https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:53:08 UTC 2021-01-08 21:11:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 26slionetti https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/420807321 I loved this story! You got creative and it was very realistic. I like how Opal was scared but now she is not shy anymore because her brother, Kyle, taught her and said “It is ok if you mess up, thats a part of practicing!” I like it because lots of people mess up and give up, but your “quote” is inspiring me not to give up! There should be a sequel to this book! My wish is that you can add a bit more detail. I was able to picture everything perfect, but a few extra details will add a little extra dazzle. Overall, 5 star rating!

]]> 2019-12-06 15:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/420807321 26mlatham https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/422272838 I loved how much your character Opal loved soccer. I can feel her emotions run wild in the story. And her thoughts are shown beautifully. One thing I wish is for you to make some grammar corrections.

]]> 2019-12-10 16:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/422272838 26jsouza https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/1068816764 I like how your story was so serious. It really made me worry about what was going to happen next. I was sitting on the edge of my seat. I also enjoyed how you described how the main character felt a lot. It really helped me understand what the main character was thinking. Maybe you could describe how the other characters were feeling. You really just focused on how the main character felt. You didn’t describe how the other characters reacted.]]> 2021-01-08 21:11:17 UTC https://padlet.com/26jlomonte/kseyyh4bqx7j/wish/1068816764