting school
problem kid getting bullied
events bully being nice
first part of the story
I was walking down the stairs and then i heard the bell ring i rushed and then i went to class the class was calm we learned about hisory then i went to the next class by going there i saw a bully he was saying mean things to the victim i rushed and helped him i said stop the bully laugth was so evil it sound like a cartoon villian was inside him.
middle
i was terrified i rushed to tell the teacher she sent the bully to detention u can see by the bullies eyes he was gonna do something bad i was scared the victim said thank you i said ur welcome then the next day something terrible happened
end te bully punched me i was bleeding i told him listen bully is bad u can hurts someone feeling just because ur angry sometimes u just gotta enjoy life and not waste it on making someone life terrible he stopped he said i... i... im sorry he put me down and then said can we be friends? i replide sure we became friends and evryone was happy THE ENd
solucion bully became a friend charcters
carlos
bully
victim
teacher

Tereso

2020-10-05 17:49:13 UTC

Topic: My First

Setting:

Problem:

Event

Lya

805996 — 2020-10-05 17:57:11 UTC

Topic ~ Being Sad

Setting ~ At Home

Problem ~ I'm Sad Because With All This Going On In The World Right Now.

Short Story~

One Day There Was A Day That On The News They Said That There Was A New Virus Called (COVID-19) Aka (Corona-Virus) A Very Bad Virus I thought Nothing Of It. I Just Thought It Would Go On For A Month BUT... I WAS WRONG IT'S BEEN GOING ON FOR LIKE 1000,0000,0000 YEARS XD :(

Topic: Being Afraid

Rebecca_Jean_Reyes — 2020-10-05 18:46:56 UTC

Setting: Pool Party
Problem: Being embarrassed
Event: Not Spoiling
One Day I was at My friends house (Before Corona Virus) she had a pool.
(Here is the point) It was time to DANCE And I was so scared I hate dancing Or Singing In front of people And there were Lots of People there I was So nervous I ended Up Staying in the pool with My friends But everybody Kept on calling me to dance. There I was Sitting, Everybody Upset Because I wouldn't Dance so I Decided maybe I could dance for 5 seconds and that is ALL. But I did NOT, I made my Final decision So I danced with My friends But In the pool Obviously Listening to Tiktok Songs On Alexa.
Solution: Dance In pool.
Characters: My friends and Me.

Isabella

804997 — 2020-10-05 18:53:34 UTC

Topic~ Being Sad

Setting: Home

Problem:It was my first day of school an i was sad.

When I was in preschool I was 4 years old it was my first day of school and I was nervous because I was new and I didn't know what to do and plus I was scared because I was going to be around people I didn't know. It was terrifying because I was new to school and I was scared that I was gonna get bullied. And I was crying because I didn't wanna leave my mom and my dad. That day when I walked into the classroom I was crying because I was scared and nervous and sad I missed my parents so much but that day it got better but I miss him more and more and in the day I started crying 'cause I missed it what when I walked in there I was crying because I wanted my mom and my dad but I wasn't able to I had to wait till after preschool So what I did was try to listen to the teacher but I didn't because at first I thought it was a stranger because school I've never been to it. My teacher tried calming me down it didn't really work because well I was overwhelmed and I was over thinking like will be come back are they ever gonna come back I was just scared because I was only 4 years old THE END.

Gabriel

2020-10-05 19:30:33 UTC

Topic~ No one lets me do things
Setting~ Home
Problem~ I keep getting stopped when I'm doing something fun

806169 — 2020-10-09 16:08:53 UTC